Comment from weebert3

Excellent

Very poignant poem! It really touched me to the core. The title makes it even more morose. I used to work in a sheet metal factory, and knew a young man who played the guitar. He lost a couple of finger to an industrial press. I'm sorry for your lost.

Weebert3

 Comment Written 14-Apr-2014

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reply by the author on 14-Apr-2014

Thank you for the excellent review.

Comment from wordsmatter2me

Excellent

I can only say Ouch! I like the way you take accidents to a new photographic poem for life's tall man. So heartbreaking to see am an injured. Good Luck for the writing prompt entry contest.

 Comment Written 14-Apr-2014

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reply by the author on 14-Apr-2014

Thanks for giving this look.

Comment from Jay Squires

Excellent

Well, I don't know, but it seems like there's a story behind this poem. Since damage to a hand doesn't make a person smaller, I'm thinking you're using it to describe a blow to a vain man's attitude.

 Comment Written 13-Apr-2014

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reply by the author on 13-Apr-2014

I was referring to the middle finger which in a kid's game is known as tall man. Thank you fall the kind review.