Alone...
Fear of strangers in the dark...9 total reviews
Comment from DDLacy
Awesome! Intense but very true, two fools really shouldn't go wandering alone at night because you never know what awaits in the shadows prepared to strike! I enjoyed your poem and best of luck in the contest!
reply by the author on 23-Apr-2014
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Awesome! Intense but very true, two fools really shouldn't go wandering alone at night because you never know what awaits in the shadows prepared to strike! I enjoyed your poem and best of luck in the contest!
Comment Written 23-Apr-2014
reply by the author on 23-Apr-2014
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Thanks! :) I appreciate your review. HAGD - have a great day!
Comment from Smoothiecool
good luck in the contest
you have all the requirements for the contest
good alliteration in
faceless, form, fast
face, fear
great enjambment to allow verse to flow
yes walking alone at midnight can at times cause one to fear
flows well easy read
cheers Smoothiecool
reply by the author on 07-Apr-2014
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good luck in the contest
you have all the requirements for the contest
good alliteration in
faceless, form, fast
face, fear
great enjambment to allow verse to flow
yes walking alone at midnight can at times cause one to fear
flows well easy read
cheers Smoothiecool
Comment Written 07-Apr-2014
reply by the author on 07-Apr-2014
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Thank you.
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welcome..SC
Comment from royowen
A cleverly written rictamter poem! This entry is a fine example of the adaptability of some poets to adjust their content and style to show creativity! Well done, good luck, blessings,Roy.
reply by the author on 07-Apr-2014
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A cleverly written rictamter poem! This entry is a fine example of the adaptability of some poets to adjust their content and style to show creativity! Well done, good luck, blessings,Roy.
Comment Written 06-Apr-2014
reply by the author on 07-Apr-2014
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Thank you - I appreciate your kind words. :)
Comment from Ramona Hughes
This piece fits the form perfectly and is both frightening and entertaining at once. I had a small chuckle at the end and felt a measure of relief for our hearty fools out walking. Well done!
Thank you for a fine read!
Ramona Hughes
reply by the author on 07-Apr-2014
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This piece fits the form perfectly and is both frightening and entertaining at once. I had a small chuckle at the end and felt a measure of relief for our hearty fools out walking. Well done!
Thank you for a fine read!
Ramona Hughes
Comment Written 06-Apr-2014
reply by the author on 07-Apr-2014
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Thank you - I appreciate your kind words. :)
Comment from angelface2
good one. You never know who you are going to encounter, so I don't go out at night. At least not walking. In this case two such creatures met and passed like two ships in the night. LOL. Nice poem. Miss Sally
reply by the author on 07-Apr-2014
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good one. You never know who you are going to encounter, so I don't go out at night. At least not walking. In this case two such creatures met and passed like two ships in the night. LOL. Nice poem. Miss Sally
Comment Written 06-Apr-2014
reply by the author on 07-Apr-2014
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Thank you - I appreciate your kind words. :)
Comment from Phyllis Stewart
Brrraaaaavvvvvo! This is really good. Great ending.. had me fooled all along and then "two fools" etc. I love this one, and it will probably get my vote. Still ahve to read a few more.
reply by the author on 06-Apr-2014
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Brrraaaaavvvvvo! This is really good. Great ending.. had me fooled all along and then "two fools" etc. I love this one, and it will probably get my vote. Still ahve to read a few more.
Comment Written 06-Apr-2014
reply by the author on 06-Apr-2014
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Thanks, Phyllis! Glad you got it! :)
Comment from wordsmatter2me
Casting the shadow of fear in the night is what I can understand about your poetry written on Alone. Yet, I could be wrong for poetry takes on many pleasing interpretations; many I not always understand yet enjoy reading. I like how each line follow the rictameter writing prompt for this contest entry.
reply by the author on 06-Apr-2014
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Casting the shadow of fear in the night is what I can understand about your poetry written on Alone. Yet, I could be wrong for poetry takes on many pleasing interpretations; many I not always understand yet enjoy reading. I like how each line follow the rictameter writing prompt for this contest entry.
Comment Written 06-Apr-2014
reply by the author on 06-Apr-2014
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Thanks a million. Have a super day! :0)
Comment from Kingsland
I didn't get a thrill or really see any horror in this short poem. But it was well written in a good format and had a good message written into it. I enjoyed reading and writing a response for it... John
reply by the author on 06-Apr-2014
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I didn't get a thrill or really see any horror in this short poem. But it was well written in a good format and had a good message written into it. I enjoyed reading and writing a response for it... John
Comment Written 06-Apr-2014
reply by the author on 06-Apr-2014
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Thanks for your review. Have a great weekend.
Comment from cory4
I loved your poem. It has been constructed perfectly according to the rules of the poetry form. Your poem is mysterious and is frightening, which i think is good, because it sends the message to the reader not to venture out at night alone. It provokes the reader to take notice, and more or less convinces the audience not to do the wrong thing. You have written a brilliant poem. Well done
Kind Regards,
Cory4
reply by the author on 06-Apr-2014
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I loved your poem. It has been constructed perfectly according to the rules of the poetry form. Your poem is mysterious and is frightening, which i think is good, because it sends the message to the reader not to venture out at night alone. It provokes the reader to take notice, and more or less convinces the audience not to do the wrong thing. You have written a brilliant poem. Well done
Kind Regards,
Cory4
Comment Written 06-Apr-2014
reply by the author on 06-Apr-2014
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Thank you for the exceptional rating. I'm glad you felt the meaning!