Windows To The Past
Viewing comments for Chapter 4 "The Gunfight"Poems about the old West.
48 total reviews
Comment from BethShelby
You are really a wonderful poet. Writing a story in a poem isn't so easy but your have done an excellent poem. I saw you name reviewing my story and I looked to see if you had anything posted. I enjoy reading your poems.
reply by the author on 23-Aug-2023
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You are really a wonderful poet. Writing a story in a poem isn't so easy but your have done an excellent poem. I saw you name reviewing my story and I looked to see if you had anything posted. I enjoy reading your poems.
Comment Written 23-Aug-2023
reply by the author on 23-Aug-2023
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Thank you so much for the uplifting review review and the Exceptional rating, Beth. It's reviews like this one that keeps a writer going you know. You are a valued Fan, and a favorite
of mine too. Big Hug! Nancy:)
Comment from RodG
I always enjoy a western, and yours started out High Noon predictable with the sheriff going out to meet the outlaw. I was pleasantly surprised by the sudden appearance of the little brother who saves the day. The rhythm is smooth throughout. Rod
reply by the author on 21-Aug-2023
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I always enjoy a western, and yours started out High Noon predictable with the sheriff going out to meet the outlaw. I was pleasantly surprised by the sudden appearance of the little brother who saves the day. The rhythm is smooth throughout. Rod
Comment Written 21-Aug-2023
reply by the author on 21-Aug-2023
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Thanks for the lovely review and stars, Rod. Have a great week. Nancy:)
Comment from jim vecchio
Since you didn't get the certificate, I'm giving you tht extra star! Give the star to the sheriff! (ouch!) I don't know if you had anything particular in mind, but when I read the words, I could hear Lorne Greene's voice, speak-singing it.
reply by the author on 21-Aug-2023
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Since you didn't get the certificate, I'm giving you tht extra star! Give the star to the sheriff! (ouch!) I don't know if you had anything particular in mind, but when I read the words, I could hear Lorne Greene's voice, speak-singing it.
Comment Written 21-Aug-2023
reply by the author on 21-Aug-2023
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Thanks for the lovely six stars and kind words, Jim.
Have a lovely week. Nancy:)
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thank you for your six=star-deserved writing!
Comment from JSD
Great handling of rhyme and rhythm. Unforced and natural, with a nice Western drawl about the whole piece. A really enjoyable read, except I'm not sure about the last stanza. Why is Nate cross, and you need to end with something a bit more final. But that's just my personal opinion, which you can ignore of course.
reply by the author on 21-Aug-2023
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Great handling of rhyme and rhythm. Unforced and natural, with a nice Western drawl about the whole piece. A really enjoyable read, except I'm not sure about the last stanza. Why is Nate cross, and you need to end with something a bit more final. But that's just my personal opinion, which you can ignore of course.
Comment Written 21-Aug-2023
reply by the author on 21-Aug-2023
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Nate didn't want his kid brother to be a gunfighter. Normal for a big brother don't you think? Thank you for the review and stars. I always value any critic! It will make me a better poet! Have a nice evening. Nancy
Comment from A. Willow Bends
Wow! This is like a mini book. This is quite different from the more romantic type writing you do, but I really like it! You should venture out of your comfort zone more often! GREAT JOB!
Wendy
reply by the author on 27-Nov-2020
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Wow! This is like a mini book. This is quite different from the more romantic type writing you do, but I really like it! You should venture out of your comfort zone more often! GREAT JOB!
Wendy
Comment Written 27-Nov-2020
reply by the author on 27-Nov-2020
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I have many poems like this one in my portfolio, Wendy.Check out the Book this poem is in. Thank you for the lovely review and stars my friend. You started my day off with a big smile. Hugs. Nancy:)
Comment from Dorothy Farrell
Hello Nancy, how did I miss this one way back in 2014. It is so well written and, of course, consistent rhyme in heptameter (your favourite rhyming form). You write like you know what you are talking about and I enjoyed the read. Always good to read your work - stay well and warm regards Dorothy xx (lucky I had a six left and happy to give it to you).
reply by the author on 22-Nov-2020
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Hello Nancy, how did I miss this one way back in 2014. It is so well written and, of course, consistent rhyme in heptameter (your favourite rhyming form). You write like you know what you are talking about and I enjoyed the read. Always good to read your work - stay well and warm regards Dorothy xx (lucky I had a six left and happy to give it to you).
