Comment from seaglass

Excellent

This senryu is a lovely tribute to a father. Many men cause births but not all are fathers and mentors. You are very fortunate to have such a dad. And he is lucky you recognize it.

 Comment Written 18-May-2014

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reply by the author on 19-May-2014

Thanks for the wonderful review Mary,

Comment from a.w.brooks

Excellent

Felt the same way about my father thanks for the read happy writing he was my mentor
taught me most of what I know
my lovely daddy

 Comment Written 18-May-2014

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reply by the author on 19-May-2014

thanks for the excellent review. Mary

Comment from angel123

Excellent

This is a wonderful poem in memory of your Dad. I enjoyed reading it and your artwork choice is nice. It enhances your poem.

angel123

 Comment Written 18-May-2014

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reply by the author on 18-May-2014

Thanks for the excellent review.

Comment from Smoothiecool

Excellent

good luck in the contest

you have the correct syllable and line count for the contest

your few words allow the reader to see and feel that your dad was your mentor and taught you most things that you know

cheers..Smoothiecool

 Comment Written 18-May-2014

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reply by the author on 18-May-2014

Thanks for the excellent review.

reply by Smoothiecool on 18-May-2014

most welcome...SC

Comment from juliaSjames

Excellent

Such a heartfelt tribute from a loving daughter.

In three lines you delineate the essence of what it means to be a caring father.

The affection in the final line is like a spontaneous hug.

Best of luck in the contest.

 Comment Written 17-May-2014

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reply by the author on 18-May-2014

Thanks you so much for the excellent review. I appreciate your comments, and best wishes,

Comment from Terror2s

Excellent

A lovely poem that honors your dad. The reader can feel your closeness and love for your dad. Thanks for sharing this one. T2

 Comment Written 17-May-2014

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reply by the author on 18-May-2014

thanks for this excellent review.