National Poetry Month
Viewing comments for Chapter 21 "Another Day"Thirty poems in Thirty Days
13 total reviews
Comment from GracieAnn
Debbie, you have expressed an important sentiment in what we do today for others may be the very thing we'll wished we had in the future. Thought provoking with good social commentary. :0 GracieAnn
reply by the author on 19-May-2014
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Debbie, you have expressed an important sentiment in what we do today for others may be the very thing we'll wished we had in the future. Thought provoking with good social commentary. :0 GracieAnn
Comment Written 29-Apr-2014
reply by the author on 19-May-2014
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Thank you. :) Debbie
Comment from Robert Lee Brown
This is a very interesting write, Debbie. I am betting that you will manage to make it through another day. You seem to manage better with longer range goals rather than one day at a time attitude. This is another very good chapter in your book. Thanks for sharing. Bob
reply by the author on 19-May-2014
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This is a very interesting write, Debbie. I am betting that you will manage to make it through another day. You seem to manage better with longer range goals rather than one day at a time attitude. This is another very good chapter in your book. Thanks for sharing. Bob
Comment Written 28-Apr-2014
reply by the author on 19-May-2014
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How are you doing, my friend? As always, I appreciate your review. Have a blessed day~Debbie
Comment from Ricky1024
"Praying For My Miracle."
"God pretends in my...
God amends in me...
God is my friend indeed...
And God loves me cand my needs.
...
"God will tend in me...
God will someday be friend in me...
And God will show me the way to mend in me...
...
"God will soon send for me...
God hath told me that there's a need there for me...
God awaits and knows and needs...
And God as I take *"Thy Vow"...
I await thy miracle endowed...
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*Thy Vow-
To live my life fully now the way it was intended.
"As your beautiful thoughts state.
We all should be thankful that we have another day."
My next book and movie "Will Tomorrow Ever Come?"
Will shock this world with its beauty, courage, and miracles.
{Based on A friends tortured life Mark Allan.}
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reply by the author on 19-May-2014
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"Praying For My Miracle."
"God pretends in my...
God amends in me...
God is my friend indeed...
And God loves me cand my needs.
...
"God will tend in me...
God will someday be friend in me...
And God will show me the way to mend in me...
...
"God will soon send for me...
God hath told me that there's a need there for me...
God awaits and knows and needs...
And God as I take *"Thy Vow"...
I await thy miracle endowed...
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*Thy Vow-
To live my life fully now the way it was intended.
"As your beautiful thoughts state.
We all should be thankful that we have another day."
My next book and movie "Will Tomorrow Ever Come?"
Will shock this world with its beauty, courage, and miracles.
{Based on A friends tortured life Mark Allan.}
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Comment Written 28-Apr-2014
reply by the author on 19-May-2014
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Thank you, my friend~Debbie
Comment from RGstar
I absolutely agree with you here. Being kind gives so much pleasure, if only more could realize.
At times we are far too selfish and need only a bit of thought to make a difference.
well done,
RGstar
reply by the author on 19-May-2014
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I absolutely agree with you here. Being kind gives so much pleasure, if only more could realize.
At times we are far too selfish and need only a bit of thought to make a difference.
well done,
RGstar
Comment Written 27-Apr-2014
reply by the author on 19-May-2014
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Thank you, my friend~Debbie
Comment from Petriesan
the first comma in the poem is not needed
who are we to judge? We are the god we create. . .or so it seems. . .and it is the easiest to judge those who have the same problems as we do. Having the fault, it is easy to see it in others, where it is worse, much, much worse
reply by the author on 19-May-2014
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the first comma in the poem is not needed
who are we to judge? We are the god we create. . .or so it seems. . .and it is the easiest to judge those who have the same problems as we do. Having the fault, it is easy to see it in others, where it is worse, much, much worse
Comment Written 27-Apr-2014
reply by the author on 19-May-2014
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Thanks for noticing my extra comma. Thank you again for the great review and stars~Debbie
Comment from barbara.wilkey
We are not to judge one another, because the Bible tells us if we do that is the way we will be judged. Once again you have written a very emotional poem that has great importance to society.
reply by the author on 19-May-2014
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We are not to judge one another, because the Bible tells us if we do that is the way we will be judged. Once again you have written a very emotional poem that has great importance to society.
Comment Written 27-Apr-2014
reply by the author on 19-May-2014
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Thank you again for the great review and stars~Debbie
Comment from mumsyone
Hi Debbie,
Don't be so down on yourself. Everyone has problems of one sort or another, and there are times when we all wonder if we can get through another day. I find that the only true way to do it is with God's help, a moment, an hour, a day at a time.
Hugs,
Lois
Too many concerns along with sensory overload, leaves (leave) me wondering if my head will explode.
reply by the author on 19-May-2014
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Hi Debbie,
Don't be so down on yourself. Everyone has problems of one sort or another, and there are times when we all wonder if we can get through another day. I find that the only true way to do it is with God's help, a moment, an hour, a day at a time.
Hugs,
Lois
Too many concerns along with sensory overload, leaves (leave) me wondering if my head will explode.
Comment Written 27-Apr-2014
reply by the author on 19-May-2014
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Thank you, my friend. Hugs~Debbie
Comment from Phyllis Stewart
I think they have the same thoughts too, just are afraid to reveal them to me and you.
This is so true. And that's why ou are right that we should treat everyone with kindness... take an extra step for a smile or small assistance...make their day brighter and they will do the same for another, because they will just FEEL BETTER. We all need to be noticed and have someone care, and it's so easy to do. It will make us happy too, when we give happiness to another. You can't lose and everyone wins. So why do most folks do the opposite????
reply by the author on 19-May-2014
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I think they have the same thoughts too, just are afraid to reveal them to me and you.
This is so true. And that's why ou are right that we should treat everyone with kindness... take an extra step for a smile or small assistance...make their day brighter and they will do the same for another, because they will just FEEL BETTER. We all need to be noticed and have someone care, and it's so easy to do. It will make us happy too, when we give happiness to another. You can't lose and everyone wins. So why do most folks do the opposite????
Comment Written 27-Apr-2014
reply by the author on 19-May-2014
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Our society seems to have screwed up priorities. Thank you~Debbie
Comment from royowen
Well I am on your side for one and maybe you don't believe but God is too! Whatever, while there's blood and breath in your body, hope is always there, if you need I am here! Well done, God be with you. Blessings, Roy.
reply by the author on 19-May-2014
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Well I am on your side for one and maybe you don't believe but God is too! Whatever, while there's blood and breath in your body, hope is always there, if you need I am here! Well done, God be with you. Blessings, Roy.
Comment Written 27-Apr-2014
reply by the author on 19-May-2014
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Thank you, my kind friend.Have a blessed day~Debbie
Comment from Glasstruth
Very positive. The challenge is to cope. Yes, we're all brothers and sisters. Yet, we act like if others from outside our family are simply from Mars. That'd be nice. Then I'd know we're not alone. Very spontaneous. Well done! Les
reply by the author on 19-May-2014
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Very positive. The challenge is to cope. Yes, we're all brothers and sisters. Yet, we act like if others from outside our family are simply from Mars. That'd be nice. Then I'd know we're not alone. Very spontaneous. Well done! Les
Comment Written 27-Apr-2014
reply by the author on 19-May-2014
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Thank you, my friend. Hugs~Debbie