National Poetry Month
Viewing comments for Chapter 22 "Spreading My Wings"Thirty poems in Thirty Days
13 total reviews
Comment from Robert Lee Brown
A beautiful write in rhyme. Great choice of words in your descriptions. The ending couplet is excellent. An enjoyable read. Thanks for sharing. Bob
reply by the author on 14-May-2014
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A beautiful write in rhyme. Great choice of words in your descriptions. The ending couplet is excellent. An enjoyable read. Thanks for sharing. Bob
Comment Written 29-Apr-2014
reply by the author on 14-May-2014
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Thank you, my friend~Debbie
Comment from GracieAnn
Debbie, it is true. Reflecting on the flight, the grace, and the beauty of a butterfly makes us feel as if we could fly along side. Beautiful mental imagery with a-b-a-b rhyme for the most part. Nicely penned. :0 GracieAnn
reply by the author on 19-May-2014
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Debbie, it is true. Reflecting on the flight, the grace, and the beauty of a butterfly makes us feel as if we could fly along side. Beautiful mental imagery with a-b-a-b rhyme for the most part. Nicely penned. :0 GracieAnn
Comment Written 29-Apr-2014
reply by the author on 19-May-2014
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Oops, I guess the first stanza is off. Can't win them all.Thank you. Have a blessed day, my friend~Debbie
Comment from Liandra
Another beautiful poem and the artwork compliments your words perfectly. I will look for 'A New Path."
Hugs,
Liandra
reply by the author on 19-May-2014
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Another beautiful poem and the artwork compliments your words perfectly. I will look for 'A New Path."
Hugs,
Liandra
Comment Written 28-Apr-2014
reply by the author on 19-May-2014
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Thank you. Hugs~Debbie
Comment from Phyllis Stewart
Lovely, Debbie. Who doesn't love butterflies? They live such a quiet, simple, beautiful life, short though it may be. From sweet flower to sweet flower, stopping only to rest their wings, hoping we don't grab them. I have a sweet tooth... think I'd make a happy butteffly. :)
reply by the author on 19-May-2014
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Lovely, Debbie. Who doesn't love butterflies? They live such a quiet, simple, beautiful life, short though it may be. From sweet flower to sweet flower, stopping only to rest their wings, hoping we don't grab them. I have a sweet tooth... think I'd make a happy butteffly. :)
Comment Written 28-Apr-2014
reply by the author on 19-May-2014
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Sounds good to me--fluttering from flower to flower. Thank you~Debbie
Comment from krys123
Debbie, I enjoyed reading your poem very much And I found it to be very inventive and creative. Also I felt very illuminative and stimulated by the feeling of flight is if I would spread my own wings. Your resourcefulness and cleverness major imagery effective enough to make me feel like I could fly. Thank you for sharing and posting this bothers a May the Lord be with you always.
Alex
reply by the author on 19-May-2014
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Debbie, I enjoyed reading your poem very much And I found it to be very inventive and creative. Also I felt very illuminative and stimulated by the feeling of flight is if I would spread my own wings. Your resourcefulness and cleverness major imagery effective enough to make me feel like I could fly. Thank you for sharing and posting this bothers a May the Lord be with you always.
Alex
Comment Written 28-Apr-2014
reply by the author on 19-May-2014
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Thank you, my friend~Debbie
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You are so welcome Debbie
Comment from Carolyn 'Deaton' Stephens
I will never view a butterfly the same again. Each lovely creature that I see, I will think, 'there goes my Debbie.'
Just beautiful, rhyming quatrains and ending couplet.
Love, Carolyn
reply by the author on 19-May-2014
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I will never view a butterfly the same again. Each lovely creature that I see, I will think, 'there goes my Debbie.'
Just beautiful, rhyming quatrains and ending couplet.
Love, Carolyn
Comment Written 27-Apr-2014
reply by the author on 19-May-2014
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Thank you, my friend~Debbie
Comment from risktaker
A beautiful tribute to the beauty of butterflies. their colors are appealing, bright, and noticed. They usually bring joy to all who observe them. the sight of them brings
excitement and sounds of glee. A gift from god to the universe. I like the structure and the choice of words. The photo is relevant and pretty.
reply by the author on 19-May-2014
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A beautiful tribute to the beauty of butterflies. their colors are appealing, bright, and noticed. They usually bring joy to all who observe them. the sight of them brings
excitement and sounds of glee. A gift from god to the universe. I like the structure and the choice of words. The photo is relevant and pretty.
Comment Written 27-Apr-2014
reply by the author on 19-May-2014
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Thank you, my friend~Debbie
Comment from angelface2
You did a lovely job with this poem, Debbie. I love the picture and the color on the background of black is quite lovely. I can relate to this, as I used to dream about flying. All I would have to do is jump and flap my arms a bit. If I wanted to go higher, I would pull up my legs and kick downward. Up I would go. It's a lovely thought, but not very practical, I'm afraid. Miss Sally
reply by the author on 19-May-2014
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You did a lovely job with this poem, Debbie. I love the picture and the color on the background of black is quite lovely. I can relate to this, as I used to dream about flying. All I would have to do is jump and flap my arms a bit. If I wanted to go higher, I would pull up my legs and kick downward. Up I would go. It's a lovely thought, but not very practical, I'm afraid. Miss Sally
Comment Written 27-Apr-2014
reply by the author on 19-May-2014
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I have dreams about flying too. Thank you, my friend~Debbie
Comment from kiwijenny
Showing my bright and varied hue
I'd grace the world by fluttering
Being an awesome sight for you
Into each day joy I would bring
I love this ...imagining yourself as a butterfly...well done....
God bless
reply by the author on 19-May-2014
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Showing my bright and varied hue
I'd grace the world by fluttering
Being an awesome sight for you
Into each day joy I would bring
I love this ...imagining yourself as a butterfly...well done....
God bless
Comment Written 27-Apr-2014
reply by the author on 19-May-2014
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Thank you, my friend~Debbie
Comment from royowen
I love this poem about flying like a bird! When I was a little boy I used to dream about flying above the earth safe from all the dangers below, beautifully described, I could almost feel myself rising from the ground and gazing on the sights below! Well done, Debbie, blessings, Roy.
reply by the author on 19-May-2014
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I love this poem about flying like a bird! When I was a little boy I used to dream about flying above the earth safe from all the dangers below, beautifully described, I could almost feel myself rising from the ground and gazing on the sights below! Well done, Debbie, blessings, Roy.
Comment Written 27-Apr-2014
reply by the author on 19-May-2014
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I have dreams about flying--always have. Have a blessed day, my friend~Debbie