Comment from Carolyn 'Deaton' Stephens

Excellent

Debbie, I needed a bit of 'lightening' tonight and your poem certainly did it for me. ED: Emotional Distress.
Great post, :-) Carolyn

 Comment Written 17-Apr-2014

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reply by the author on 17-Apr-2014

I detest those commercials, especially during the day when children are likely to be watching. Thank you, my friend~Debbie

Comment from Petriesan

Excellent

I agree with your sentiments completely. The damn commercials are tiring and irritating.

I wish they would go away

nice piece here

 Comment Written 16-Apr-2014

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reply by the author on 17-Apr-2014

I have yet to find anyone who appreciates them. Thank you, my friend~Debbie

Comment from Liandra

Exceptional

Well done, Debbie. You have a way with words. I'm amazed
at how you manage to find the words that begin with the same letter (erectile dis...) and (emotional dis...)

Lots of love,

Liandra

 Comment Written 16-Apr-2014

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reply by the author on 17-Apr-2014

Thank you again, my friend~debbie

Comment from Maureen's Pen

Excellent

Dear Debbie - I couldn't stop laughing at both your post and your author notes.
Brilliant play my friend. - I don't watch TV, or its rare. Good thing about reading - no commercials :)
Nicely penned with hit of humor and wit - I liked it.
Thanks for sharing it.
Maureen

 Comment Written 15-Apr-2014

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reply by the author on 17-Apr-2014

I find these commercials so very irritating. I especially object to them being shown when children are likely to be watching. I don't know how we expect our children to be innocent anymore. Glad you enjoyed this~Debbie

Comment from Ramona Hughes

Excellent

I like this! I agree there are so many of those dumb commercials! This is Witty and interesting. I love this original poem.

Ramona Hughes

 Comment Written 15-Apr-2014

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reply by the author on 15-Apr-2014

Thank you. Those commercials should be outlawed~Debbie

Comment from Deborah Marie

Excellent

Nice poem which made me laugh. And, that's what I needed to do today. Clever use of wording. And, nice progression, rhythm and flow. Giggles, Deb

 Comment Written 15-Apr-2014

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reply by the author on 15-Apr-2014

Thank you. Those commercials should be outlawed~Debbie

Comment from RGstar

Excellent

Ha,ha. I had to laugh at that one, with the humor of your distress rather than the condition.
Lets hope the commercials wear thin and a cure is found soon.
Best wishes,
RG

 Comment Written 15-Apr-2014

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reply by the author on 15-Apr-2014

Thank you. Those commercials should be outlawed~Debbie

Comment from krys123

Excellent

Debbie, I'm with you wholeheartedly I'm tired of those commercials myself and I think emotional distress would be a good commercial to counteract that other one. Excellent Senryu
and very creative and illuminative. Thank you for sharing and posting your work for others and may the good Lord be with you always.
Alex

 Comment Written 15-Apr-2014

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reply by the author on 15-Apr-2014

Thank you. Those commercials should be outlawed~Debbie

reply by krys123 on 15-Apr-2014

You are so welcome Debbie and they should be outlawed especially when they come in the times when children are watching.
Alex

Comment from Terrie DeGolier

Excellent

This poem is hilarious and if you did make your own commercial you would have millions of investors. Thank you for this mornings laughter what a great way to start my day. :) Terrie

 Comment Written 15-Apr-2014

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reply by the author on 17-Apr-2014

Thank you. Glad you enjoyed this~Debbie

Comment from adewpearl

Excellent

You've definitely left me laughing with your senryu, which is in good format and has the kind of satiric tone I expect for this form
love your own take on what E.D. means LOL
Yes, these commercials are both ubiquitous and extremely annoying :-) Brooke

 Comment Written 15-Apr-2014

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reply by the author on 17-Apr-2014

Thank you, Brooke. Glad you enjoyed this, my friend~Debbie