Caught by Love.
Rhyming Quatrains 8/6/8/611 total reviews
Comment from omerta16
What a lovely, candid piece of poetry. It flows perfectly and brought to mind the few good experiences i've had with love. Nice job. Looks like i'll be reading some more of your stuff.
reply by the author on 28-Mar-2014
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What a lovely, candid piece of poetry. It flows perfectly and brought to mind the few good experiences i've had with love. Nice job. Looks like i'll be reading some more of your stuff.
Comment Written 28-Mar-2014
reply by the author on 28-Mar-2014
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Thanks omerta. I love it when someone likes my writing. Thanks for the lovely review. Miss Sally
Comment from nancy_e_davis
What a cute poem Sally and so true. Gals and Guys start off with two different goals but the gal usually wins. LOL....
You chased her until she caught you
So goes the old refrain.
If you treat her like you ought to,
Her love will fall like rain....
Quite often true. LOL Well done. Nancy
reply by the author on 24-Mar-2014
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What a cute poem Sally and so true. Gals and Guys start off with two different goals but the gal usually wins. LOL....
You chased her until she caught you
So goes the old refrain.
If you treat her like you ought to,
Her love will fall like rain....
Quite often true. LOL Well done. Nancy
Comment Written 24-Mar-2014
reply by the author on 24-Mar-2014
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thank you Nancy. A pleasure to write. I've been gone most of the day. My girlfriend helped me put a new lining in a spring coat. It sure looks nice now. Thanks for the nice review. Hugs Sally
Comment from GWinterwin
Great poem with good word flow and rhyming. A poem to make one think sensuous thoughts. Good story of a lovers chase, with the winner being the one that's chased.
reply by the author on 24-Mar-2014
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Great poem with good word flow and rhyming. A poem to make one think sensuous thoughts. Good story of a lovers chase, with the winner being the one that's chased.
Comment Written 24-Mar-2014
reply by the author on 24-Mar-2014
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Thanks George. I appreciate the nice review. Miss Sally
Comment from Aussie
Usually the other way around - male chasing female; glad you caught him - your trap was set and you knew what you were doing. He probably thought he was the chaser. I enjoyed your little love poem. Well done.
reply by the author on 24-Mar-2014
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Usually the other way around - male chasing female; glad you caught him - your trap was set and you knew what you were doing. He probably thought he was the chaser. I enjoyed your little love poem. Well done.
Comment Written 24-Mar-2014
reply by the author on 24-Mar-2014
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Well, this one was male chasing female, until she caught him. It's a funny!! It's an American thing I guess. LOL. Thanks for the nice review. Miss Sally
Comment from Just Pete
A lovely poem that has a ring of truth to it (no pun intended). These are the truths that a man finds out years laterand if anything, serves to strengthen a relationship. An amusing piece. Has he seen it?
reply by the author on 24-Mar-2014
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A lovely poem that has a ring of truth to it (no pun intended). These are the truths that a man finds out years laterand if anything, serves to strengthen a relationship. An amusing piece. Has he seen it?
Comment Written 24-Mar-2014
reply by the author on 24-Mar-2014
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Oh, Peter thanks for the lovely words, and no he has not seen it. I think about my husband a lot, because I miss him so much. He died in 1992. I just like to write about our times together. MIss Sally
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Now I understand your motivation. I'd like to think that he has seen it and smiles at you wonderful words.
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Thanks Peter. Me too. Miss Sally
Comment from Gungalo
You chased her until she caught you
So goes the old refrain.
If you treat her like you ought to,
Her love will fall like rain.
Very clever quatrains and says a lot for your husband. Hold on to him girl.
reply by the author on 24-Mar-2014
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You chased her until she caught you
So goes the old refrain.
If you treat her like you ought to,
Her love will fall like rain.
Very clever quatrains and says a lot for your husband. Hold on to him girl.
Comment Written 24-Mar-2014
reply by the author on 24-Mar-2014
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I wish I could, gungalo, but he is gone. Almost 22 years now. He died in 1992, and I miss him a lot at times and like to write about our times together. LOL thanks a bunch. Miss Sally
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Sighhhhhhhhhhhhhh.
Comment from gazzagodbod
what a beautiful poem my friend stunningly presented with the perfect picture had to be a sixer from the xxgazzagodbodxx
reply by the author on 24-Mar-2014
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what a beautiful poem my friend stunningly presented with the perfect picture had to be a sixer from the xxgazzagodbodxx
Comment Written 23-Mar-2014
reply by the author on 24-Mar-2014
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Hi gazza. Haven't heard from you in a while. Thanks for the lovely review. I do appreciate them all. Miss Sally
Comment from WLHall
Very nice, well done. I like the use of your rhyming scheme and your figurative language with the lines of "you'll meet in all kinds of weather until you become at ease." Really like that. It all flowed succinctly especially the last stanza. Great job!
reply by the author on 23-Mar-2014
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Very nice, well done. I like the use of your rhyming scheme and your figurative language with the lines of "you'll meet in all kinds of weather until you become at ease." Really like that. It all flowed succinctly especially the last stanza. Great job!
Comment Written 23-Mar-2014
reply by the author on 23-Mar-2014
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Well, hello my friend. Glad you stopped by to review and so happy you like it. A great review and thanks for the stars. Love it. Miss Sally
Comment from Sasha
This is excellent. Smooth flowing quatrains filled with such beautiful expressions of love. I really enjoyed this and found the ending both clever and so very true. keep up the great work.
reply by the author on 23-Mar-2014
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This is excellent. Smooth flowing quatrains filled with such beautiful expressions of love. I really enjoyed this and found the ending both clever and so very true. keep up the great work.
Comment Written 23-Mar-2014
reply by the author on 23-Mar-2014
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Thanks Sasha. I am a romantic at heart, can't you tell? LOL. Love your nice review, my friend. Thanks again. Miss Sally
Comment from seaglass
That was an old saying my father used. This is a nicely rhymed poem with a moving meter that makes it feel light and fun. First love, so light and exciting!
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reply by the author on 23-Mar-2014
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That was an old saying my father used. This is a nicely rhymed poem with a moving meter that makes it feel light and fun. First love, so light and exciting!
This rating does not count towards story rating or author rank.
The highest and the lowest rating are not included in calculations.
Comment Written 23-Mar-2014
reply by the author on 23-Mar-2014
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Thanks seaglass. yeah, my folks did too. Thanks for the lovely review. Miss Sally