Forbidden Fruit
Tastes the sweetest51 total reviews
Comment from MM lives on :)
What a sexy poem this was James.. Truly I enjoyed it through and through.. Your use of sensual yet metaphorical wording throughout keep the reader ready for more.. Loved the beautiful and adorning use of imagery, color and formatting.. Thanks for sharing always a pleasure :)
reply by the author on 14-May-2014
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What a sexy poem this was James.. Truly I enjoyed it through and through.. Your use of sensual yet metaphorical wording throughout keep the reader ready for more.. Loved the beautiful and adorning use of imagery, color and formatting.. Thanks for sharing always a pleasure :)
Comment Written 14-May-2014
reply by the author on 14-May-2014
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The exceptional is in the reviewer... so I send you back six stars of friendship for such a mood uplifting reception to what your kind gesture has given me... thank you friend/friends... my heart swells.
With our thoughts we create,
warm feelings,
James
Comment from Green Lake Girl
James, I checked out your profile and saw that I missed this AMAZING gem! I probably wasn't notified of the post since it was "secret" for a contest. This is deliciously sensual. Very skillfully penned. Loved "pheromone hazy". Superb!
(I guess better late than never!)
reply by the author on 04-May-2014
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James, I checked out your profile and saw that I missed this AMAZING gem! I probably wasn't notified of the post since it was "secret" for a contest. This is deliciously sensual. Very skillfully penned. Loved "pheromone hazy". Superb!
(I guess better late than never!)
Comment Written 04-May-2014
reply by the author on 04-May-2014
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Hi Marietta,
I know that I am not a real dynamo in the posting stakes and I am both grateful and humbled by your review... but sweet lady you shouldn't waste your gold... just the fact you went in and found something to read was my true reward... but in saying that... thank you so much for your wonderful comments... you do know how to make a man feel good... you are a an amazing friend... thank you!
With our thoughts we create,
special connections,
James xx
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The reason I went a-hunting, was that I thought you hadn't posted in awhile. Sometimes I'm not alerted when my peeps post. I thought that may have been the case with you, hence my look-see. So, I stumbled upon your wonderful poem. Believe me, I never "waste" my sixers. Oftentimes I have them left over at the end of a week. So, I hand them out when they're truly deserved.
And the friendship goes both ways! :D
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Thanks Marietta... warms the heart. xx
Comment from words
You have conveyed well the temptaton of forbidden fruit.
I fear, however, that just once would not be enough.
The truth of the forbidden, is that it is usually addctive.
Hugs,d
reply by the author on 15-Apr-2014
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You have conveyed well the temptaton of forbidden fruit.
I fear, however, that just once would not be enough.
The truth of the forbidden, is that it is usually addctive.
Hugs,d
Comment Written 15-Apr-2014
reply by the author on 15-Apr-2014
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Hi Words,
thanks for your words of wisdom... it certainly would throw the cats in amongst the pigeons, especially if you have an addictive personality.
I suppose that's what growth is all about when temptations excite the senses... hey?
Thanks so much for going back in and giving me a review on this poem... very grateful.
With our thoughts we create,
the right path to serenity,
James xx
Comment from Saucey
Perfect mouth watering Nonet, the presentation is just as sweet as the content itself, so hot, "Feel my heat, if just once..." Well written, write on.
reply by the author on 08-Apr-2014
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Perfect mouth watering Nonet, the presentation is just as sweet as the content itself, so hot, "Feel my heat, if just once..." Well written, write on.
Comment Written 07-Apr-2014
reply by the author on 08-Apr-2014
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Hi Sheri,
thanks for the wonderful review... had my bottom lip doing the 'come here top lip, you need a bit of contact' action... a man can dream can't he?
With our thoughts we create,
a tad of excitement,
James xx
Comment from dejohnsrld (Debbie)
Hi, dear friend,
This is a beautifully written romantic and sensual poem. your presentation is gorgeous. I am glad you entered this in the contest. It is far better than mine. Take care, dear friend~Debbie xx
reply by the author on 31-Mar-2014
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Hi, dear friend,
This is a beautifully written romantic and sensual poem. your presentation is gorgeous. I am glad you entered this in the contest. It is far better than mine. Take care, dear friend~Debbie xx
Comment Written 30-Mar-2014
reply by the author on 31-Mar-2014
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Hi to you, one dear friend to another... has this review lifted my spirits or what?... I can't even begin to tell you my appreciation... but please do not under estimate your beautiful nonet... different is what I'd say not far better or even just better... just different... but thank you so much for the kind sentiments.
