Comment from rouskin

Excellent

my beliefs are free from religious restrictions of choosing just one It really deserves to be a winner Congratulations !

 Comment Written 09-May-2014

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reply by the author on 09-May-2014

thank you rouskin :)

Comment from Pegcook

Excellent

This 5-7-5 has a different spiritual approach. It invites the reader to consider a wider view than "choose just one." For there are many from which to choose.

 Comment Written 08-May-2014

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reply by the author on 08-May-2014

yup! thank you peg :)

Comment from RYME4U

Excellent

I'm with you. You should not be tied to one way of thinking. A true religion lets you go and explore the beliefd of others and then chose. This is well said. Good job!

 Comment Written 07-May-2014

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reply by the author on 07-May-2014

thank you ryme :-)

Comment from Jeanie Mercer

Excellent

This is an interesting take on combining all religions and picking from them the basis of your own faith. Good luck to you in the contest, Jeanie Mercer

 Comment Written 07-May-2014

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reply by the author on 07-May-2014

yup :) thank you jeanie :)

Comment from Tatarka2

Excellent

I thought you stayed within this limiting format very well, while also expressing an important universal truth. Congratulations on a job well done. Good luck in the contest.

 Comment Written 07-May-2014

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reply by the author on 07-May-2014

yea it was a little tough to get it down to 575 - i thank my higher power for whoever made the thesaurus LOL! ;)