Comment from Petriesan

Excellent

alliterative acrostic actually articulated artfully
images integral , inherent in insects
humanity humbles herself haughtily (?)

really fun poem

 Comment Written 27-Mar-2014

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reply by the author on 27-Mar-2014

ROFL! Really relish readers' remarkable reviews!

Comment from Maureen's Pen

Excellent

Dear Aiona - this is a creative and thought provoking post. Strong descriptive word choices, left me pondering your message.
Well penned - thanks for sharing it.
Maureen

 Comment Written 25-Mar-2014

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reply by the author on 25-Mar-2014

Thank you, Maureen.

Comment from Misrael

Excellent

I had never known that, that word had two meanings to it. Even though I am not an insect collector my husband is. Good read and keep on writing.

 Comment Written 25-Mar-2014

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reply by the author on 25-Mar-2014

How adorable! You're an etymologist, and he's an entymologist. Thank you for your review, Misrael.

Comment from TOMORAL

Excellent

Awesome. The way each line starts with the same letter and makes perfect sense. Your poetry speaks to the heart of this old girl. Great one.

 Comment Written 25-Mar-2014

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reply by the author on 25-Mar-2014

Thank you, TOMORAL. I'm surprised it spoke to you too. Do you have someone you idealized as well?

Comment from daniela.albu

Excellent

A nice parallel between the insect and the galactic girl image. A well written esotheric poem. The artwork enhances its beauty.

 Comment Written 25-Mar-2014

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reply by the author on 25-Mar-2014

Thank you, daniela.