Sense of Spring
Quatrains /8/8/8/8 not a contest entry18 total reviews
Comment from me_tudor
This was a great poem. Another one of your very best. It makes me think of spring and be able to see the changes coming, which I am so ready for. :) Fantastic job!
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This was a great poem. Another one of your very best. It makes me think of spring and be able to see the changes coming, which I am so ready for. :) Fantastic job!
Comment Written 25-Mar-2014
Comment from RGstar
And how we await such time with great anticipation. The rose will set the marker for that eagerly awaited time of year.
Good write, Debbie,
Best wishes,
RGstar
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And how we await such time with great anticipation. The rose will set the marker for that eagerly awaited time of year.
Good write, Debbie,
Best wishes,
RGstar
Comment Written 25-Mar-2014
Comment from GracieAnn
Debbie, regardless that it does not have nine lines and the word countdown, it is beautifully written and we all get fat fingers sometimes on the keyboards and select the wrong thing. No worries this is well done in every way.:0 GracieAnn
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Debbie, regardless that it does not have nine lines and the word countdown, it is beautifully written and we all get fat fingers sometimes on the keyboards and select the wrong thing. No worries this is well done in every way.:0 GracieAnn
Comment Written 25-Mar-2014
Comment from Petriesan
As I watch the snow melt today
I know a rose is on the way
great line of anticipation, not just for the poem but for the season
drink iced tea ( with something else sometimes)
great poem about this time of year
reply by the author on 24-Mar-2014
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As I watch the snow melt today
I know a rose is on the way
great line of anticipation, not just for the poem but for the season
drink iced tea ( with something else sometimes)
great poem about this time of year
Comment Written 24-Mar-2014
reply by the author on 24-Mar-2014
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Thank you. Glad you enjoyed, my friend~Debbie
Comment from Jumbo J
Hi Debbie,
there seems to be a lot of joy that the snow has melted and birds are tweeting, buds are developing and promising bloom... the Spring renewal... oh it is a lovely thought... that's if you live in a cold land, which you do... it's Autumn here and we're still in the high twenties(Celsius) my favorite time... the bities slow down there need for blood, there's a cooler air making everything comfortable... this wonderful write nearly made me want to jump on a plane, just to see what all the fuss has been about... love it! But I doubt I'll offer you much hope for the naani contest, but who knows, stranger things have occurred... beautiful all the same.
With our thoughts we create,
a sense of freedom,
James xx
reply by the author on 24-Mar-2014
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Hi Debbie,
there seems to be a lot of joy that the snow has melted and birds are tweeting, buds are developing and promising bloom... the Spring renewal... oh it is a lovely thought... that's if you live in a cold land, which you do... it's Autumn here and we're still in the high twenties(Celsius) my favorite time... the bities slow down there need for blood, there's a cooler air making everything comfortable... this wonderful write nearly made me want to jump on a plane, just to see what all the fuss has been about... love it! But I doubt I'll offer you much hope for the naani contest, but who knows, stranger things have occurred... beautiful all the same.
With our thoughts we create,
a sense of freedom,
James xx
Comment Written 24-Mar-2014
reply by the author on 24-Mar-2014
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Thank you so very much, my dear friend. If I won the naani contest, it would be a miracle since it's not a naani. Glad it is cooling off there, it is snowing again here~Debbie xx
Comment from krys123
Debbie, I enjoyed reading your heavenly poem for many reasons. Technically The rhymes are neither forced, labored or strained while the rhythm. Lovely throughout the poem making it easier for persons To read it clearly. That affirmation or insertion of your poem written in springtime is very illuminative, creative and ingenious. The slope aggression of each foliage growing during this time was remarkably imagined through your imagery. Thank you so much for sharing and posting of you work for everyone and may you always find love were every you are.
Alex
reply by the author on 24-Mar-2014
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Debbie, I enjoyed reading your heavenly poem for many reasons. Technically The rhymes are neither forced, labored or strained while the rhythm. Lovely throughout the poem making it easier for persons To read it clearly. That affirmation or insertion of your poem written in springtime is very illuminative, creative and ingenious. The slope aggression of each foliage growing during this time was remarkably imagined through your imagery. Thank you so much for sharing and posting of you work for everyone and may you always find love were every you are.
Alex
Comment Written 23-Mar-2014
reply by the author on 24-Mar-2014
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Thank you again, my friend~Debbie
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Debbie, you are so entirely welcome.
Alex
Comment from Robert Lee Brown
Debbie, this is a very good write; looking forward for Spring. You sound like you are ready for Spring and/or definitely looking forward. That is where our future is and will be. Best wishes, Bob
reply by the author on 24-Mar-2014
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Debbie, this is a very good write; looking forward for Spring. You sound like you are ready for Spring and/or definitely looking forward. That is where our future is and will be. Best wishes, Bob
Comment Written 23-Mar-2014
reply by the author on 24-Mar-2014
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I'm ready for spring, but it is snowing again here. Thank you, my friend~Debbie
Comment from JW
This is a very nice poem.
Fortunately, all snow around here has melt. However, there is a possibility of a bit of it returning soon.
Personally, I am ready for Spring and warm weather - even though it means I will have a lot more work to do.
Thanks for sharing this. JW
reply by the author on 24-Mar-2014
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This is a very nice poem.
Fortunately, all snow around here has melt. However, there is a possibility of a bit of it returning soon.
Personally, I am ready for Spring and warm weather - even though it means I will have a lot more work to do.
Thanks for sharing this. JW
Comment Written 23-Mar-2014
reply by the author on 24-Mar-2014
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Thank you, my friend~Debbie
Comment from Terrie DeGolier
Oh how I long to see the gardens bloom, the trees bud, baby animals coming into this world. Its been so long since we have smelled the lilacs, the warm breeze inviting us outside. Your poem was so descriptive it made me yearn more for the summer months to get here and kick these winter blues out the door. Thank you for sharing. Terrie
reply by the author on 24-Mar-2014
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Oh how I long to see the gardens bloom, the trees bud, baby animals coming into this world. Its been so long since we have smelled the lilacs, the warm breeze inviting us outside. Your poem was so descriptive it made me yearn more for the summer months to get here and kick these winter blues out the door. Thank you for sharing. Terrie
Comment Written 23-Mar-2014
reply by the author on 24-Mar-2014
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I am so ready for spring and it is snowing here again, lol. Thank you~~Debbie
Comment from barbara.wilkey
Lilac scents will fragrance fresh air
Abundance of life ev'rywhere
(This is the most wonderful part of spring. The new life. I enjoyed reading your poem. It is beautiful.)
reply by the author on 24-Mar-2014
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Lilac scents will fragrance fresh air
Abundance of life ev'rywhere
(This is the most wonderful part of spring. The new life. I enjoyed reading your poem. It is beautiful.)
Comment Written 23-Mar-2014
reply by the author on 24-Mar-2014
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Thank you. If it would quit snowing, maybe we would see some sign of spring~Debbie
