Comment from Robert Lee Brown

Excellent

Debbie, this is a really good write with mono rhyme and refrain. This is an excellent demonstration of your poetic skills. Thanks for sharing this with your friend, Bob

 Comment Written 11-Apr-2014

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reply by the author on 17-Apr-2014

Thank you for your kind words. Take care, my friend~Debbie

Comment from adewpearl

Excellent

I like your choice of refrain line
good use of monorhyming
a lovely celebratory tone in this tribute to poetry :-) Brooke

 Comment Written 10-Apr-2014

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reply by the author on 10-Apr-2014

Thank you, so much, my friend~Debbie

Comment from krys123

Excellent

Debbie, quite a really well done piece of poetry that examines the truth in writing such. You actually don't embellish the necessities of writing a poem but you tackling captivate the reader on how it is achieved most elegantly.
This shows your creativeness, inventiveness and resourcefulness in writing such poetry. Thank you for sharing and posting your work for others and may the Lord be with you always.
Alex

 Comment Written 09-Apr-2014

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reply by the author on 09-Apr-2014

Thank you, my friend. Have a blessed evening~Debbie

reply by krys123 on 09-Apr-2014

Debbie, you are so welcome.
Alex

Comment from Petriesan

Excellent

With pen and notebook I await
The word fIow I anticipate


for me, could be all week. . . .

you, it seems to work better. .and yes, I do appreciate the things you write

 Comment Written 09-Apr-2014

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reply by the author on 09-Apr-2014

Thank you for your kind words and review~Debbie

Comment from mumsyone

Excellent

With pen and notebook I await
The word fIow I anticipate
Strung together they will create
Poetry to appreciate

Nice quatrains, Debbie, with good mono-rhymes and a smooth flow.

Hugs,
Lois

 Comment Written 09-Apr-2014

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reply by the author on 09-Apr-2014

Thank you so much, Lois. Hugs, Debbie

Comment from royowen

Excellent

Great hope declaring poem! Very clever same sound rhyming! The descriptive narrative Is exceptional, " power of death and life, and those that love it will eat its fruit! Well done, Debbie, blessings, Roy.

 Comment Written 09-Apr-2014

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reply by the author on 09-Apr-2014

Thank you, my friend. Have a blessed evening~Debbie

Comment from Phyllis Stewart

Excellent

Yay! I appreciate this poem, Debbie. You've ended each line with the same sound. Monorhyme is not common and not easy to do, but you used it really well here. :)

 Comment Written 09-Apr-2014

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reply by the author on 09-Apr-2014

Thanks, Phyllis. I didn't start out to write a monoruhyne. It justhappened,~Debbie

Comment from Carolyn 'Deaton' Stephens

Excellent

You are on a roll.... I especially enjoyed the third verse.
Beautiful imagery is great
Moods are likely to elevate
Our inner peace they stimulate
Poetry to appreciate
Well on, :-) Carolyn

 Comment Written 09-Apr-2014

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reply by the author on 10-Apr-2014

Thank you, my friend. Hugs, Debbie

Comment from Gungalo

Excellent

Words to which we can relate
Provoking thoughts we will debate
Joyful poems we celebrate
Poetry to appreciate

Beautiful Debbie. Poetry has always been something wonderful and you have made it even better.

 Comment Written 09-Apr-2014

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reply by the author on 10-Apr-2014

That is very kind. Thank you, my friend~Debbie

reply by Gungalo on 10-Apr-2014

Smile.

Comment from Deborah Marie

Excellent

Lovely poem to appreciate with impressive photo. Love your progression, rhythm, flow and clever wording. Thanks for sharing, Deb

 Comment Written 09-Apr-2014

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reply by the author on 10-Apr-2014

Thank you, my friend~Debbie