Writing Prompt Entries 2014
Viewing comments for Chapter 25 "Forgotten"The clue is in the title!
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Comment from ennahanid
This one dampened the old cheeks here and I am out of 6's so I give a virtual 6 and a real deal 5. I am sorry for your 'loss' as much as I am sorry for Granddad's loss and I wish you luck in the contest - Dinah
reply by the author on 03-Apr-2014
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This one dampened the old cheeks here and I am out of 6's so I give a virtual 6 and a real deal 5. I am sorry for your 'loss' as much as I am sorry for Granddad's loss and I wish you luck in the contest - Dinah
Comment Written 02-Apr-2014
reply by the author on 03-Apr-2014
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Thank you so much Dinah for your lovely feedback, vital 6 and good luck wishes. I appreciate all and am certain my Grandad would too if only he knew... :) Kindest regards as always, Debra x
Comment from victor 66
I'm sorry about your grandfather's dementia. I don't what to say, but I suspect most of us will get a turn. I have not a tried a '2-10-2' poem but sometime I'd like to give it a shot. Your poem looks like a good example. Good luck in the contest.
reply by the author on 03-Apr-2014
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I'm sorry about your grandfather's dementia. I don't what to say, but I suspect most of us will get a turn. I have not a tried a '2-10-2' poem but sometime I'd like to give it a shot. Your poem looks like a good example. Good luck in the contest.
Comment Written 02-Apr-2014
reply by the author on 03-Apr-2014
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Thank you victor66, I appreciate your kind feedback and good luck wishes. Kindest regards as always, Debra :)
ps. there's another 2-10-2 writing prompt open now, go on have a go!
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You are welcome, Debra. I will look into the 2-10-2 prompt. If not this one, perhaps the next. I wish you well.
Comment from annp
what an extraordinary touching poem
the cruelty Alzheimer's plays on both old and young
loved this little verse
great contest entry
goodluck
reply by the author on 02-Apr-2014
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what an extraordinary touching poem
the cruelty Alzheimer's plays on both old and young
loved this little verse
great contest entry
goodluck
Comment Written 02-Apr-2014
reply by the author on 02-Apr-2014
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Thank you so much annp for your lovely feedback and good luck wishes. I appreciate both. Kindest regards...:)
Comment from TAB_that's me
It's hard I know. My dad had alzheimer's. They know but they just can't expression it. Good luck in the contest.
~Teresa~
reply by the author on 02-Apr-2014
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It's hard I know. My dad had alzheimer's. They know but they just can't expression it. Good luck in the contest.
~Teresa~
Comment Written 01-Apr-2014
reply by the author on 02-Apr-2014
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Thank you Teresa for your lovely feedback. I'm sorry about your dad. Thank you also for your good luck wishes. Kindest regards...:)
Comment from Jackarrie
This is a great entry for the 2-10-2 prompt, It is very sad when Dementia takes over and your loved ones do not know you. the artwork is perfect for your poem.
Well done and good luck in the contest. Mary
reply by the author on 01-Apr-2014
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This is a great entry for the 2-10-2 prompt, It is very sad when Dementia takes over and your loved ones do not know you. the artwork is perfect for your poem.
Well done and good luck in the contest. Mary
Comment Written 01-Apr-2014
reply by the author on 01-Apr-2014
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Thank you Mary for your lovely feedback and good luck wishes, I appreciate both. Kindest regards...:)
Comment from Dean Kuch
Oh my, this is so sad and really hits home for me. I have an uncle who I dearly love in a nursing home suffering from Alzheimer's. He doesn't recognize me, yet I still see that mischievous spark in his eyes from time to time.
Very good write. Good luck in the contest.
reply by the author on 01-Apr-2014
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Oh my, this is so sad and really hits home for me. I have an uncle who I dearly love in a nursing home suffering from Alzheimer's. He doesn't recognize me, yet I still see that mischievous spark in his eyes from time to time.
Very good write. Good luck in the contest.
Comment Written 01-Apr-2014
reply by the author on 01-Apr-2014
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Thank you Dean for your lovely feedback. Sorry about your uncle, it's an awful illness... it is wonderful to see a flicker of their old self in an expression or in the light in their eyes. Each tiny 'real' moment is one to hold on to... Thank you for your good luck wishes too. I appreciate it. Kindest regards...:)
Comment from c_lucas
It is a sad time when the elderly begins to lose their memory. This is very well written with a smooth flow of words. Good luck in your contest.
reply by the author on 01-Apr-2014
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It is a sad time when the elderly begins to lose their memory. This is very well written with a smooth flow of words. Good luck in your contest.
Comment Written 01-Apr-2014
reply by the author on 01-Apr-2014
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Thank you for your lovely feedback and good luck wishes. I appreciate both :) Kindest regards...
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You're welcome.
Comment from lakeport
Forgotten, indeed that's a very sad part in live when a person loses all his memory. that's a very touching 2/10/2 poem. God bless you, Lakeport.
reply by the author on 01-Apr-2014
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Forgotten, indeed that's a very sad part in live when a person loses all his memory. that's a very touching 2/10/2 poem. God bless you, Lakeport.
Comment Written 01-Apr-2014
reply by the author on 01-Apr-2014
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Thank you lakeport for your lovely feedback. Kindest regards...:)
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your welcome,Lakeport.
Comment from daeneam
This must be sad, I'm sorry. But you should understand that he forgotten you because of an illness. Deep inside his soul he still longs for his loving granddaughter. Pray to God that you will accept such situation easily.
reply by the author on 01-Apr-2014
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This must be sad, I'm sorry. But you should understand that he forgotten you because of an illness. Deep inside his soul he still longs for his loving granddaughter. Pray to God that you will accept such situation easily.
Comment Written 01-Apr-2014
reply by the author on 01-Apr-2014
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Hi bulletski, thank you for your lovely feedback. I understand it isn't Grandad's fault, the dementia is to blame entirely. I'm accepting of how things are, it just saddens me that's all, he was such a vibrant man. Kindest regards...:)
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Thank you...
Comment from Lothlorien
I really like the poem, its subject is engaging. It flows well and the reader can really understand the subject. It did a great job of capturing emotions.
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reply by the author on 01-Apr-2014
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I really like the poem, its subject is engaging. It flows well and the reader can really understand the subject. It did a great job of capturing emotions.
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The highest and the lowest rating are not included in calculations.
Comment Written 01-Apr-2014
reply by the author on 01-Apr-2014
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Thank you for your great feedback. I appreciate it. Kindest regards...:)