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A poem for my husband6 total reviews
Comment from kiwigirl2821
I think the piece is definitely reflective of your love of your husband however, it is not in the right format for this contest and I think that is a distraction. Good luck. xoxo Kiwi
reply by the author on 31-Mar-2014
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I think the piece is definitely reflective of your love of your husband however, it is not in the right format for this contest and I think that is a distraction. Good luck. xoxo Kiwi
Comment Written 29-Mar-2014
reply by the author on 31-Mar-2014
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yea i really love my husband,the poem is for him. Thanks for your review. I'm grateful
Comment from donette1914
very well done and very sweet for your husband and how you love him. well penned job and very heartfelt and it was a pleasure to read your work
reply by the author on 31-Mar-2014
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very well done and very sweet for your husband and how you love him. well penned job and very heartfelt and it was a pleasure to read your work
Comment Written 29-Mar-2014
reply by the author on 31-Mar-2014
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pleasure is mine. I am happy you love my work. Thanks
Comment from dmt1967
This girl is a lucky girl to have someone write her love poems all day long I like the letter format this poem was written in good luck in the contest and thank you for sharing
reply by the author on 31-Mar-2014
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This girl is a lucky girl to have someone write her love poems all day long I like the letter format this poem was written in good luck in the contest and thank you for sharing
Comment Written 29-Mar-2014
reply by the author on 31-Mar-2014
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hahahhahahahaha i am happy you love my poem. Thanks alot for your kind words
Comment from w.j.debi
What a joyful feeling your create in so few words. Love the imagery of the hands.
I rated this based on the excellent word choice and feeling you create, not on the form which you may not have understood.
As far as the form--a 5-7-5 has five syllables in the first line, seven syllables in the second line, and five syllables in the last line. You have 4-7-4.
reply by the author on 27-Mar-2014
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What a joyful feeling your create in so few words. Love the imagery of the hands.
I rated this based on the excellent word choice and feeling you create, not on the form which you may not have understood.
As far as the form--a 5-7-5 has five syllables in the first line, seven syllables in the second line, and five syllables in the last line. You have 4-7-4.
Comment Written 26-Mar-2014
reply by the author on 27-Mar-2014
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thanks alot i am grateful.
Comment from Kingsrookviii
I love this! Great idea too. First it sounds like an interesting way to write and secondly, they could never complain about it. Great job.
reply by the author on 26-Mar-2014
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I love this! Great idea too. First it sounds like an interesting way to write and secondly, they could never complain about it. Great job.
Comment Written 26-Mar-2014
reply by the author on 26-Mar-2014
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thanks my friend. I am glad you like it. My husband loves too
Comment from meto
just three lines but makes wonderful meaning. maduechesi i can see the love you have towards your beloved through your poem
keep writing
reply by the author on 26-Mar-2014
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just three lines but makes wonderful meaning. maduechesi i can see the love you have towards your beloved through your poem
keep writing
Comment Written 26-Mar-2014
reply by the author on 26-Mar-2014
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thanks for reviewing it.