With our thoughts we create,
increased heart-rate,
James xx
Comment from CALLAHANMR
Hi Jim:)
Your Nonet is a fabulous entry for this contest. From the wonderful artwork, to your perfect metaphor for sexual bliss, imagined, but not yet fulfilled, is a tour de force of visual and emotional imagery wrapped around temptation.
Who couls resist such fruit.
Roger, Marilyn's writing partner
reply by the author on 31-Mar-2014
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Hi Jim:)
Your Nonet is a fabulous entry for this contest. From the wonderful artwork, to your perfect metaphor for sexual bliss, imagined, but not yet fulfilled, is a tour de force of visual and emotional imagery wrapped around temptation.
Who couls resist such fruit.
Roger, Marilyn's writing partner
Comment Written 30-Mar-2014
reply by the author on 31-Mar-2014
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Hi Roger,
thank you so much for such a compliment... I am so chuffed... a treasured review for sure. Please give my regards to your lovely significant other... Marilyn... fifty-three years now that worth ever star in the sky... you're a very lucky man as Marilyn is a very lucky woman! Warms the heart.
With our thoughts we create,
increased heart-rate,
James
Comment from rouskin
Excellent artwork and very strong emotions Well written Nonet Memorable entry I wish you the best of luck in the contest Blessings, Rouskin
reply by the author on 31-Mar-2014
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Excellent artwork and very strong emotions Well written Nonet Memorable entry I wish you the best of luck in the contest Blessings, Rouskin
Comment Written 30-Mar-2014
reply by the author on 31-Mar-2014
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Hi Rouskin,
thank you for your wonderful review and well wishes, you are appreciated.
With our thoughts create,
increased heart-rate,
James
Comment from Visheshta Dahiya
great poem..!!!
the vocabulary is superb. the presentation is beautiful.
the words are very well selected and used. the message and the theme, both are very nice.
very well written..!!
vest wishes
Visheshta
reply by the author on 31-Mar-2014
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great poem..!!!
the vocabulary is superb. the presentation is beautiful.
the words are very well selected and used. the message and the theme, both are very nice.
very well written..!!
vest wishes
Visheshta
Comment Written 30-Mar-2014
reply by the author on 31-Mar-2014
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Hi Visheshta,
thank you so much for your review, kind comments and well wishes, you are definitely appreciated.
With our thoughts we create,
conscious thought,
James
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welcome :)
Comment from Zue65
The forbidden of course is a metaphor of baptism to sexual bliss and that is what I receive from your poem. The visual imagery is so vivid which makes the poem easy to understand.
God bless and thanks for sharing.
reply by the author on 31-Mar-2014
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The forbidden of course is a metaphor of baptism to sexual bliss and that is what I receive from your poem. The visual imagery is so vivid which makes the poem easy to understand.
God bless and thanks for sharing.
Comment Written 30-Mar-2014
reply by the author on 31-Mar-2014
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Hi Nassus,
most definitely is my friend... thanks for the wonderful review, you are appreciated.
With our thoughts we create,
increased heart-beats,
James
Comment from The Boy Whodunnit!
The structure is excellent, and the words you have chosen fit so well together, the rhymes and almost rhymes of words create a smooth feel to it - hazy, heat, weak, sweet, petite.
It has great imagery and a lot of passion that comes through it.
BW
reply by the author on 31-Mar-2014
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The structure is excellent, and the words you have chosen fit so well together, the rhymes and almost rhymes of words create a smooth feel to it - hazy, heat, weak, sweet, petite.
It has great imagery and a lot of passion that comes through it.
BW
Comment Written 30-Mar-2014
reply by the author on 31-Mar-2014
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Hi TBW,
thank you so much for dropping in with such an uplifting review and comments... you are appreciated.
With our thoughts we create,
increased heart-beats,
James