Comment Written 21-Nov-2020
reply by the author on 22-Nov-2020
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Thank you for the wonderful words and generous six, Dorothy. Two reviews this morning and a six on each one. Talk about a good start to the day. Trouble is they are both revives. I can't seem to write anymore. I think life gets in the way. I appreciate the support of fans like you and hope my muse will return someday. Hugs. Nancy:)
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It will Nancy - just relax and try not to think about it and it will come. Mind you I am struggling - soo much else to do. Dxxx
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I hope so.
Comment from Sandra du Plessis
A very well-written story poem that plays off in the wild west. A place where everyone should know how to shoot a gun accurately or end up dead before the end of the day.
reply by the author on 19-Nov-2020
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A very well-written story poem that plays off in the wild west. A place where everyone should know how to shoot a gun accurately or end up dead before the end of the day.
Comment Written 19-Nov-2020
reply by the author on 19-Nov-2020
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Thank heaven those days are in the past. Thanks for the review and stars, Sandra. Wear your mask when you go out, Dear. Just be safe. Nancy:)
Comment from lyenochka
That's a western story well told! And I also liked that you added some sibling rivalry into the typical sheriff vs. outlaw mix, with the little brother coming to the rescue and earning a deputy status!
reply by the author on 19-Nov-2020
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That's a western story well told! And I also liked that you added some sibling rivalry into the typical sheriff vs. outlaw mix, with the little brother coming to the rescue and earning a deputy status!
Comment Written 18-Nov-2020
reply by the author on 19-Nov-2020
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Thank you for the wonderful review and stars, Helen. Have a lovely day and be careful if you venture out. Nancy:)
Comment from Mastery
A real blast from the past her, Nancy. Sorry I didn't catch this one first time around. It reminds me in so many ways of the old west and television and movies depicting much of the action expressed in your poem.
As it happened, little brother, was so sure that he could win,
he went searching for the outlaw, so the shoot-out could begin.
As he walked the street in silence, all who saw him knew the score,
when at last he saw the outlaw standing at the stable door."
FYI My favorite movie of all time is "Shane" starring Alan Ladd from 1953.
Thank you for this one, Nancy. Bob
reply by the author on 19-Nov-2020
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A real blast from the past her, Nancy. Sorry I didn't catch this one first time around. It reminds me in so many ways of the old west and television and movies depicting much of the action expressed in your poem.
As it happened, little brother, was so sure that he could win,
he went searching for the outlaw, so the shoot-out could begin.
As he walked the street in silence, all who saw him knew the score,
when at last he saw the outlaw standing at the stable door."
FYI My favorite movie of all time is "Shane" starring Alan Ladd from 1953.
Thank you for this one, Nancy. Bob
Comment Written 18-Nov-2020
reply by the author on 19-Nov-2020
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I would be hard pressed to pick a favorite. Shane was a pick in my favorites. Thank you for the review and stars, Bob. Be very careful if you go out. Wear your mask and keep your distance. Nancy:)
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Thanks so much, Nan. Bob
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Thanks so much, Nan. Bob
Comment from Roxanna Andrews
I can see why it would take all day. It was a lot to write and a lot to rhyme. Really well done. I love westerns, Tombstone is one of my favorites. This one is a keeper. =]
reply by the author on 19-Nov-2020
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I can see why it would take all day. It was a lot to write and a lot to rhyme. Really well done. I love westerns, Tombstone is one of my favorites. This one is a keeper. =]
Comment Written 18-Nov-2020
reply by the author on 19-Nov-2020
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Thank you for the review and stars, Roxanna. Have a wonderful day, but be very careful out there. Nancy:)
