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Viewing comments for Chapter 13 "A Promise of Forever"Collection of Flash, Micro, etc.
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Comment from melyuki
Hi there Sis, oh how those words bring shivers to the spine.... so well expressed in those few words, where feelings say more than readers may ever truly know.... welcome back to writing lovely lady.... I know how long you've waited to find a moment to yourself to do this again... yay... and of course, best of the best in luck in the contest .. luv ya, little Sis xoxox
reply by the author on 08-Apr-2014
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Hi there Sis, oh how those words bring shivers to the spine.... so well expressed in those few words, where feelings say more than readers may ever truly know.... welcome back to writing lovely lady.... I know how long you've waited to find a moment to yourself to do this again... yay... and of course, best of the best in luck in the contest .. luv ya, little Sis xoxox
Comment Written 08-Apr-2014
reply by the author on 08-Apr-2014
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Just had to put these words to paper and yes it did send chills through me...just remembering those dark days. Thanks to my favorite cheerleader and supporter...appreciate the bling! Love you always..Sis
Comment from Trybuck
It's never too late to Begin Again
It's good to see you posting again. Hope this one does well for you in the contest. Well done, Buck
reply by the author on 07-Apr-2014
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It's never too late to Begin Again
It's good to see you posting again. Hope this one does well for you in the contest. Well done, Buck
Comment Written 06-Apr-2014
reply by the author on 07-Apr-2014
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Thank you so much....a bit rusty and time is limited but I really need to return to what I love. Smiles to you
Comment from IndianaIrish
Carol, I'm sooooo thrilled to see you back here and hope to read kore of your talented writing. I like your contest entry as it is a complete story in fifty words. Please check, but I think eye lids is one word eyelids. If it is, you'll have to add another word somewhere to make it fifty.
It's so good to see you here, Carol.
Smiles,
Karyn : )
reply by the author on 07-Apr-2014
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Carol, I'm sooooo thrilled to see you back here and hope to read kore of your talented writing. I like your contest entry as it is a complete story in fifty words. Please check, but I think eye lids is one word eyelids. If it is, you'll have to add another word somewhere to make it fifty.
It's so good to see you here, Carol.
Smiles,
Karyn : )
Comment Written 06-Apr-2014
reply by the author on 07-Apr-2014
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I thought of you and our "Irish Friends" at St Patrick Day and wished I'd written another fun story. Thanks for the encouragement as always. Smiles to you.
Comment from barbara.wilkey
I am glad to see you are back and writing. This is a very strong contest entry for your first write. I enjoyed reading. Good luck with the contest.
reply by the author on 07-Apr-2014
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I am glad to see you are back and writing. This is a very strong contest entry for your first write. I enjoyed reading. Good luck with the contest.
Comment Written 06-Apr-2014
reply by the author on 07-Apr-2014
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Thanks Barbara..time is limited and this old mind is a bit rusty but I still want to do what I love...writing. Appreciate the encouragement.
Comment from c_lucas
Some times, I is a matter of Faith and Love This is very well written with a smooth flow of words making for a good read.
Good luck in your contest.
reply by the author on 07-Apr-2014
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Some times, I is a matter of Faith and Love This is very well written with a smooth flow of words making for a good read.
Good luck in your contest.
Comment Written 06-Apr-2014
reply by the author on 07-Apr-2014
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Dear friend...thanks for the kind words and the encouragement. I truly appreciate it after all this time.
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You're welcome. B. Charlie
Comment from Sasha
This is deeply moving and pulled at my heart as I read it. It is difficult to include emotion, character, plot, conflict and resolution all in just fifty words, but you did just that. Very very nice work with this one. It is a terrific entry for this contest and I wish you all the best. It is so nice to have you back.
reply by the author on 07-Apr-2014
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This is deeply moving and pulled at my heart as I read it. It is difficult to include emotion, character, plot, conflict and resolution all in just fifty words, but you did just that. Very very nice work with this one. It is a terrific entry for this contest and I wish you all the best. It is so nice to have you back.
Comment Written 06-Apr-2014
reply by the author on 07-Apr-2014
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Valerie, you are a special person and I really appreciate your thoughtful words. I'm a bit rusty but hope to get back into the swing of things at least a little bit.
Comment from misscookie
I love the words to your poem
It truly touched me deeply .I know our hope our strength comes from our faith.
Thank you for sharing.
reply by the author on 07-Apr-2014
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I love the words to your poem
It truly touched me deeply .I know our hope our strength comes from our faith.
Thank you for sharing.
Comment Written 06-Apr-2014
reply by the author on 07-Apr-2014
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Hey Miss Cookie...long time no talk to...glad to be back and thanks for the kind words.
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Once again are very welcome and welcome back, have a blessed day again my friend welcome back You
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Once again are very welcome and welcome back, have a blessed day again my friend welcome back You
Comment from Sloegin
Well done. You got your message across and left me thinking. Your verbiage is good.
One question. She held his lifeless hand. Do you need "lifeless?" It makes it sound like he's dead.
Good writing, keep it up.
sloegin
reply by the author on 07-Apr-2014
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Well done. You got your message across and left me thinking. Your verbiage is good.
One question. She held his lifeless hand. Do you need "lifeless?" It makes it sound like he's dead.
Good writing, keep it up.
sloegin
Comment Written 06-Apr-2014
reply by the author on 07-Apr-2014
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Thank you for your suggestion. I appreciate any help this ole rusty lady can get. Smiles to you
Comment from lancellot
Very good. you have emotion, character, plot, conflict and resolution all in a short fifty words. You even manage to have the reader cheering for those eyes to open too. Well done.
reply by the author on 07-Apr-2014
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Very good. you have emotion, character, plot, conflict and resolution all in a short fifty words. You even manage to have the reader cheering for those eyes to open too. Well done.
Comment Written 06-Apr-2014
reply by the author on 07-Apr-2014
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Thank you for the kind words and thoughts. I really appreciate you taking time to read my little entry.
Comment from adewpearl
typo - We're the doctors wrong - drop the apostrophe
You set the stage effectively
and introduce the main characters well
You express the intense emotions of the woman well as she watches over her ill/injured husband/partner
You tell just enough of the story that the reader can fill in the blanks
a compelling ending
Brooke
reply by the author on 06-Apr-2014
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typo - We're the doctors wrong - drop the apostrophe
You set the stage effectively
and introduce the main characters well
You express the intense emotions of the woman well as she watches over her ill/injured husband/partner
You tell just enough of the story that the reader can fill in the blanks
a compelling ending
Brooke
Comment Written 06-Apr-2014
reply by the author on 06-Apr-2014
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Thanks Brooke...Stupid mistake on my part. Guess I'm rusty. LOL Hope all is well with you!
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It is good to see you again - I was surprised when your name popped up in my notifications :-)
