The Writer
A scene of a writer's life3 total reviews
Comment from A Matter Of Words
Hello, dnewhulk. Great poem. The seamless linking of one stanza or 5-7-5 to the other was excellent. The imagery was outstanding ...
punching my keyboard
rushing for perfect, nice words....
old mem'ries like dragon flies
touch not, else goodbye......
Very nice. I look forward to more....Stephanie
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Hello, dnewhulk. Great poem. The seamless linking of one stanza or 5-7-5 to the other was excellent. The imagery was outstanding ...
punching my keyboard
rushing for perfect, nice words....
old mem'ries like dragon flies
touch not, else goodbye......
Very nice. I look forward to more....Stephanie
Comment Written 18-Jun-2014
Comment from rjuselius
this is good pile-up stanzas! and they all connect each others perfectly one way or the next.
thank you for sharing!
rebekka x
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this is good pile-up stanzas! and they all connect each others perfectly one way or the next.
thank you for sharing!
rebekka x
Comment Written 03-Apr-2014
Comment from eugenus
I don't like these kinds of poems, with structured formats. I believe writing, especially poetry, should be expressed freely BUT this poem was done well. It's flow is a little bumpy ('cause of the format I'm sure) but the message, sensitivity and wording is very good. Best wishes ...
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I don't like these kinds of poems, with structured formats. I believe writing, especially poetry, should be expressed freely BUT this poem was done well. It's flow is a little bumpy ('cause of the format I'm sure) but the message, sensitivity and wording is very good. Best wishes ...
Comment Written 03-Apr-2014
