Writing Prompt Entries 2014
Viewing comments for Chapter 27 "Did Someone Say Something?"The clue is in the title!
7 total reviews
Comment from wordsmatter2me
Congratulations on your contest entry! I like your attitude as for all the selective hearing for this I know you are wonderful Mom with a great sense of humor and a fantastic poet of the 5-7-5 style of poetry.
reply by the author on 14-Apr-2014
Congratulations on your contest entry! I like your attitude as for all the selective hearing for this I know you are wonderful Mom with a great sense of humor and a fantastic poet of the 5-7-5 style of poetry.
Comment Written 13-Apr-2014
reply by the author on 14-Apr-2014
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Hi! Thank you so much for your wonderful feedback and generous 6 star award! I'm blushing at your comments :) So glad you enjoyed this little bit of fun :) Kindest regards as always, Debra
Comment from Smoothiecool
congratulations on your win
this was well executed for a 5-7-5
your images tell so much in so few words
flows well easy read
cheers Smoothiecool
reply by the author on 11-Apr-2014
congratulations on your win
this was well executed for a 5-7-5
your images tell so much in so few words
flows well easy read
cheers Smoothiecool
Comment Written 11-Apr-2014
reply by the author on 11-Apr-2014
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Thank you Smoothiecool for your great comments and message of Congratulations. I appreciate it! Kindest regards, Debra :)
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most welcome..SC
Comment from LoannaLois
The word police is having me start over...but I had written what I think: it is wonderfully funny! I thought you were having a mini-melt-down until I got to the great third line.
reply by the author on 09-Apr-2014
The word police is having me start over...but I had written what I think: it is wonderfully funny! I thought you were having a mini-melt-down until I got to the great third line.
Comment Written 08-Apr-2014
reply by the author on 09-Apr-2014
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Hi loannalois :) thank you for your great feedback. Glad to share a laugh with you! Kindest regards ...:)
Comment from Karen B.
Ha, ha, I can definitely relate to this, as can many here no doubt. :) A unique and well-written 5-7-5. Best wishes in the contest.
reply by the author on 09-Apr-2014
Ha, ha, I can definitely relate to this, as can many here no doubt. :) A unique and well-written 5-7-5. Best wishes in the contest.
Comment Written 08-Apr-2014
reply by the author on 09-Apr-2014
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Hi Karen :) thank you for your great feedback and good luck wishes. I appreciate both! Kindest regards ...:)
Comment from rjuselius
"Selective deafness;
No one hears a word I say,
'til I mention food."
there's food for thought:) thank you for sharing this amusing piece of poetry!
good luck in the contest!
rebekka x
reply by the author on 08-Apr-2014
"Selective deafness;
No one hears a word I say,
'til I mention food."
there's food for thought:) thank you for sharing this amusing piece of poetry!
good luck in the contest!
rebekka x
Comment Written 08-Apr-2014
reply by the author on 08-Apr-2014
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Hi rebekka :) thank you for your great feedback and good luck wishes. I appreciate both! Kindest regards...:)
Comment from Pegcook
Oh, this is too good! All syllables are present and accounted for. This 5-7-5 speaks nothing but the truth. I think I belong in the "no one hears a word I say" circle with you. You have brought to light a dilemma shared by many. Thanks for posting. (By the way, I am still chuckling!)
reply by the author on 08-Apr-2014
Oh, this is too good! All syllables are present and accounted for. This 5-7-5 speaks nothing but the truth. I think I belong in the "no one hears a word I say" circle with you. You have brought to light a dilemma shared by many. Thanks for posting. (By the way, I am still chuckling!)
Comment Written 08-Apr-2014
reply by the author on 08-Apr-2014
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Hi peg :) thank you for your great feedback, so happy to share a laugh with you! Kindest regards ...:) x
Comment from Shirley E Kennedy
I love the very essence of the idea you have planted here.
I can easily relate to the words of the poem and suffer a similar
fate myself.
Selective deafness is certainly alive and well at least in the young.
To be fair though, I guess we van all turn a blind eye and deaf ear when it suits us.Lol.
reply by the author on 08-Apr-2014
I love the very essence of the idea you have planted here.
I can easily relate to the words of the poem and suffer a similar
fate myself.
Selective deafness is certainly alive and well at least in the young.
To be fair though, I guess we van all turn a blind eye and deaf ear when it suits us.Lol.
Comment Written 08-Apr-2014
reply by the author on 08-Apr-2014
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Hi seken58, thank you for your great feedback. Got to admit to deliberately turning my ears off from time to time too lol! Kindest regards ...:)