Comment from Sanku

Excellent

IT is a beautiful acrostic in which you have given a new and inspiring definition for transparency. The last lines are thought provoking 'Caught in fore ever's web of heavens love
Yesterday's transparency slips gently into eternity.

 Comment Written 01-Apr-2014

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reply by the author on 01-Apr-2014

What a thoughtful review you have given this one. Thank you so much. :-) Carolyn

Comment from sweetwoodjax

Excellent

this is very well written, carolyn, you did an excellent job writing this acrostic poem about the way righteousness should be at the forefront of our existence. i enjoyed reading it. good luck in the contest

 Comment Written 01-Apr-2014

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reply by the author on 01-Apr-2014

Your wonderful comments are a treasure. :-) Carolyn

Comment from GracieAnn

Excellent

Carolyn, this Acrostic Poetry Contest contest entry fulfills the elements of the contest with spelling the chosen word and is especially well done in that it makes sense and is not just words to accomplish the acrostic but has layers of scriptural references and meanings. All the best in the contest1 :0 GracieAnn

 Comment Written 01-Apr-2014

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reply by the author on 01-Apr-2014

Thanks GracieAnn for understanding the poem, and for the wonderful encouragement. :-) Carolyn

Comment from Spitfire

Excellent

A thought provoking definition of "righteousness": translucent, aromatic, sweet savor of sacrifice ( lovely alliteration here). Good use of consonance in the last line. Unique use of metaphor:forever's web of heavens love. Good luck in the contest, my friend.

 Comment Written 31-Mar-2014

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reply by the author on 31-Mar-2014

Thank you for this encouraging and through review. I appreciate your support. (It would be nice to win, I never know what they are looking for, so I thank you for affirming quality) :-)Carolyn

Comment from Petriesan

Excellent

good luck in the contest. I had read the poem almost completely before I caught it was an acrostic the word that caught m e was "Naught"

But over-all, good piece

 Comment Written 31-Mar-2014

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reply by the author on 31-Mar-2014

Thanks for this great review. :-) Carolyn

Comment from GE Parson

Exceptional

What an interesting way to use Scripture references! It looks like you went from Romans 3 through to chapter 13.

Whenever God's Word is made a part of a poem,I have to rate it a 6.

Trust you have a pleasant week lined up,
God bless, Jerry

 Comment Written 31-Mar-2014

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reply by the author on 31-Mar-2014

I do have a great week ahead and hope that you do too. Thank you for this great review and rating. :-) Carolyn

Comment from dejohnsrld (Debbie)

Excellent

An awesome acrostic and beautiful presentation.

of heavens love (need apostrophe in heaven's)

A great ant meaningful acrostic. Good luck in the contest. Hugs~Debbie

 Comment Written 31-Mar-2014

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reply by the author on 31-Mar-2014

Thanks Debbie for the 'catch', I am glad you enjoyed this one.
:-) Carolyn

Comment from Benny Beeharry

Excellent

Hi Carolyn
You are getting better and better,both in framing yhe philosophy you wanted to set out and the language., that it is set in.
The message is clear. And i understand it.
Kindly go into yourself as you have started and fish for those gems.
Could I though, make one tiny little suggestion....and i mean no harm,sorry,

Be a little more simple
Choose a little less big or difficult words.
Thats all

Incidentally my book Songs of life has been released and soon will be in Amazon.
I am trying to find out myself.
Benny Beeharry

 Comment Written 30-Mar-2014

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reply by the author on 31-Mar-2014

Hi Bennie, I am basically a very simple, 'complicated' person.
:-) Thank you so much for your kind encouragement and guidance. I will be watching for Songs of Life. Have a great week, Carolyn

Comment from krys123

Excellent

Carolyn, your acrostic poem titled "Transparency" is very creative, illuminative and resourceful and it also Is very inspirational, enlightening and didactic and especially shows your cleverness in the lettering out your lines. The picture I just enjoyed looking at as it shows that transparency of a butterfly almost. Thank you so much for sharing and posting of your work for others and may the Lord be with you always.
Alex

 Comment Written 29-Mar-2014

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reply by the author on 29-Mar-2014

Thank you Alex, You reviews are always so very uplifting to me. :-) Carolyn

reply by krys123 on 30-Mar-2014

Carolyn, you are so entirely and sincerely welcome.
Alex

Comment from Irish Rain

Excellent

So very beautiful, such a lovely entry to this acrostic contest! Especially love the phrase...caught in forever's web of heavens love...Beautiful! Blessings tonight!

 Comment Written 29-Mar-2014

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reply by the author on 29-Mar-2014

And back to you justjo, thank you for your kind comments. :-) Carolyn