Comment from JudyS

Excellent

I'm really impressed with this. It's such a neat little story. So much detail in so few words is hard to do, and you accomplished it very well. Good job. Judy

 Comment Written 08-May-2014

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reply by the author on 08-May-2014

Thanks for the review, cheers

Comment from nelliesellie

Excellent

A girl turns into a woman the first time she walks down the aisle. It is very scary for the girl. She knows this in her heart. It is scary, but she makes the move. Great work.

 Comment Written 08-May-2014

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reply by the author on 08-May-2014

Thanks for the review,cheers

Comment from sunnilicious

Excellent

Good 100 Word Story. Great artwork. Marriage/weddings should be so simple. Good subject. Good fiction story. You managed to work all the required words in too. Good luck in the contest.

 Comment Written 08-May-2014

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reply by the author on 08-May-2014

Thanks for the review sunnilicious.

Comment from Karen B.

Excellent

I enjoyed this story of the perfect way to begin a wedding day and a marriage. :) Well written within the required word count and the picture is a perfect match. Good luck in the contest!

 Comment Written 08-May-2014

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reply by the author on 08-May-2014

Thanks Karen, I know everyonbe is excited on their wedding day, but perhaps little thoughts to leaving a familiar life behind, cheers

Comment from Rosalyne

Excellent

Hi,
This is a great story using the prompts and so few words. You completed the tale well and shared the start of a new beginning. Well done. Best of luck in the contest.
Bye
Rosalyne :)

 Comment Written 08-May-2014

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reply by the author on 08-May-2014

Thanks for the review, everyone is excited to get married, but perhaps bittersweeet thoughts about the familiar life behind occur, cheers

Comment from Pegcook

Excellent

This is a well-told flash fiction that takes the reader inside the head of a woman on her wedding day. Yes, her life will change. Nice story; all required words are present. Good luck in the contest.

 Comment Written 08-May-2014

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reply by the author on 08-May-2014

Thanks for the kind review. Of course everyone is excited to get married, but there may be a bittersweet moment to leave a familiar life behind, cheers

Comment from 4caresmiles

Excellent

This is very well done. You have led the reader through a story of only 100 words but included enough to bring the character to life and leave the reader with a smile! Best wishes on your entry:)

 Comment Written 08-May-2014

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reply by the author on 08-May-2014

Thanks for the review. Of course everyone is excited to get married, but maybe there is a bittersweet moment of leaving a familiar life behind? cheers

Comment from akulkumol

Excellent

Beautiful one scene story in only 100 words. The morning sscene narrative was lovely. Enjoyed reading it and thanks for sharing. My best wishes for the contest.

 Comment Written 08-May-2014

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reply by the author on 08-May-2014

Thanks for the review. Of course everyone is excited about getting married. but perhaps there is also a bittersweet moment leaving a familiar life behind, cheers