Comment from emrpoems

Good

A piece of bread made------------5
a dog loving me lifetime but few------9
known people still under ? --------6
Sorry about the four star but you got it completely wrong.
The first line must have 5 syllables
The second line must have 7 syllables
The third line must have 5 syllables
NOT WORD EXAMPLE THE WORD UNDER HAS 2 SYLLABLES UN-DER
LOVING HAS 2 SYLLABLES LOV-ING
When you make the changes I will be happy to upgrade

 Comment Written 22-Apr-2014

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reply by the author on 23-Apr-2014

thanks

Comment from rouskin

Excellent

A piece of bread made
a dog loving me lifetime but few 9 instead of 7
known people still under 6 instead of 5

I'm giving you one extra star because you have time to fix it Good luck !

 Comment Written 22-Apr-2014

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reply by the author on 22-Apr-2014

thanks can you explain how counting is done since am counting no of words.

reply by rouskin on 22-Apr-2014

Syllables Per Line should be 5 7 5
not 5 9 6
Syllables Per Line: 5 9 6

Good luck Have fun!

reply by the author on 22-Apr-2014

thanks