Like Never Before
Feeling Free..............3 total reviews
Comment from LoannaLois
Wow...the picture had me so intrigued...that the poem was a puzzle indeed....I found myself thinking sky-diving.....but it was written so well...it didn't matter.
reply by the author on 15-Mar-2014
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Wow...the picture had me so intrigued...that the poem was a puzzle indeed....I found myself thinking sky-diving.....but it was written so well...it didn't matter.
Comment Written 15-Mar-2014
reply by the author on 15-Mar-2014
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Thank you so much for this excellent review and the exceptional comments. Your thoughts were close to my mystery event!
Have a great weekend!
Comment from STEPHEN A CARTER
Always longed for this EVENT'S SATISFACTION
Brave I must become without distraction
In attempting this dare devil action
No worry, no fear must be ATTRACTION
A gift to myself without overreaction
Suggestions only. No disrespect intended. Good luck.
Regards:
reply by the author on 12-Mar-2014
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Always longed for this EVENT'S SATISFACTION
Brave I must become without distraction
In attempting this dare devil action
No worry, no fear must be ATTRACTION
A gift to myself without overreaction
Suggestions only. No disrespect intended. Good luck.
Regards:
Comment Written 12-Mar-2014
reply by the author on 12-Mar-2014
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Thank you so much for this excellent review and your exceptional comments! I really liked your suggestions especially the one on the first line - thank you. Have great weekend!
Comment from RYME4U
This is well done and well rhymed. I still cannot figure what event you are talking about (Childbirth or perhaps marriage But i found it to be delightful to read. The artwork is a good match for your mysterious poem.
reply by the author on 12-Mar-2014
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This is well done and well rhymed. I still cannot figure what event you are talking about (Childbirth or perhaps marriage But i found it to be delightful to read. The artwork is a good match for your mysterious poem.
Comment Written 12-Mar-2014
reply by the author on 12-Mar-2014
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Thank so much for this excellent review and your exceptional comments. Your comments made me laugh and I am so glad you found it a delight to read. Have a great weekend!