Comment from MacMhuirich

Excellent

This was a wonderful poem. The artwork chosen is perfect and the colours are stunning. The imagery your words provoke is brilliant. thank you for sharing.
Bless you
John

 Comment Written 09-Dec-2015

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reply by the author on 09-Dec-2015

Wow, this is an old one. I remember the prompt. Personify a place or thing, but do not reveal. This was Kilimanjaro and readers were trying to figure out african plain and ice....being the snow on kili. Thanks John for the review, cheers

Comment from Jean Lutz

Excellent

Magnificent composition. A soul set free has no limits. Doesn't use a lot of hype to express it -- simple words take it to new heights.

 Comment Written 15-Mar-2014

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reply by the author on 15-Mar-2014

Thanks for the wonderful review, I'm flying, I'm flying

Comment from LoannaLois

Excellent

Simply and beautifully written...this illustration is stunning...how did you ever find this appropriate piece?."ermine wrap ice queen" nice

 Comment Written 15-Mar-2014

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reply by the author on 15-Mar-2014

thanks for the review

Comment from Carrie Carson

Excellent

This is striking, I can see her at her perch above it all.

No spag, good form, consistent format, I envy that!

Great job on the personification and you're right, that is a perfect image for this. :) Carrie

 Comment Written 14-Mar-2014

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reply by the author on 14-Mar-2014

Thanks for the great review

reply by Carrie Carson on 14-Mar-2014

Certainly, you're welcome. And Welcome to Fanstory, too! :) Carrie

Comment from Righteous Riter

Excellent

aloof she surveys
the African plains below
ermine wrap ice queen
Good complimentary photo. The syllable count is correct. Good alliteration with she surveys. Clear message that is short and simple.

 Comment Written 14-Mar-2014

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reply by the author on 14-Mar-2014

Thanks for the review, it is Kili

Comment from queenv

Excellent

Beautiful picture. What would happen to make ice at the equator. A contrast of hot and cold. A great mental image. I love the picture. Good job.

 Comment Written 14-Mar-2014

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reply by the author on 14-Mar-2014

Thanks for the review. it is Kili

Comment from LateBloomer

Excellent

Hello author, a great personification. Very good imagery and format. I especially liked:

ermine wrap ice queen

(Yes, indeed. Very Good.)

As this is a contest entry, I wish you good luck. Keep the blue waters flowing. LateBloomer

 Comment Written 14-Mar-2014

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reply by the author on 14-Mar-2014

Thanks for the review, it is Kili

Comment from TAB_that's me

Excellent

this is great poetic personification for the prompt. I like the simplicity of it in a 5-7-5 poem. Good luck in the contest.
Teresa

 Comment Written 13-Mar-2014

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reply by the author on 13-Mar-2014

thanks for the review, it is Kili

Comment from Aplgwest

Excellent

Lovely picture and image that the poem conveys. I think it very well meets the writing prompt criteria of personification of a place.

 Comment Written 12-Mar-2014

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reply by the author on 12-Mar-2014

Thanks for the review. it's Kili

Comment from Lysa Schuler

Exceptional

This was an excellent poem. The picture you chose was perfect and the color coordination was ideal. They aided the poem's captivating flow. The accuracy of the words and meter captured my attention with just a few lines. It says alot. Good writ

 Comment Written 12-Mar-2014

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reply by the author on 12-Mar-2014

Thanks for the review. It's Kili