Writing Prompt Entries 2014
Viewing comments for Chapter 37 "Waste Not, Want Not"The clue is in the title!
4 total reviews
Comment from Jackarrie
A very good image to go with your poem, it has all the proper syllables, but it does not have the internal rhyme that is required by the prompt.
good luck Mary
Sorry I did miss the internal rhyme, I do apologize.
reply by the author on 28-Apr-2014
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A very good image to go with your poem, it has all the proper syllables, but it does not have the internal rhyme that is required by the prompt.
good luck Mary
Sorry I did miss the internal rhyme, I do apologize.
Comment Written 28-Apr-2014
reply by the author on 28-Apr-2014
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Hi Mar :) thank you for your comments. The internal rhyme IS there... 'your' and 'score' rhyme and they are internal words. Please reconsider your star award if this is why you down graded your rating! Thanks in anticipation and kindest regards as always... :)
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That's ok Mary :) Thank you for upgrading - I do appreciate it along with your good luck wishes! Kindest regards...:)
Comment from Oldman2
The picture took a while to show up on my screen, but once it showed up, both the writing and the picture looked perfectly in sync....appears to be a good contest entry......wish you all the luck
reply by the author on 27-Apr-2014
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The picture took a while to show up on my screen, but once it showed up, both the writing and the picture looked perfectly in sync....appears to be a good contest entry......wish you all the luck
Comment Written 27-Apr-2014
reply by the author on 27-Apr-2014
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Hi oldman2 thank you so much for your great feedback and the stars, I appreciate it! I'm glad you thought my poem contest worthy... unfortunately the contest committee didn't, and disqualified my entry! They said I had no internal rhyme (I do though don't I?!) Kindest regards, Debra :)
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My entry has been reinstated :)
Comment from Smoothiecool
good luck in the contest
your few words allow the reader to see and feel that if you don't like your lunch some one else will eat it
your components are spot on
cheers Smoothiecool
reply by the author on 27-Apr-2014
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good luck in the contest
your few words allow the reader to see and feel that if you don't like your lunch some one else will eat it
your components are spot on
cheers Smoothiecool
Comment Written 27-Apr-2014
reply by the author on 27-Apr-2014
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Hi smoothiecool :) Thank you for your great comments. I'm glad you thought my components were spot on....so did I! The contest committee just disqualified my entry as they said I have no internal rhyme! I argued my point and hope they reconsider... Kindest regards...:)
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They reconsidered!
Comment from donette1914
very funny of these little guys, they will make good use out of the leftovers in one way or another. I love the are work well done
reply by the author on 27-Apr-2014
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very funny of these little guys, they will make good use out of the leftovers in one way or another. I love the are work well done
Comment Written 27-Apr-2014
reply by the author on 27-Apr-2014
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Thank you, glad you liked it :) Kindest regards...