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Just a few words of inspriation

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Comment from Silent1rose
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This poem hits me deep, because I've been going through a really stressful point in my life where only God can fix my problems. I must not let stress ruin me, but let God do what he needs to do. Thank you for sharing this with us. ~ Rose

 Comment Written 02-Sep-2014

reply by the author on 03-Sep-2014
    Aw thank you Silent1Rose! I'm glad you received the message that God wants all His children to know. We must love thy neighbor as ourselves by helping someone when we get the opportunity to do so. It pleases God when we obey His holy word. So sorry to hear you've been going through difficult times, haven't we all at some point are another, "Come unto me, all ye that labor and are heavy laden, and I will give you rest". God said to bring Him all your burdens and He'll fix it in His own way and in his own time! He's able! He gave his instructions in His commandments, happy are those who abide by His teachings. Again thank you for such a wonderful comment! Keep your chin up Rose! God is already working it out for you! Wishing you many blessings! ;)


Comment from Karen B.
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What beautiful words of wisdom, and so true. There are so many who are weary and need God's grace more than ever. Even the smallest act of kindness can mean so much as is shown in your illustration. Very well written 5-7-5.

 Comment Written 02-Sep-2014

reply by the author on 02-Sep-2014
    It pleases God when we have an opportunity to help someone, then we should help them. We shouldn't have as many people walking the streets hungry or in homeless shelters when we can just lend a helping hand. He said, "We should love our neighbors just as ourselves. If only more people would take heed! Thank you Karen B! I really do appreciate your warm and friendly review! May God bless you!
Comment from NicciFaye
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Is it not? God's grace is truly endless and His mercy is ever enduring. A wonderful and timeless message. We CAN do all things through Christ whom gives us strength. Lovely!

 Comment Written 07-Aug-2014

reply by the author on 15-Aug-2014
    With faith, oh yes we can! God is a miracle worker and He is worthy to be praise for all His grace and glory for ever.
Comment from ElegantButler
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I love talking to God when I am alone and kitty is sleeping. I thank Him for her and ask for blessings for him family. I give thanks for both the simple and the profound. I also love to joke with Him, suggesting for example that a wrong Bingo call was meant for a nice old lady in Milewaukee.

 Comment Written 06-Jun-2014

reply by the author on 06-Jun-2014
    :) Having a good relationship with our Heaven Father is comforting and assuring. We can talk to Him about anything, of course, He already knows what each of us stand in need of...He created all us, this world and everything in it belongs to Him. And most of all what pleases Him is our obedience to His Holy word. Remembering the ten commandments and loving thy God with everything that we are. Acknowledge Him in everything that we do by giving Him the thanks and praise! Love thy neighbor as thy self meaning, if we have an opportunity to help someone then we should do this. This is pleasing to God.
Comment from GracieAnn
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DD, you have nailed this 5-7-5 with perfect line and syllable count. The spiritual message is moving and strong. Great work honoring our Lord! :0 GracieAnn
I live not far from Dallas.

 Comment Written 05-Jun-2014

reply by the author on 06-Jun-2014
    Many thanks GracieAnn! We are so near one another! East Texas so beautiful, I reside just outside of Tyler, Texas! I'm thinking about posting a couple of my religious ebooks and I'm trying to decide if I'd like to try a subscription for one month or one week. :) Thanks again for your wonderful review my neighboring friend!
Comment from adewpearl
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perfect pairing of artwork and poem, which is in excellent 5/7/5 syllable count
good assonance and consonance in stress is intense
good alliteration in God's grace
a beautifully reassuring poem of faith
Brooke

 Comment Written 31-May-2014

reply by the author on 31-May-2014
    Oh thank you so much for your kind and generous review!!
Comment from jonmichael
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This is a quiet piece with so much clarity. The simplicity in word choice gives the message a stronger current. And of course the characters have a universality that crosses gender, race, and cultural lines. Very good poem.

 Comment Written 29-May-2014

reply by the author on 29-May-2014
    Thank you jonmichael! I really do appreciate your kind review!! :)
Comment from Selina Stambi
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His grace is sufficient for me ....

What a beautiful little piece. You've got the required syllabic count in each line. You're good to go, DD!

Best wishes in the contest. Welcome to Fanstory. So nice to meet you. :)

Sonali xxx



God's (g)race is endless

 Comment Written 09-Apr-2014

reply by the author on 10-Apr-2014
    Oh thank you so much Sonali! Such a pretty name! Blessings to you! :)
Comment from evilynne
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A very good thought provoking message. It is easy to read and understand. As far as I can tell it follows correctly the required poetic form. Good luck in the contest!

 Comment Written 09-Apr-2014

reply by the author on 10-Apr-2014
    Thank you so much! May God be the Glory! :)