Comment from Maureen's Pen

Excellent

Dear Debbie - a wise post my friend and one that shares that deeper wisdom with an easy impact for all to understand. Lovely work.
Thanks for sharing it.
Maureen

 Comment Written 01-May-2014

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reply by the author on 14-May-2014

Thank you, my friend~Debbie

Comment from barbara.wilkey

Excellent

I like the security of being predicable. My husband is very predicable. I can almost tell you what he's going to say. I do understand your poem and its very well written.

 Comment Written 01-May-2014

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reply by the author on 14-May-2014

Thank you, my friend~Debbie

Comment from adewpearl

Excellent

solid rhyming couplets
good alliteration in deeper we delve
and days will deliver
and distress dissolve
you deliver a thought-provoking message in good poetic form :-) Brooke

 Comment Written 30-Apr-2014

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reply by the author on 01-May-2014

Thank you~Debbie

Comment from Jacqueline M Franklin

Excellent

Hi Debbie

Very nice presentation with outstanding artwork, and formatted perfectly.

Your message is inspiring, thought provoking. Well done.

Cheers
Keep Smilin'.... Jax

 Comment Written 30-Apr-2014

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reply by the author on 01-May-2014

Thank you so very much, my friend~Debbie

Comment from Robert Lee Brown

Excellent

Debbie, this is a very insightful write with reasoning added. You present a unique perspective that most people don't have. It is a very interesting read. Thanks for sharing. Bob

 Comment Written 29-Apr-2014

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reply by the author on 01-May-2014

Thank you so very much, my friend.I find something surprising nearly every day. Have a blessed day my friend~Debbie

Comment from Liandra

Excellent

Your words flow beautifully with 8/8/8/8/ rhyme. Life is full of mystery. I think that's what keeps us going because without mystery, life would be dull.

Thanks for sharing,

:) Liandra

 Comment Written 29-Apr-2014

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reply by the author on 14-May-2014

Thank you, my friend~Debbie

Comment from krys123

Excellent

Debbie, I enjoyed your Philosophical commentary and in a way his spiritual creativeness. I found your rhyming to be neither forced, labored or strained and you read them flowed smoothly throughout your poem. Many of your truisms was so correct In their assumption That life is a true mystery. Thank you for sharing and posting this for everyone and may the Lord be with you always.
Alex

 Comment Written 29-Apr-2014

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reply by the author on 14-May-2014

Thank you, my friend~Debbie

reply by krys123 on 14-May-2014

You are so sincerely welcome Debbie

Comment from Gungalo

Excellent

The mystery of life you see
Gives us new opportunity
If we couldn't evolve and grow
Monotony is all we'd know

Right on Debbie and so true to the feelings. Life can be the biggest mystery of all. Hang on for the ride.

 Comment Written 29-Apr-2014

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reply by the author on 14-May-2014

Thank you, my friend~Debbie

Comment from mumsyone

Excellent

The mystery of life you see
Gives us new opportunity
If we couldn't evolve and grow
Monotony is all we'd know

So true, that we need a little variety in our lives, or they would be very monotonous. Good poem, Debbie.

Hugs,
Lois

 Comment Written 29-Apr-2014

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reply by the author on 14-May-2014

Thanks, Lois. Hugs, Debbie

Comment from royowen

Excellent

I think we all think our lives are a mess when we feel bad! I know that's how I felt sometimes, but then I remember God loves me exactly as I am, and then I feel better! I think our emotions play tricks with our minds! Well written again Debbie, beautiful, articulate write, good aabb rhyme scheme, meter even. Well done, blessings, Roy.

 Comment Written 29-Apr-2014

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reply by the author on 14-May-2014

Thank you, my friend~Debbie