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Love long love gone

It is a distant but gone love affair.

3 total reviews 
Comment from 9999pool
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After loving each other for so long and now they are gone. There is a never ending dreaming about them.
Every familiar object they have touched, reminds us of them constantly.
Nostalgia of a loved one does not go away but helps us to live again.
Good write and well expressed.
Good luck to the contest.
Cheerio, best, Ritchie. :))

 Comment Written 25-Apr-2014


reply by the author on 25-Apr-2014
    Thank You Ritchie,you broke it down well.
reply by 9999pool on 25-Apr-2014
    Thank you. My pleasure. :))
Comment from Pegcook
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The message in this 5-7-5 poem is clear, but I'm not sure the lines are 5-7-5. I found 8, not 7, syllables in the last line. You might want to check it out. (If I miscounted, please correct me).

And when I put on my proof reader hat, I need to ask about the first line. It's probably a typo, but I wonder if you intended to use "you're" instead of "your".

Your idea is really good, don't give up!

I hope you reply because I will upgrade the "4 stars" to "5 stars"

 Comment Written 07-Apr-2014


reply by the author on 08-Apr-2014
    Thank you Peg i will check that out, i appreciate the honesty.
Comment from DonandVicki
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A sad refrain about a lost love and written in so few words never the less the message comes through loud and clear to this reader. Well composed 5-7-5. Don and Vicki

 Comment Written 07-Apr-2014


reply by the author on 08-Apr-2014
    I really appreciate your comments thank you and they are very helpful.