Happy Child
5-7-5 senryu17 total reviews
Comment from mbagby23
Blessing in deed. A bundle of joy. The smile, the pain that women go though. Yet, in the end it's all worth it. Seeing the child get older and older.
reply by the author on 23-May-2014
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Blessing in deed. A bundle of joy. The smile, the pain that women go though. Yet, in the end it's all worth it. Seeing the child get older and older.
Comment Written 22-May-2014
reply by the author on 23-May-2014
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Thank you for taking the time to review and comment on my poem.
Comment from Bharanee
so much said in only a few verses...
brilliant poem.very vivid and graphic portrayal of the happy child through good choice of adjectives.love it!
the background pic is also in keeping with the poem.
good luck with your contest.god bless.
reply by the author on 22-May-2014
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so much said in only a few verses...
brilliant poem.very vivid and graphic portrayal of the happy child through good choice of adjectives.love it!
the background pic is also in keeping with the poem.
good luck with your contest.god bless.
Comment Written 21-May-2014
reply by the author on 22-May-2014
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Thank you for taking the time to read and review my poem.
Comment from shwetacj
So cute!
Both of them...the poem and the child....
With fewer words, the poet has expressed everything...
Laughing kids always spread joy around them and fill the world with happiness...a blessing of God indeed!
reply by the author on 22-May-2014
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So cute!
Both of them...the poem and the child....
With fewer words, the poet has expressed everything...
Laughing kids always spread joy around them and fill the world with happiness...a blessing of God indeed!
Comment Written 21-May-2014
reply by the author on 22-May-2014
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Thank you for taking the time to read and review my poem.
Comment from amada
I can read joy and pride in between the lines of this adorable senryu. Your format and word count is perfect and the last line is a great thankfulness line.
reply by the author on 22-May-2014
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I can read joy and pride in between the lines of this adorable senryu. Your format and word count is perfect and the last line is a great thankfulness line.
Comment Written 19-May-2014
reply by the author on 22-May-2014
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Thank you for taking the time to read and review my poem.
Comment from adewpearl
perfect pairing of photo and poem, which is in excellent 5/7/5 syllable count
nice alliterative pairing of dark delight
it is so easy and inviting to visualize this laughing child with sparkling eyes :-)
and what a lovely satori line
Brooke
reply by the author on 22-May-2014
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perfect pairing of photo and poem, which is in excellent 5/7/5 syllable count
nice alliterative pairing of dark delight
it is so easy and inviting to visualize this laughing child with sparkling eyes :-)
and what a lovely satori line
Brooke
Comment Written 19-May-2014
reply by the author on 22-May-2014
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Brooke, thank you for taking the time to read and review my poem. Take care, Faye
Comment from seaglass
This senryu is a lovely tribute to the beautiful perfection in a babe. The laughter of a baby is infectious and can be nothing less than a blessing.
reply by the author on 22-May-2014
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This senryu is a lovely tribute to the beautiful perfection in a babe. The laughter of a baby is infectious and can be nothing less than a blessing.
Comment Written 18-May-2014
reply by the author on 22-May-2014
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Thank you for taking the time to read and review my poem.
Comment from royowen
A beautiful entry in this 5-7-5 contest, I just posted a poem on the blessing of children, well done with creative imaginative poem. It should do well, good luck and blessings, Roy.
reply by the author on 22-May-2014
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A beautiful entry in this 5-7-5 contest, I just posted a poem on the blessing of children, well done with creative imaginative poem. It should do well, good luck and blessings, Roy.
Comment Written 18-May-2014
reply by the author on 22-May-2014
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Thank you for taking the time to read and review my poem.
Comment from RodG
you really captured the essence of this photo with your senyru.
I especially like the "dark eyes sparkle with delight.
Babies are indeed a blessing from God. Good luck in the contest.
reply by the author on 22-May-2014
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you really captured the essence of this photo with your senyru.
I especially like the "dark eyes sparkle with delight.
Babies are indeed a blessing from God. Good luck in the contest.
Comment Written 18-May-2014
reply by the author on 22-May-2014
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Thank you for taking the time to read and review my poem.
Comment from c_lucas
Children are born with an innocence that cannot last. This is very well written with a smooth flow of words, making for a very good read.
reply by the author on 22-May-2014
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Children are born with an innocence that cannot last. This is very well written with a smooth flow of words, making for a very good read.
Comment Written 18-May-2014
reply by the author on 22-May-2014
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Thank you for taking the time to read and review my poem.
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You're welcome.
Comment from angel123
Your poem is very well written. It is meaningful and delightful, as is your artwork choice. Good luck in the contest!
angel123
reply by the author on 22-May-2014
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Your poem is very well written. It is meaningful and delightful, as is your artwork choice. Good luck in the contest!
angel123
Comment Written 18-May-2014
reply by the author on 22-May-2014
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Wow! 6 stars! I'm truly grateful for this rating. Thank you for taking the time to read and review my poem.
