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Comment from judester
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A wonderful poem about the freedom and artistry of poetry. Great rhyming and fun reminder of the varied and unique avenues we can travel with our thoughts, cheers Judester

 Comment Written 29-May-2014


reply by the author on 30-May-2014
    Thank you Judester.
Comment from nomi338
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What a wonderful surprise this poem turned out to be. I certainly did not expect to find such a pleasing work as this. You snuck up on me with this one. Your words resonate or at least they should resonat with everyone who has ever given thought to writing a poem. You perfectly state the case for poetry and its effect upon all who read and write it. Good work.

 Comment Written 29-May-2014


reply by the author on 30-May-2014
    Thank you very much nomi. I am very pleased with your response.
Comment from Jackarrie
Exceptional
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I love the words you chose in your poem, you have expressed the whole meaning of what a poet feels. Excellent rhyming in your quatrains.

Well done, and a deserved six. I enjoyed it immensely

Mary

 Comment Written 19-May-2014


reply by the author on 19-May-2014
    Thank you so much for such a lovely review and those sparkling stars.
Comment from Fatima Farhan
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I think its superb.you have written well.I just love the beginning.you have a great talent of writing poetry. All the best .I am looking forward to your next poem.

 Comment Written 19-May-2014


reply by the author on 19-May-2014
    Thank you Fatima.
Comment from nancyjam
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Strong rhyme and meter in your
wonderful poem about poetry and what
it means to you.
Nice use of alliteration in each verse.
Good luck in the contest.

 Comment Written 19-May-2014


reply by the author on 19-May-2014
    Thank you Nancyjam.
Comment from harmony13
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I really liked the poem I found it extremely insightful. The author words are descriptive, filled with emotions and certainly thought provoking. The poem flows and connects well. The artwork fit well with this poem.

 Comment Written 01-May-2014


reply by the author on 01-May-2014
    Thank you harmony13. I appreciate your comments.
Comment from NicciFaye
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Poetry sure does this and more! Excellent poem. And great way of expressing what it means. I def enjoyed this Treischel. The second stanza is my fav.

 Comment Written 01-May-2014


reply by the author on 01-May-2014
    Thank you Nicci.
Comment from Joan E.
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I enjoyed your rhyme scheme of aabbb in these five-line stanzas and your reflections about what poetry means to you. I am glad you mind your muse every day and bring to life "places where emotions are stirred". Cheers and best wishes in the contest- Joan

 Comment Written 29-Apr-2014


reply by the author on 29-Apr-2014
    Thank you so much Joan.
Comment from Preston McWhorter
Exceptional
This work has reached the exceptional level

Hi, Treischel,
"What Poetry Means to Me" is an exceptional poem with quintain structure, excellent rhythm, rhyme,and flow. It has excellent figurative language and imagery; alliteration (poets paint portraits with wonderful words) similes and metaphors. Your love of poetry comes through, Good luck in the contest.
Preston

 Comment Written 28-Apr-2014


reply by the author on 29-Apr-2014
    Thank you so much for a fine review , good wishes, and high ranking. Amazing. I didn't like the poem, myself, but it has gotten a few 6 ratings.
Comment from Shirley E Kennedy
Exceptional
This work has reached the exceptional level

You have written a poem which surely captures the essence of what poetry means to you.
Your careful and thoughtful wording demonstrates just how important
Poetry is in your life and the myriad of topics and places it can take you to.
Good luck in the contest.

 Comment Written 28-Apr-2014


reply by the author on 28-Apr-2014
    Thank you Shirley. I appreciate your support and encouragement.