Flight 370
A Tribute to the Families of........16 total reviews
Comment from victor 66
My experience with poetry is minimal. But, I am developing a taste for it. And a Lune Poem is interesting. To me, a 'Lune' has to do with contemplation. I certainly liked yours. Best wishes.
reply by the author on 26-Mar-2014
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My experience with poetry is minimal. But, I am developing a taste for it. And a Lune Poem is interesting. To me, a 'Lune' has to do with contemplation. I certainly liked yours. Best wishes.
Comment Written 26-Mar-2014
reply by the author on 26-Mar-2014
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Thank you so much for this excellent review and your great comments. So glad you liked this poem....
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You are welcome.
Comment from adewpearl
perfect pairing of photo and poem, which is in excellent 5/3/5 syllable count for the Lune
good alliteration in world/we weep
good assonance in weep and grief
thoughtful expression of profound emotion
Brooke
reply by the author on 26-Mar-2014
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perfect pairing of photo and poem, which is in excellent 5/3/5 syllable count for the Lune
good alliteration in world/we weep
good assonance in weep and grief
thoughtful expression of profound emotion
Brooke
Comment Written 25-Mar-2014
reply by the author on 26-Mar-2014
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Hi Brooke! Thank you much for this excellent review and as always your exceptional comments. My heart breaks for all those affected by this tragedy.
Have a great Wednesday......harmony13
Comment from Carole Rosa
To the author of Flight 370, This is a lovely tribute to the families who are in mourning. How terrible it must be for those who do not actually know what happened or how afraid their family members were as they were dying. How awful. Nice work and very thoughtful. Carole
reply by the author on 26-Mar-2014
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To the author of Flight 370, This is a lovely tribute to the families who are in mourning. How terrible it must be for those who do not actually know what happened or how afraid their family members were as they were dying. How awful. Nice work and very thoughtful. Carole
Comment Written 25-Mar-2014
reply by the author on 26-Mar-2014
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Thank you so much for this excellent review and your exceptional comments. Have a wonderful rest of the week....
Comment from nelliesellie
I love the picture. I love the poem. I am really grieved when we loose a plane full of people. Men, women and children from different countries just vanish. The not knowing is the worse part. Great work.
reply by the author on 25-Mar-2014
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I love the picture. I love the poem. I am really grieved when we loose a plane full of people. Men, women and children from different countries just vanish. The not knowing is the worse part. Great work.
Comment Written 25-Mar-2014
reply by the author on 25-Mar-2014
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Thank you so much for the excellent review and your exceptional comments. You are so right - not knowing is so difficult.
Have a great rest of the week!
Comment from Leen1
How fitting is this tribute. Your words are truly heartfelt. The accompanying picture brings emotion to the words written. Thanks for taking the time to bring tribute to those families who are now mourning their lost.
reply by the author on 25-Mar-2014
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How fitting is this tribute. Your words are truly heartfelt. The accompanying picture brings emotion to the words written. Thanks for taking the time to bring tribute to those families who are now mourning their lost.
Comment Written 25-Mar-2014
reply by the author on 25-Mar-2014
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Thank you so much for this excellent review and your exceptional comments. Thanks for letting me know the emotion was there through the picture - I wasn't sure it was the rich artwork.
Comment from TAB_that's me
You have written a great lune and an even greater tribute to all on that flight. Perfect syllable/line count. Good luck in the contest.
Teresa
reply by the author on 25-Mar-2014
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You have written a great lune and an even greater tribute to all on that flight. Perfect syllable/line count. Good luck in the contest.
Teresa
Comment Written 25-Mar-2014
reply by the author on 25-Mar-2014
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Thank you so much for this excellent review and your exceptional comments.
Comment from Karen B.
This beautiful lune puts into words what so many of us are feeling. I hope there are some answers soon for those families. Well done. Best wishes in the contest.
reply by the author on 25-Mar-2014
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This beautiful lune puts into words what so many of us are feeling. I hope there are some answers soon for those families. Well done. Best wishes in the contest.
Comment Written 25-Mar-2014
reply by the author on 25-Mar-2014
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Thank you so much for this excellent review and your exceptional comments. I hope answers come soon too.....
Comment from daniela.albu
It is a condensed poem but is conveys its message very clearly. It offers a delicate poetic tribute to the families of those that perished with flight 370.
reply by the author on 25-Mar-2014
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It is a condensed poem but is conveys its message very clearly. It offers a delicate poetic tribute to the families of those that perished with flight 370.
Comment Written 25-Mar-2014
reply by the author on 25-Mar-2014
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Thank you so much for this excellent review and your exceptional comments. I am glad the message came across clearly.
Comment from Dean Kuch
It's terrifying to think that somewhere, out across the great spans of water that is the Indian Ocean, 154 Chinese and Taiwanese passengers aboard the jet liner are missing and presumed dead. Such a heartbreaking tragedy for all of those families who had loved ones aboard that fated flight...
Well done, poet, and a great forum to honor their memories.
reply by the author on 25-Mar-2014
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It's terrifying to think that somewhere, out across the great spans of water that is the Indian Ocean, 154 Chinese and Taiwanese passengers aboard the jet liner are missing and presumed dead. Such a heartbreaking tragedy for all of those families who had loved ones aboard that fated flight...
Well done, poet, and a great forum to honor their memories.
Comment Written 25-Mar-2014
reply by the author on 25-Mar-2014
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Thank you so much for this excellent review and your exceptional comments. It is truly a heartbreaking tragedy.
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It's my pleasure. Yes, it certainly is.
Comment from l.raven
A beautiful tribute...been watching it on CNN all day...was hoping and praying they would still find someone...tears...can't even imagine...so much hurt...poem very well written...stunning picture
reply by the author on 25-Mar-2014
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A beautiful tribute...been watching it on CNN all day...was hoping and praying they would still find someone...tears...can't even imagine...so much hurt...poem very well written...stunning picture
Comment Written 24-Mar-2014
reply by the author on 25-Mar-2014
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Thank you so much for this excellent review and your exceptional comments. I was hoping the same thing - something just doesn't seem right. Have a wonderful rest of the week!
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mo it doesn't...your so welcome...xxoo