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Viewing comments for Chapter 27 "Did Someone Say Something?"
The clue is in the title!

7 total reviews 
Comment from wordsmatter2me
Exceptional
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Congratulations on your contest entry! I like your attitude as for all the selective hearing for this I know you are wonderful Mom with a great sense of humor and a fantastic poet of the 5-7-5 style of poetry.

 Comment Written 13-Apr-2014


reply by the author on 14-Apr-2014
    Hi! Thank you so much for your wonderful feedback and generous 6 star award! I'm blushing at your comments :) So glad you enjoyed this little bit of fun :) Kindest regards as always, Debra
Comment from Smoothiecool
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congratulations on your win
this was well executed for a 5-7-5
your images tell so much in so few words

flows well easy read
cheers Smoothiecool

 Comment Written 11-Apr-2014


reply by the author on 11-Apr-2014
    Thank you Smoothiecool for your great comments and message of Congratulations. I appreciate it! Kindest regards, Debra :)
reply by Smoothiecool on 11-Apr-2014
    most welcome..SC
Comment from LoannaLois
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The word police is having me start over...but I had written what I think: it is wonderfully funny! I thought you were having a mini-melt-down until I got to the great third line.

 Comment Written 08-Apr-2014


reply by the author on 09-Apr-2014
    Hi loannalois :) thank you for your great feedback. Glad to share a laugh with you! Kindest regards ...:)
Comment from Karen B.
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Ha, ha, I can definitely relate to this, as can many here no doubt. :) A unique and well-written 5-7-5. Best wishes in the contest.

 Comment Written 08-Apr-2014


reply by the author on 09-Apr-2014
    Hi Karen :) thank you for your great feedback and good luck wishes. I appreciate both! Kindest regards ...:)
Comment from rjuselius
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"Selective deafness;
No one hears a word I say,
'til I mention food."
there's food for thought:) thank you for sharing this amusing piece of poetry!
good luck in the contest!

rebekka x

 Comment Written 08-Apr-2014


reply by the author on 08-Apr-2014
    Hi rebekka :) thank you for your great feedback and good luck wishes. I appreciate both! Kindest regards...:)
Comment from Pegcook
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Oh, this is too good! All syllables are present and accounted for. This 5-7-5 speaks nothing but the truth. I think I belong in the "no one hears a word I say" circle with you. You have brought to light a dilemma shared by many. Thanks for posting. (By the way, I am still chuckling!)

 Comment Written 08-Apr-2014


reply by the author on 08-Apr-2014
    Hi peg :) thank you for your great feedback, so happy to share a laugh with you! Kindest regards ...:) x
Comment from Shirley E Kennedy
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I love the very essence of the idea you have planted here.
I can easily relate to the words of the poem and suffer a similar
fate myself.
Selective deafness is certainly alive and well at least in the young.
To be fair though, I guess we van all turn a blind eye and deaf ear when it suits us.Lol.

 Comment Written 08-Apr-2014


reply by the author on 08-Apr-2014
    Hi seken58, thank you for your great feedback. Got to admit to deliberately turning my ears off from time to time too lol! Kindest regards ...:)