Don't burn her
To save mother nature3 total reviews
Comment from Debra White
Hi :) Great message and good adherence to 5-7-5 form.
Good use of alliteration in progress prevails.
The 2nd line doesn't quite flow for me although I know what you're getting at!
Good luck in the contest.
Kindest regards, Debra
reply by the author on 22-Apr-2014
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Hi :) Great message and good adherence to 5-7-5 form.
Good use of alliteration in progress prevails.
The 2nd line doesn't quite flow for me although I know what you're getting at!
Good luck in the contest.
Kindest regards, Debra
Comment Written 22-Apr-2014
reply by the author on 22-Apr-2014
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Thanks Debra :)
Comment from Atul Saxena
You've got a great choice of words but you need to be more descriptive in order to get a outstanding reviews. I'll be waiting to take a review of your writings...
reply by the author on 21-Apr-2014
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You've got a great choice of words but you need to be more descriptive in order to get a outstanding reviews. I'll be waiting to take a review of your writings...
Comment Written 21-Apr-2014
reply by the author on 21-Apr-2014
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Sure Atul. Thanks for the review :). I couldn't get more descriptive in 17 words syllables :P
Comment from Willowsong
'Tis a sad truth, the destruction of mother nature by the hand of man. One thing I've observed throughout history is that in the end mother nature will always fight back and prevail even at the cost of man. Welcome to global warming. Nice 5-7-5 :-)
reply by the author on 21-Apr-2014
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'Tis a sad truth, the destruction of mother nature by the hand of man. One thing I've observed throughout history is that in the end mother nature will always fight back and prevail even at the cost of man. Welcome to global warming. Nice 5-7-5 :-)
Comment Written 21-Apr-2014
reply by the author on 21-Apr-2014
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Thank you Willowsong :)
Yes, nature always does that with storms, earthquakes, hurricanes etc.
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You're welcome :-)