Comment from adewpearl

Excellent

adorable presentation of your poem
strong end-line rhyming
excellent consonance of L sounds in all three lines
this is precious and loving, warm in tone
Brooke

 Comment Written 14-Apr-2014

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reply by the author on 15-Apr-2014

Thanks Brooke for the great review.

Comment from rouskin

Excellent

You are my favorite and I'm going to vote for you Fantastic picture by the way, couldn't be any better for the telling of your little tale Best of luck in the contest
Blessings, Rouskin

 Comment Written 14-Apr-2014

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reply by the author on 14-Apr-2014

Thanks for the great review and the vote of confidence.

Comment from Karen B.

Excellent

Awwww, this is a sweet poem and the picture adorable. Can you tell I'm a kitty lover? :) Got your point across clearly in this limited amount of words. Good luck in the contest!

 Comment Written 14-Apr-2014

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reply by the author on 14-Apr-2014

Thanks Karen for the lovely review.

Comment from RYME4U

Excellent

Very well presented. The rhyme is good. The rhythm is smooth. The title is very appropriate and the picture is adorable. Great contest entry

 Comment Written 14-Apr-2014

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reply by the author on 14-Apr-2014

Thanks for the kind review.

Comment from Smoothiecool

Excellent

good luck in the contest
your few words portray the image well of the felines love and the walk in the moonlight and the last goodnight kiss

flows well

cheers Smoothiecool

 Comment Written 14-Apr-2014

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reply by the author on 14-Apr-2014

Thanks for the encouraging review.

reply by Smoothiecool on 15-Apr-2014

most welcome..SC

Comment from The Death

Excellent

Hi, mystery poet.

You have chosen a lovely theme and worded it well, too.

a walk in the moonlight
my feline love of delight
last kiss now, good night

Superb use of phonetics here with L,T consonance and assonance of A,E. You made excellent use of rhyming here.

It flows smoothly and sounds serene as well.

Beautiful presentation of your poem with the use of an striking artwork.

Best of luck! :)

Regards,
Anupam

 Comment Written 14-Apr-2014

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reply by the author on 14-Apr-2014

Thanks Anupam for your encouraging review.

Comment from Domino 2

Excellent

First time I've ever heard of such romantic cats, mystery writer. Maybe they've both been neutered. Or maybe it was an after-'naughties' kiss

Seriously, top rhyme and a sweet read.

Good luck and best wishes, Ted

 Comment Written 14-Apr-2014

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reply by the author on 14-Apr-2014

Thanks Ted, for the wonderful review.I

Comment from mfowler

Excellent

Your image sets the feline firting front and centre. You match it with a great little poem (15 words) set to a monorhyme. I like the idea of a moonlight walk - very romantic; and what else would two cats do? I really like the finish with one pussy showing decorum and restraint. No tomcatter is that one! Good luck in teh contest!

 Comment Written 14-Apr-2014

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reply by the author on 14-Apr-2014

I am pleased you enjoyed the poem, thanks for your encouraging review

Comment from emrpoems

Excellent

a walk in the moonlight
my feline love of delight
last kiss now, good night
outstanding presentation of your poem that is written in fifteen words but tell a whole romance story.
God luck in the contest

 Comment Written 14-Apr-2014

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reply by the author on 14-Apr-2014

thank you for your good luck wishes I appreciate it.

Comment from c_lucas

Excellent

This looks like it is contender material. Your short poem is very well written with a smooth flow of words, making for a very good read. Good luck in your contest.

 Comment Written 14-Apr-2014

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reply by the author on 14-Apr-2014

I am so pleased you consider it a good contender, I appreciate your great review.

reply by c_lucas on 14-Apr-2014

You're welcome. Charlie