National Poetry Month
Viewing comments for Chapter 7 "tanka suite (cold wind, gray skies)"Thirty poems in Thirty Days
10 total reviews
Comment from Jumbo J
Hi Debbie,
what a wonderfully composed set of Tanka's... the visual quality of insight was a true delight... every suite had a view.
The layout, colour scheme and construction is beautiful.
A true delight my dear friend.
With our thoughts we create,
visual words,
James xx
So happy someone has addressed your need for pain relief... I know how draining that emotion can leave you, not to mention all of pain's wonderful side affects.
Also, sorry for my short absence... to review with such a blankness behind my eyes would have been a lie... I'm just so dull in my head at the moment.
reply by the author on 10-Apr-2014
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Hi Debbie,
what a wonderfully composed set of Tanka's... the visual quality of insight was a true delight... every suite had a view.
The layout, colour scheme and construction is beautiful.
A true delight my dear friend.
With our thoughts we create,
visual words,
James xx
So happy someone has addressed your need for pain relief... I know how draining that emotion can leave you, not to mention all of pain's wonderful side affects.
Also, sorry for my short absence... to review with such a blankness behind my eyes would have been a lie... I'm just so dull in my head at the moment.
Comment Written 08-Apr-2014
reply by the author on 10-Apr-2014
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Thank you again, dear friend. Are you okay? Debbie xx
Comment from GracieAnn
Debbie, you have accomplished four writes that stand on their own or accents, contrasts or shows the relationships in the various seasons. I enjoyed them all. Effective emotive words chosen. :0 GracieAnn
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Debbie, you have accomplished four writes that stand on their own or accents, contrasts or shows the relationships in the various seasons. I enjoyed them all. Effective emotive words chosen. :0 GracieAnn
Comment Written 08-Apr-2014
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Thank you, my friend~Debbie
Comment from Phyllis Stewart
Lovely batch of tankas here, one for each season of the year. In just a few words, you've nailed the essence of each perfectly. :)
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Lovely batch of tankas here, one for each season of the year. In just a few words, you've nailed the essence of each perfectly. :)
Comment Written 08-Apr-2014
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Thank you, my friend~Debbie
Comment from NicciFaye
This is a expectoinally well put together tanka suite. Each stanza is beautiful and well thought out. You've provided a beautiful essence to the picture you chose. Well done piece.
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This is a expectoinally well put together tanka suite. Each stanza is beautiful and well thought out. You've provided a beautiful essence to the picture you chose. Well done piece.
Comment Written 08-Apr-2014
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Thank you, my friend~Debbie
Comment from Robert Lee Brown
Debbie, hope you get he relief from your pain that you hope for. I feels so good to be pain free.
This is an excellent write about the four season. The words you chose, describe the feeling of that season. A very good write. Thanks for sharing. Bob
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Debbie, hope you get he relief from your pain that you hope for. I feels so good to be pain free.
This is an excellent write about the four season. The words you chose, describe the feeling of that season. A very good write. Thanks for sharing. Bob
Comment Written 07-Apr-2014
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Thank you, my friend. I am not pain-free but it is quite a bit better~Debbie
Comment from Carolyn 'Deaton' Stephens
I like your Tanka cluster as I called it. It flowed from season to season with ease and great visuals.
squirrels scurry storing food ..
I only hope we have lots of warm days before that happens again. LOL .. Love you, Carolyn
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I like your Tanka cluster as I called it. It flowed from season to season with ease and great visuals.
squirrels scurry storing food ..
I only hope we have lots of warm days before that happens again. LOL .. Love you, Carolyn
Comment Written 07-Apr-2014
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After I wrote this, I looked out the window and there was a squirrel scurrying. Hugs, my friend~Debbie
Comment from JW
This is an interesting post. Four seasons - four tankas. Each tanka aligned with a season.
I'm glad to hear that you are finally going to get relief from your pain.
Thanks for sharing this. JW
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This is an interesting post. Four seasons - four tankas. Each tanka aligned with a season.
I'm glad to hear that you are finally going to get relief from your pain.
Thanks for sharing this. JW
Comment Written 07-Apr-2014
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Thank you, my friend. I do feel much better!~Debbie
Comment from royowen
What a beautiful tanka suite you have composed Debbie, they are superb examples of this particular poetic discipline! A wonderful collection of exhortation to the four seasons! Well done, great job! Blessings, are you feeling well? Blessings, Roy.
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What a beautiful tanka suite you have composed Debbie, they are superb examples of this particular poetic discipline! A wonderful collection of exhortation to the four seasons! Well done, great job! Blessings, are you feeling well? Blessings, Roy.
Comment Written 07-Apr-2014
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Thank you. Yes, I am feeling much better. Have a blessed day~Debbie
Comment from Deborah Marie
Lovely suite of tankas. Title and photo go well together. Love your use of clever descriptive words. Nice progression, rhythm and flow, Deb
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Lovely suite of tankas. Title and photo go well together. Love your use of clever descriptive words. Nice progression, rhythm and flow, Deb
Comment Written 07-Apr-2014
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Thank you, my friend~Debbie
Comment from Maureen's Pen
Dear Debbie - Your tanka suite is well penned with great images. Your word choices pump this up some for me. At present we are having the gray skies and rain storm...this fits in perfectly. Nicely penned set - I enjoyed the read.
Thanks for sharing it.
Maureen
P.S. - glad you got your meds:)
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Dear Debbie - Your tanka suite is well penned with great images. Your word choices pump this up some for me. At present we are having the gray skies and rain storm...this fits in perfectly. Nicely penned set - I enjoyed the read.
Thanks for sharing it.
Maureen
P.S. - glad you got your meds:)
Comment Written 07-Apr-2014
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Thank you so very much, my friend. It is nice to feel better and to have a doctor who seems to care~Debbie