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Ghosts vs Demons, Heaven vs Hell

A poem about a person's belief on ghosts being real vs fake.

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Comment from GE Parson
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Hi Fanstory Fan Friend,
Th Bible speaks of the second Person of the Godhead as Holy Ghost. Aso the Bible teaches that Satan is a great deceiving imitator of Spiritual matters, so that he is able to appear to some people as an angel of light (I.E. RIGHTEOUSNESS)
thus if it's to his advantage to appear as a ghost to certain ones...such as political leaders or self-proclaimed Preachers, in that sense they believed they saw a ghost.

I see that this reply to your prose-poem didn't get through. So I'll try sending it again.

The way you ended it, I'm not sure what you personally believe, but you are right: A person is going to either Heaven or Hell, depending upon their response to Christ's work on the Cross of Calvary and God's offer of Eternal Life. "He that hath the Son has Life, but he that has not the Son has not Life, but the wrath of God abide on him."

Have a productive week-end,
Your Friend,
Jerry


 Comment Written 25-Mar-2014


reply by the author on 01-Apr-2014
    That's really interesting. Thanks for sharing. :) Have a good day.
Comment from rouskin
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Believe what you want,
in your world ghosts may exist,
in reality 5 7 5 ,

imagination forms it.
I perceive the truth,
and you need to see it too. 7 5 7

Some people might say,
I saw it, it talked to me.
It means just two things, 7 5 7

Either you favor vodka,
or a devils aide.
So trust in what you assume 7 5 7

just know its all lies. 5


It should be 5-7-5 all the way, or only one 5-7-5
I'm sending you one extra star because you have plenty of time to edit it
Good luck




 Comment Written 25-Mar-2014


reply by the author on 01-Apr-2014
    Thank you so much. I didn't realize that error. I will fix it :) thanks again.