Writing Prompt Entries 2014
Viewing comments for Chapter 20 "Theme-Park Not Required"The clue is in the title!
9 total reviews
Comment from NicciFaye
Debra - you are right about that. Any child with a great spirit and imagination can turn any place to a theme park if properly equipped. A Great 5-7-5 and truly an enjoyable read.
reply by the author on 18-Mar-2014
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Debra - you are right about that. Any child with a great spirit and imagination can turn any place to a theme park if properly equipped. A Great 5-7-5 and truly an enjoyable read.
Comment Written 18-Mar-2014
reply by the author on 18-Mar-2014
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Thank you NicciFaye for your wonderful feedback :) I appreciate it! Kindest regards, Debra :)
Comment from MagKing
Theme park not required, Boughs and branches are this boy's adventure playground.
I can see that you're the contest winner.
Congratulations on your winning!
MagKing
reply by the author on 18-Mar-2014
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Theme park not required, Boughs and branches are this boy's adventure playground.
I can see that you're the contest winner.
Congratulations on your winning!
MagKing
Comment Written 18-Mar-2014
reply by the author on 18-Mar-2014
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Thank you Magking! I appreciate your feedback and message of congratulations. Kindest regards, Debra :)
Comment from ennahanid
I am loving your approach to this contest with this subject of your choice along with the excellent picture and color scheme it is a most enjoyable read this morning and I thank you and wish you luck - Dinah
reply by the author on 18-Mar-2014
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I am loving your approach to this contest with this subject of your choice along with the excellent picture and color scheme it is a most enjoyable read this morning and I thank you and wish you luck - Dinah
Comment Written 17-Mar-2014
reply by the author on 18-Mar-2014
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Hi Dinah :) Thank you so much for your lovely feedback and good luck wishes. I appreciate both (and luck was with me this time LOL!) Kindest regards as always, Debra :) x
Comment from the reddis kid
good poem.
required could be shortened to requir'd to make it read quicker. other than that i'd say this is a pretty solid 5-7-5 poem.
though that comment alone was too short so i'm adding this final paragraph to ensure you will be able to receive my comment and for me to get my points.
God bless you!
reply by the author on 17-Mar-2014
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good poem.
required could be shortened to requir'd to make it read quicker. other than that i'd say this is a pretty solid 5-7-5 poem.
though that comment alone was too short so i'm adding this final paragraph to ensure you will be able to receive my comment and for me to get my points.
God bless you!
Comment Written 16-Mar-2014
reply by the author on 17-Mar-2014
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Thank you :)
Comment from JuneYvonne
Love it! This brings back fond tree-climbing memories of my childhood, when the top of a tree was a castle and "Theme Park" was not in my vocabulary. Happy, carefree days, and you have captured this in your short poem, with of course the perfect picture to illustrate your words.
Good luck in the contest - this should do well.
reply by the author on 17-Mar-2014
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Love it! This brings back fond tree-climbing memories of my childhood, when the top of a tree was a castle and "Theme Park" was not in my vocabulary. Happy, carefree days, and you have captured this in your short poem, with of course the perfect picture to illustrate your words.
Good luck in the contest - this should do well.
Comment Written 16-Mar-2014
reply by the author on 17-Mar-2014
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Thank you JuneYvonne for your wonderful feedback and good luck wishes. I appreciate both! Kindest regards as always...:)
Comment from Domino 2
Excellent theme, mystery writer.
Indeed, technology has taken over simple and necessary adventure.
Thanks for reminding me of my tree-climbing days as a kid. We were surrounded by woods, and I spent loads of time climbing trees - and some time falling out of them. :-)
Good luck, Ted
reply by the author on 17-Mar-2014
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Excellent theme, mystery writer.
Indeed, technology has taken over simple and necessary adventure.
Thanks for reminding me of my tree-climbing days as a kid. We were surrounded by woods, and I spent loads of time climbing trees - and some time falling out of them. :-)
Good luck, Ted
Comment Written 16-Mar-2014
reply by the author on 17-Mar-2014
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Hi Ted :) Thank you for your great feedback - I bet the young Ted had scraped knees galore! Can't beat a bit of tree climbing :) Thanks for the good luck wishes also. Kindest regards...:)
Comment from Dean Kuch
Yep, I can relate to that kid. Building tree houses was a HUGE source of fun and pride when we were in our preteen years. One of them still remains today, at the home my parents currently live in. Dad & I restored it about 10 years ago, and all many little kids in our family love plating there.
Amusement Parks?! No way!
Great job.
reply by the author on 16-Mar-2014
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Yep, I can relate to that kid. Building tree houses was a HUGE source of fun and pride when we were in our preteen years. One of them still remains today, at the home my parents currently live in. Dad & I restored it about 10 years ago, and all many little kids in our family love plating there.
Amusement Parks?! No way!
Great job.
Comment Written 16-Mar-2014
reply by the author on 16-Mar-2014
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Hi Dean :) Thank you so much for your great feedback. I never had a tree house and there aren't any established trees in our garden for us to build one for the kids - such a shame, they'd love one... Happy to hear at least 1 of yours is still getting plenty of use! Why pay the admission for theme parks when trees and imagination are free?! Kindest regards...:)
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You got it! The pleasure was all mine!
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Comment from Little Miss History
You followed all the rules for Haiku. I think that you made a good choice for a title. This young by is certainly a tree hugger of a different sort. Original concept for this contest.
reply by the author on 16-Mar-2014
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You followed all the rules for Haiku. I think that you made a good choice for a title. This young by is certainly a tree hugger of a different sort. Original concept for this contest.
Comment Written 16-Mar-2014
reply by the author on 16-Mar-2014
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Thank you for your great feedback :) Kindest regards...
Comment from Petriesan
good luck in the contest. I agree. I would tire of theme parks, but trees, never. Used to spend hour upon hour in them, including one time I was chased there by a mossed who was a little pissed at me for throwing snowballs at his. . .in which case, the tree probably saved my life
reply by the author on 16-Mar-2014
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good luck in the contest. I agree. I would tire of theme parks, but trees, never. Used to spend hour upon hour in them, including one time I was chased there by a mossed who was a little pissed at me for throwing snowballs at his. . .in which case, the tree probably saved my life
Comment Written 16-Mar-2014
reply by the author on 16-Mar-2014
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LOL! Thanks for your great feedback and good luck wishes. I appreciate both! Kindest regards...:)