Senryu (Faith)
Senryu27 total reviews
Comment from MoIronE13
Amen brother.
Faith = the unseen believing and knowing that it shall come to pass.
I love this imagery and message.
Crazy how some things just happen, right?
Thanks for sharing MPC...nice!
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Amen brother.
Faith = the unseen believing and knowing that it shall come to pass.
I love this imagery and message.
Crazy how some things just happen, right?
Thanks for sharing MPC...nice!
Comment Written 29-Mar-2014
Comment from SLHarper
Good reminder of the definition of a much over-used, misunderstood concept: Faith. You are a cheeky one, darling Mikey! I like this short piece. You say a lot in the three allotted lines. Yours, Steph
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Good reminder of the definition of a much over-used, misunderstood concept: Faith. You are a cheeky one, darling Mikey! I like this short piece. You say a lot in the three allotted lines. Yours, Steph
Comment Written 28-Mar-2014
Comment from GregoryCody
OOOOH my man. What a thought provoker! This is powerful. In so few words! Is this about the expeditions to find the ark? Does that need for proof destroy them in the end? Destroy their desire for proof because the ark is exposed? Hmm. Please tell me.
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OOOOH my man. What a thought provoker! This is powerful. In so few words! Is this about the expeditions to find the ark? Does that need for proof destroy them in the end? Destroy their desire for proof because the ark is exposed? Hmm. Please tell me.
Comment Written 28-Mar-2014
Comment from lancellot
Funny on several fronts. You,re right about the definition of faith. The sad part is, if such a thing as the ark was really found, the faithful would all point and shout how this proves their faith. Thoughtful work.
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Funny on several fronts. You,re right about the definition of faith. The sad part is, if such a thing as the ark was really found, the faithful would all point and shout how this proves their faith. Thoughtful work.
Comment Written 27-Mar-2014
Comment from country ranch writer
yeah never know what you will find when you start digging things up you just maybe surprised a lot of discoveries have been made with blind faith
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yeah never know what you will find when you start digging things up you just maybe surprised a lot of discoveries have been made with blind faith
Comment Written 27-Mar-2014
Comment from nordicgirl
Perfection. Love the depth of meaning here. If you have faith you don't needto seek proof. I love the consequences of dishonesty!!! Great complete story here. NG
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Perfection. Love the depth of meaning here. If you have faith you don't needto seek proof. I love the consequences of dishonesty!!! Great complete story here. NG
Comment Written 27-Mar-2014
Comment from royowen
Interesting choice of subject, with the "Noah's ark" film release! Clever use of disjointed language to project this " difficult to nail" poetic form! I must admit whether they actually find Noah's ark means little to shake my faith! Because faith is seeing the unseen as if it where seen! Whoops, you said it in your notes! A really good 5-7-5! It would go well in a comp! But then, what would I know! Blessings, Mikey, Roy.
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Interesting choice of subject, with the "Noah's ark" film release! Clever use of disjointed language to project this " difficult to nail" poetic form! I must admit whether they actually find Noah's ark means little to shake my faith! Because faith is seeing the unseen as if it where seen! Whoops, you said it in your notes! A really good 5-7-5! It would go well in a comp! But then, what would I know! Blessings, Mikey, Roy.
Comment Written 27-Mar-2014
Comment from GracieAnn
Mikey, this Senryu is perfect in line and syllable count with the proper title being the first line of the write. It incorporates a human and natural element that intersects at God's appointed time. Well done! :0 GracieAnn
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Mikey, this Senryu is perfect in line and syllable count with the proper title being the first line of the write. It incorporates a human and natural element that intersects at God's appointed time. Well done! :0 GracieAnn
Comment Written 27-Mar-2014
Comment from donaldww
This must be the year of the flood, with a torrent of movies and now poems about Noah.
I've heard that Russell Crowe pumped iron for 40 days and 40 nights to get ready for his part.
And now he's been exposed!!!
Cheers,
DW
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This must be the year of the flood, with a torrent of movies and now poems about Noah.
I've heard that Russell Crowe pumped iron for 40 days and 40 nights to get ready for his part.
And now he's been exposed!!!
Cheers,
DW
Comment Written 27-Mar-2014
Comment from seaglass
Not all short poems I read actually create a complete thought for me. This one does. Although the picture is complementary to the poem, its stands alone.
Faith is a very personal journey. I've thought of writing something about the shroud of Christ. This style might be a good way to tackle that.
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Not all short poems I read actually create a complete thought for me. This one does. Although the picture is complementary to the poem, its stands alone.
Faith is a very personal journey. I've thought of writing something about the shroud of Christ. This style might be a good way to tackle that.
Comment Written 27-Mar-2014