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Viewing comments for Chapter 6 "Reflections of Self"Thirty poems in Thirty Days
17 total reviews
Comment from Ricky1024
Adjective Content-*****
Nicely penned.
I've written in Poetic "Poesh" style and just wrote my own renindition of "Whitman's "Leaves of Grass!"{
{Copy write about 1830?
Flow-****
Flows nice but a short piece I am a ranked short script writer and Slam-poet of Laureate teaching at Rutgers here in Jersey.
Grammar-*****
No viable or viable errors.
Pronounciational Appeal-******
Perfect.
Pronounceable Ability to Write-
No stars means here that I can not help you but to lengthen and make it more griven, poets like that.
Objecti8ve Content-*****
Based on imagery, theme of grief and on a scale of 1-100. Hmm...
A good piece nice art, 95.
Complete Synopsis-*****
A six stared "Blue-Ribboned Piece" deservedly.
Correct mine and I shall too, for you Miss Deb.
Thanks,
24.
reply by the author on 17-Apr-2014
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Adjective Content-*****
Nicely penned.
I've written in Poetic "Poesh" style and just wrote my own renindition of "Whitman's "Leaves of Grass!"{
{Copy write about 1830?
Flow-****
Flows nice but a short piece I am a ranked short script writer and Slam-poet of Laureate teaching at Rutgers here in Jersey.
Grammar-*****
No viable or viable errors.
Pronounciational Appeal-******
Perfect.
Pronounceable Ability to Write-
No stars means here that I can not help you but to lengthen and make it more griven, poets like that.
Objecti8ve Content-*****
Based on imagery, theme of grief and on a scale of 1-100. Hmm...
A good piece nice art, 95.
Complete Synopsis-*****
A six stared "Blue-Ribboned Piece" deservedly.
Correct mine and I shall too, for you Miss Deb.
Thanks,
24.
Comment Written 15-Apr-2014
reply by the author on 17-Apr-2014
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Thank you, my friend~Debbie
Comment from GracieAnn
DEbbie, this is an extremely creative look at how a person may perceive their self's chasing them. Interesting concept. Hide and go seek, so to speak. Well done. :0 GracieAnn
reply by the author on 10-Apr-2014
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DEbbie, this is an extremely creative look at how a person may perceive their self's chasing them. Interesting concept. Hide and go seek, so to speak. Well done. :0 GracieAnn
Comment Written 08-Apr-2014
reply by the author on 10-Apr-2014
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Thank you, my friend~Debbie
Comment from krys123
Debbie, you effectively and most distinctly usual words in this poem so easily that creates a fun type of read. In your rhymes are neither forced, labored or strained and the rhythm obviously flows smoothly throughout your poem. Thank you so much for sharing and posting your work for everyone and may the Lord be with you always.
Alex
reply by the author on 10-Apr-2014
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Debbie, you effectively and most distinctly usual words in this poem so easily that creates a fun type of read. In your rhymes are neither forced, labored or strained and the rhythm obviously flows smoothly throughout your poem. Thank you so much for sharing and posting your work for everyone and may the Lord be with you always.
Alex
Comment Written 08-Apr-2014
reply by the author on 10-Apr-2014
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Thank you, my friend. Have a blessed day~Debbie
Comment from Selina Stambi
So, true!
I remember times in my life when I've told myself, 'you'd better buck up and like what's inside your head, because you can never run away from it!'
Wonderfully positive and quite uplifting in a way, dear Debbie!
Hope you have a lovely week. :)
xxx
Sonali :)
reply by the author on 10-Apr-2014
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So, true!
I remember times in my life when I've told myself, 'you'd better buck up and like what's inside your head, because you can never run away from it!'
Wonderfully positive and quite uplifting in a way, dear Debbie!
Hope you have a lovely week. :)
xxx
Sonali :)
Comment Written 08-Apr-2014
reply by the author on 10-Apr-2014
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Thank you, my friend~Debbie
Comment from Terrie DeGolier
I never thought of that before but your so right, we are always there in reflections of any form whether glass, water, or even some ones eyes. Beautiful picture by the way. Terrie
reply by the author on 10-Apr-2014
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I never thought of that before but your so right, we are always there in reflections of any form whether glass, water, or even some ones eyes. Beautiful picture by the way. Terrie
Comment Written 08-Apr-2014
reply by the author on 10-Apr-2014
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Thank you, my friend~Debbie
Comment from RGstar
My saying is;
you can't hide from yourself, anywhere you go, there you are, look in the mirror what do you see, only you.
A nice little write and a journey into ones own self.
A nice calm image and a nice layout.
Have a great day,
RG
reply by the author on 10-Apr-2014
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My saying is;
you can't hide from yourself, anywhere you go, there you are, look in the mirror what do you see, only you.
A nice little write and a journey into ones own self.
A nice calm image and a nice layout.
Have a great day,
RG
Comment Written 08-Apr-2014
reply by the author on 10-Apr-2014
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Thank you, my friend~Debbie
Comment from Carolyn 'Deaton' Stephens
Your poem is so very true. We are visible to ourselves no matter where we are. Reflections of Self is well written and meaningful. Love, Carolyn
reply by the author on 10-Apr-2014
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Your poem is so very true. We are visible to ourselves no matter where we are. Reflections of Self is well written and meaningful. Love, Carolyn
Comment Written 07-Apr-2014
reply by the author on 10-Apr-2014
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Thank you, my friend~Debbie
Comment from Robert Lee Brown
This is a very reflective write about seeing one's self. We can't run away from ourselves because each of us is the center of our own private world of experiences. To others, we are what we do but to ourselves we can play different roles. Still, in the end, we are what we do. Thanks for sharing. Bob
reply by the author on 10-Apr-2014
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This is a very reflective write about seeing one's self. We can't run away from ourselves because each of us is the center of our own private world of experiences. To others, we are what we do but to ourselves we can play different roles. Still, in the end, we are what we do. Thanks for sharing. Bob
Comment Written 07-Apr-2014
reply by the author on 10-Apr-2014
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Thamk you so very much, My friend. Take care~Debbie
Comment from barbara.wilkey
I feel is one doesn't love themselves there's no way they can completely love anybody else. If you don't stand up for yourself, I doubt if anybody else will. I enjoyed reading your poem.
reply by the author on 10-Apr-2014
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I feel is one doesn't love themselves there's no way they can completely love anybody else. If you don't stand up for yourself, I doubt if anybody else will. I enjoyed reading your poem.
Comment Written 07-Apr-2014
reply by the author on 10-Apr-2014
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Thank you again, my friend. Have a blessed day~Debbie
Comment from Maureen's Pen
Dear Debbie - yes indeed a great nugget of wisdom in this one. Well penned and easy to digest. Loving of self is the first priority - until we know what love is within we can't share it outside of ourselves.
Thanks for sharing this one - I liked it.
Maureen
reply by the author on 10-Apr-2014
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Dear Debbie - yes indeed a great nugget of wisdom in this one. Well penned and easy to digest. Loving of self is the first priority - until we know what love is within we can't share it outside of ourselves.
Thanks for sharing this one - I liked it.
Maureen
Comment Written 07-Apr-2014
reply by the author on 10-Apr-2014
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Thank you, my friend. Glad you enjoyed this~Debbie