Aiona's Poems
Viewing comments for Chapter 16 "Scharazade"Because my portfolio is too messy and I have OCD.
8 total reviews
Comment from lakeport
Scharazade, indeed that's a beautiful story poem with an happy ending. I enjoyed reading it,Good luck at the contest
God bless you. Hugs!lakeport.
reply by the author on 06-Apr-2014
Scharazade, indeed that's a beautiful story poem with an happy ending. I enjoyed reading it,Good luck at the contest
God bless you. Hugs!lakeport.
Comment Written 02-Apr-2014
reply by the author on 06-Apr-2014
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Thanks again!
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your welcome,Hugs!Lakeport.
Comment from w.j.debi
You captured my attention with the title. Schazerade was a very creative and wise woman so I had to see what you had to say about her. You have described her predicament well. Love the comment in the author notes about her giving a new meaning to writing for living. So true!
Excellent rhymes in your quatrains.
reply by the author on 28-Mar-2014
You captured my attention with the title. Schazerade was a very creative and wise woman so I had to see what you had to say about her. You have described her predicament well. Love the comment in the author notes about her giving a new meaning to writing for living. So true!
Excellent rhymes in your quatrains.
Comment Written 27-Mar-2014
reply by the author on 28-Mar-2014
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Thank you, w.j.
Comment from ProjectBluebook
A concubine, what a lucky king, I wonder how many? The eyes attract me, stand out and is a bit mysterious looking. The purple color is fitting, a good choice. She must had wooed the king with her stories or was it her good looks that spellbound the king. Nice touch, be looking for your next post, wackydo
reply by the author on 28-Mar-2014
A concubine, what a lucky king, I wonder how many? The eyes attract me, stand out and is a bit mysterious looking. The purple color is fitting, a good choice. She must had wooed the king with her stories or was it her good looks that spellbound the king. Nice touch, be looking for your next post, wackydo
Comment Written 27-Mar-2014
reply by the author on 28-Mar-2014
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Thank you, Wackydo.
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My pleasure ...
Comment from Petriesan
good luck in the contest.
are you referring to "scheherazade"?
maybe a typo?
nicely told story about what she did to remain among theliving
reply by the author on 27-Mar-2014
good luck in the contest.
are you referring to "scheherazade"?
maybe a typo?
nicely told story about what she did to remain among theliving
Comment Written 27-Mar-2014
reply by the author on 27-Mar-2014
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I'm so glad you recognized her. I looked up the spelling, because I've seen it so many ways. and it's a translation from Persian. "Scheherazade" was indeed the spelling adopted by the English novelist who made the story famous in the West. However it seems a closer approximation to spell it "Scherzad." So I went with a spelling I liked. :) Thank you for the review, Petriesan.
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Ok. Never thought about how it came to be in english. Cool
Comment from Irish Rain
I love this, I wish I had a six for you! What a delightful, imaginative entry for this contest! Writing for a living indeed! Blessings tonight!
reply by the author on 27-Mar-2014
I love this, I wish I had a six for you! What a delightful, imaginative entry for this contest! Writing for a living indeed! Blessings tonight!
Comment Written 26-Mar-2014
reply by the author on 27-Mar-2014
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Thank you, justjo!
Comment from Misrael
That was a very different kind of poem and a rather sad one as well. But that sort of thing did happen when a woman didn't have boys or in some way did not please her husband. Sad but good read. Keep on writing.
reply by the author on 26-Mar-2014
That was a very different kind of poem and a rather sad one as well. But that sort of thing did happen when a woman didn't have boys or in some way did not please her husband. Sad but good read. Keep on writing.
Comment Written 26-Mar-2014
reply by the author on 26-Mar-2014
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Actually a happy ending, Misrael! The supposed story is that the King's wife cheated on him, and so he took revenge by marrying a virgin every night and then killing them after making love to them (love? hmmmmm... maybe that's not the appropriate euphemism, huh?) Schezarade was the one who won him over and convinced him true love was possible again. Still, wouldn't wanna be,married to someone so obviously mentally unstable, but it did save her life.
Comment from c_lucas
This is very well written with a smooth flow of words, making for a very good read. There is very good imagery and descriptive scheme.
reply by the author on 26-Mar-2014
This is very well written with a smooth flow of words, making for a very good read. There is very good imagery and descriptive scheme.
Comment Written 26-Mar-2014
reply by the author on 26-Mar-2014
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Thanks, c_lucas.
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You're welcome.
Comment from Ritsal
First, do you mean: Scheherazade?
Sounds like a pretty smart gal. Should be writing for a living. Ha. Good luck in the contest!
Best wishes,
Rita
reply by the author on 26-Mar-2014
First, do you mean: Scheherazade?
Sounds like a pretty smart gal. Should be writing for a living. Ha. Good luck in the contest!
Best wishes,
Rita
Comment Written 26-Mar-2014
reply by the author on 26-Mar-2014
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Yes, Scheherazade. I've seen so many different spellings, I finally gave up trying to choose which to use! :) "Scheherazade" I believe was the choice spelling of the British author who wrote 1001 Arabian Nights, and so is the one most often used.