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Viewing comments for Chapter 25 "Trust Faith"Thirty poems in Thirty Days
14 total reviews
Comment from Deborah Marie
Beautifully written. Photo is beautiful too. Just love your wording; nice imagery produced throughout your poem. Thanks for sharing. Keep 'em coming, Deb
reply by the author on 14-May-2014
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Beautifully written. Photo is beautiful too. Just love your wording; nice imagery produced throughout your poem. Thanks for sharing. Keep 'em coming, Deb
Comment Written 02-May-2014
reply by the author on 14-May-2014
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Thank you, my friend~Debbie
Comment from Maureen's Pen
Dear Debbie - a strong spiritual work that keeps true to faith and its powerful ability to keep us moving in the right direction - even when it feels we can't.
Nicely penned and thanks for sharing it.
Maureen
reply by the author on 14-May-2014
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Dear Debbie - a strong spiritual work that keeps true to faith and its powerful ability to keep us moving in the right direction - even when it feels we can't.
Nicely penned and thanks for sharing it.
Maureen
Comment Written 01-May-2014
reply by the author on 14-May-2014
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Thank you, my friend~Debbie
Comment from Petriesan
cool picture
There are times in life we can't see
What's right in front of our face - most of the time for many of us
placing our trust in higher powers can ease our minds
reply by the author on 14-May-2014
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cool picture
There are times in life we can't see
What's right in front of our face - most of the time for many of us
placing our trust in higher powers can ease our minds
Comment Written 01-May-2014
reply by the author on 14-May-2014
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Thank you, my friend~Debbie
Comment from adewpearl
good abcb rhyming - I like the proximate rhyme of face/faith
good alliteration in graced with God's
excellent use of enjambment
a thoughtful poem of faith
Brooke
reply by the author on 01-May-2014
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good abcb rhyming - I like the proximate rhyme of face/faith
good alliteration in graced with God's
excellent use of enjambment
a thoughtful poem of faith
Brooke
Comment Written 30-Apr-2014
reply by the author on 01-May-2014
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Oh, I'm glad. I wasn't quite sure about that rhyme. Take care~Debbie
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I am a huge fan of proximate rhyme which has been used for hundreds of years, even by Shakespeare
A few reviewers will complain about it, but that's because they don't know what they're talking about. LOL :-)
Comment from Jumbo J
Hi Debbie,
love the metaphorical touch with your notes... blind faith. This is a very measured and wise write my dear friend... trusting that we will be looked after even when that notion seems impossible or circumstances don't dictate a great outcome... but giving your burden to something higher than ourselves is the faith that's needed to save a weary soul.
This is a wonderfully composed poem in every way... just beautifully articulated and presented... love and power to you my dearest of friends.
With our thoughts we create,
the comfort of knowing,
James xx
******Stars!!!!!!
reply by the author on 01-May-2014
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Hi Debbie,
love the metaphorical touch with your notes... blind faith. This is a very measured and wise write my dear friend... trusting that we will be looked after even when that notion seems impossible or circumstances don't dictate a great outcome... but giving your burden to something higher than ourselves is the faith that's needed to save a weary soul.
This is a wonderfully composed poem in every way... just beautifully articulated and presented... love and power to you my dearest of friends.
With our thoughts we create,
the comfort of knowing,
James xx
******Stars!!!!!!
Comment Written 30-Apr-2014
reply by the author on 01-May-2014
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Thank you so very much, dear friend. It is so true, isn't it? Take care, my friend~Debbie xx
Comment from Phyllis Stewart
There are times in life we can't see
What's right in front of our face
How true! THis is when we have doubt, and it's an uncomfortable place to be. But with a good night's sleep and giving it some thought and prayer, we can usually see where problems... and the solutions... lie. :)
reply by the author on 01-May-2014
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There are times in life we can't see
What's right in front of our face
How true! THis is when we have doubt, and it's an uncomfortable place to be. But with a good night's sleep and giving it some thought and prayer, we can usually see where problems... and the solutions... lie. :)
Comment Written 30-Apr-2014
reply by the author on 01-May-2014
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Thank you so very much, my friend~Debbie
Comment from GracieAnn
Debbie, this write is filled with layers of meaning and points the reader to the source of hope when all else abandons us. Well done. :0 GracieAnn
reply by the author on 01-May-2014
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Debbie, this write is filled with layers of meaning and points the reader to the source of hope when all else abandons us. Well done. :0 GracieAnn
Comment Written 29-Apr-2014
reply by the author on 01-May-2014
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Thank you so very much, my friend~Debbie
Comment from Nosha17
You are absolutely right, faith is belief in things unseen. You have made good use of language and rhyme to convey your powerful message. It was a smooth flow and most enjoyable read. Faye
reply by the author on 14-May-2014
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You are absolutely right, faith is belief in things unseen. You have made good use of language and rhyme to convey your powerful message. It was a smooth flow and most enjoyable read. Faye
Comment Written 29-Apr-2014
reply by the author on 14-May-2014
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Thank you, my friend~Debbie
Comment from krys123
Debbie, then sure if there is life that you traveling in that spirit it and downpour of rain you have to have faith to get through it safely. Your poem reflects this faith and truly is very inspirational and stimulating. Your free verse home I enjoyed reading very much and it did not just speak of faith but of the common knowledge that there are is also hope for us that there is a God and creator who is looking over us. Thank you for sharing and posting this for others and may the Lord be with you always.
Alex
reply by the author on 14-May-2014
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Debbie, then sure if there is life that you traveling in that spirit it and downpour of rain you have to have faith to get through it safely. Your poem reflects this faith and truly is very inspirational and stimulating. Your free verse home I enjoyed reading very much and it did not just speak of faith but of the common knowledge that there are is also hope for us that there is a God and creator who is looking over us. Thank you for sharing and posting this for others and may the Lord be with you always.
Alex
Comment Written 29-Apr-2014
reply by the author on 14-May-2014
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Thanks. Bless you, my friend~Debbie
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You are so sincerely welcome Debbie and take care my friend
Comment from donette1914
these words are so true we must have faith in our God for everything he has done for us this is a well penned it was outstsnding was a pleasure to read
reply by the author on 14-May-2014
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these words are so true we must have faith in our God for everything he has done for us this is a well penned it was outstsnding was a pleasure to read
Comment Written 29-Apr-2014
reply by the author on 14-May-2014
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Thank you, my friend~Debbie