Two Views 5-7-7
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Comment from donette1914
very interesting poem and very heartfelt and i like your words, Faith gave all she had, always caring for others.
Helping people with her grace. outstanding it was a pleasure
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very interesting poem and very heartfelt and i like your words, Faith gave all she had, always caring for others.
Helping people with her grace. outstanding it was a pleasure
Comment Written 03-May-2014
Comment from Norbanus
This is a fascinating poem form which we don't see often. You showed us a good example. The two stanzas give a better chance to deliver a message than with most short forms. Nicely done.
reply by the author on 01-May-2014
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This is a fascinating poem form which we don't see often. You showed us a good example. The two stanzas give a better chance to deliver a message than with most short forms. Nicely done.
Comment Written 01-May-2014
reply by the author on 01-May-2014
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Thanks so very much. I love your comments...and you made my day.
Comment from tfawcus
The Sedona looks like a tricky form to master. Yours presents the two points of view well and gives the reader pause for thought, as the form is meant to, I imagine.
reply by the author on 01-May-2014
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The Sedona looks like a tricky form to master. Yours presents the two points of view well and gives the reader pause for thought, as the form is meant to, I imagine.
Comment Written 01-May-2014
reply by the author on 01-May-2014
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I enjoyed writing these and am trying more. Take care, and thank you.
Comment from royowen
I think you have interwoven these two poems beautifully, I love the contrast you have produced In these, when I write and post, I sit back and cringe, although you wouldn't do that. I think you have done well. Linking charm with flattery and faith with grace! Well done, luck in this contest! Blessings, Roy.
reply by the author on 01-May-2014
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I think you have interwoven these two poems beautifully, I love the contrast you have produced In these, when I write and post, I sit back and cringe, although you wouldn't do that. I think you have done well. Linking charm with flattery and faith with grace! Well done, luck in this contest! Blessings, Roy.
Comment Written 01-May-2014
reply by the author on 01-May-2014
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Hi Roy, ohhh yes, I cringe...and even allow myself to ask ,"who wrote that?" I always love hearing from you. Thank you and take care.
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You too, you're welcome. Roy.
Comment from Willowsong
This looks like a fun piece to try and you did it well. The topic is a wonderful choice and I enjoyed how you personified two characteristics. You met the criteria requirements and the added image is a nice compliment to your words.
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This looks like a fun piece to try and you did it well. The topic is a wonderful choice and I enjoyed how you personified two characteristics. You met the criteria requirements and the added image is a nice compliment to your words.
Comment Written 30-Apr-2014
Comment from artisart4u
I like your poem 5-7-7, it has the right amount of syllables in it and I like the contrast you wrote between Charm and Faith
Good luck in your writing.
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I like your poem 5-7-7, it has the right amount of syllables in it and I like the contrast you wrote between Charm and Faith
Good luck in your writing.
Comment Written 29-Apr-2014
Comment from rouskin
Excellent artwork and positive message :Faith gave all she had, always caring for others. Helping people with her grace
Strong entry Best of luck in the contest
Blessings, Rouskin
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Excellent artwork and positive message :Faith gave all she had, always caring for others. Helping people with her grace
Strong entry Best of luck in the contest
Blessings, Rouskin
Comment Written 29-Apr-2014
Comment from kiwijenny
Beautifully done. I like your two views as two little girls . Their names are two views as well....I,love the portrait.....well written. A lot of these prompts stretch us......
Well stretched
God bless
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Beautifully done. I like your two views as two little girls . Their names are two views as well....I,love the portrait.....well written. A lot of these prompts stretch us......
Well stretched
God bless
Comment Written 29-Apr-2014
Comment from lancellot
interesting views on two personal characteristics. You chose to portray charm in a slightly negative light and to contrast that wrote faith in a positive one. This isn't always so, but nicely done.
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interesting views on two personal characteristics. You chose to portray charm in a slightly negative light and to contrast that wrote faith in a positive one. This isn't always so, but nicely done.
Comment Written 28-Apr-2014
Comment from Righteous Riter
This piece meets the criteria of the Sedoka poem as the syllable count is spot on. Good complimentary photo. Good alliteration with helping/her. Clear message that is short and simple. Best of luck in the contest.
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This piece meets the criteria of the Sedoka poem as the syllable count is spot on. Good complimentary photo. Good alliteration with helping/her. Clear message that is short and simple. Best of luck in the contest.
Comment Written 28-Apr-2014