Comment from ennahanid

Excellent

Good play on words here and got a grin out of me...your color choice highlights your words very nicely and I wish you luck with your contest entry - Dinah

 Comment Written 20-Mar-2014

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reply by the author on 20-Mar-2014

Thank you Dinah for your great feedback and good luck wishes. I appreciate both! Kindest regards as always...:)

Comment from Domino 2

Excellent

Thanks for entering, mystery writer.

Very funny and naughty innuendo of 'snakes'.

I reckon this one deserves to contend.

Good luck and best wishes, Ted

 Comment Written 19-Mar-2014

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reply by the author on 19-Mar-2014

Thank you Ted :) I don't think anyone else 'gets it' though!
Thanks for sponsoring yet another fun prompt :) Kindest regards as always x

Comment from Irene D. Garces

Excellent

Ladders & snakes is one of the most popular game I know. If you mean the game without any malice or double standard meaning, yes I agree with you. I don't like going down on any snakes either.

If you meant something else...well I did not get it right.

 Comment Written 19-Mar-2014

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reply by the author on 19-Mar-2014

Hi Irene :) I am glad that you enjoyed the poem on any level and I thank you for the stars. Please be assured I never write, say or do anything with malice... kindest regards :)

reply by Irene D. Garces on 26-Mar-2014

God Bless.