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The theory of sound

By George I think we've got it!

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Comment from adewpearl
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Great pairing of cartoon and poem, which is in excellent 5/7/5 syllable count
I am laughing myself silly over your variation on an old question LOL
Yeah, I'm pretty sure he made a sound or two or three. LOL :-) Brooke

 Comment Written 17-Mar-2014

reply by the author on 17-Mar-2014
    thank you Brooke.
Comment from seaglass
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This scenario happened to my son and he definitely heard it. This 5-7-5 poem is correctly written. It playfully addresses the age old theory of sound

 Comment Written 16-Mar-2014

reply by the author on 16-Mar-2014
    thank you seaglass.
Comment from akulkumol
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Beautiful thought...but the title and the content, I am puzzled what say ...theory of sound or painful cry of the man...exactly where the poem was pointing difficult to..a question or an answer...I would say the man cried and making sound with vain...loved reading it...

 Comment Written 16-Mar-2014

reply by the author on 16-Mar-2014
    Thank you akulkumol. "If a tree falls in a forest and no one hears it, did it make a sound?" Is an old American saying. I was simply having fun with it.
Comment from faithful_2
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Tree falls on a man
But no one's there to hear it.
Did he make a sound?

For sound to be heard... the source, the medium and the receiver must be present. He will surely make a sound and he will hear it by himself although there's no one out there to hear him when he ask for help.

 Comment Written 16-Mar-2014

reply by the author on 16-Mar-2014
    thank you faithful.
Comment from Acquired Taste
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Terrific take on the "does it make a sound" ditty.

My guess is, if it really was a decorated Christmas tree - the entire neighborhood heard the sound!

Best of luck! AT=/

 Comment Written 16-Mar-2014

reply by the author on 16-Mar-2014
    Thank you.
Comment from BHCameron
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Love this! Clever and precise, with the obvious reference to a saying everyone knows. Definitely plays to my own sense of humour.

 Comment Written 16-Mar-2014

reply by the author on 16-Mar-2014
    Thank you.
Comment from lancellot
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Perfect syllable count and nice variation on the classic question. I guess the answer is: Only the trees would know. Well done and good luck in the contest.

 Comment Written 16-Mar-2014

reply by the author on 16-Mar-2014
    Thank you.