It's Just a Kiss
Is a kiss just a kiss? Are you sure?16 total reviews
Comment from Gungalo
Some folks just never learn. LOL one kiss can do a lot of damage eh? Heheh it was unfortunate things went as they did. Sigh.
reply by the author on 14-Mar-2014
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Some folks just never learn. LOL one kiss can do a lot of damage eh? Heheh it was unfortunate things went as they did. Sigh.
Comment Written 14-Mar-2014
reply by the author on 14-Mar-2014
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Thank you very much. Yes, it happens.
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Smile.
Comment from kiwijenny
Ha ha ha ha ....she infected me.....oh if we thought about stuff more before the impulse........lol
I liked this a lot
Well written
God bless
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Ha ha ha ha ....she infected me.....oh if we thought about stuff more before the impulse........lol
I liked this a lot
Well written
God bless
Comment Written 11-Mar-2014
Comment from Winslow
Dear Writer,
Tit for tat and your main character played along the poor sad dupe. Well written and compelling.
Good luck in the contest. An excellent entry.
Warm regards,
A fanstorian
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Dear Writer,
Tit for tat and your main character played along the poor sad dupe. Well written and compelling.
Good luck in the contest. An excellent entry.
Warm regards,
A fanstorian
Comment Written 11-Mar-2014
Comment from DonandVicki
Quick flashy fiction. Good attention getter and grabs the reader and hold his/her attention. Good photograph to accentuate the story. Don and Vicki
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Quick flashy fiction. Good attention getter and grabs the reader and hold his/her attention. Good photograph to accentuate the story. Don and Vicki
Comment Written 11-Mar-2014
Comment from G.B. Smith
Hey author
It just shows ta go ya that beautiful packages can be dangerous
I was not ready for the ending of this very well written story. Best wishes in the contest
Bear
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Hey author
It just shows ta go ya that beautiful packages can be dangerous
I was not ready for the ending of this very well written story. Best wishes in the contest
Bear
Comment Written 11-Mar-2014
Comment from jmdg1954
Reminds me of an episode from the TV show, Glee. Purposely infected with the "kissing disease" at the booth. High schoolers at their best.
Good story with a common theme. As are many of the entries. It's all good though.
Best of luck in the vote... John
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Reminds me of an episode from the TV show, Glee. Purposely infected with the "kissing disease" at the booth. High schoolers at their best.
Good story with a common theme. As are many of the entries. It's all good though.
Best of luck in the vote... John
Comment Written 11-Mar-2014
Comment from Marillion
Yikes! Now THAT could be a problem. Good stuff in a very short frame to work in, and perhaps you should write another after Sara finds out...though you might need more than 100 words...
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Yikes! Now THAT could be a problem. Good stuff in a very short frame to work in, and perhaps you should write another after Sara finds out...though you might need more than 100 words...
Comment Written 11-Mar-2014
Comment from l.raven
OH Eeeekkkk, the truth...hummmm...that is what can happen...your story is very well told....and very well written...luff
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OH Eeeekkkk, the truth...hummmm...that is what can happen...your story is very well told....and very well written...luff
Comment Written 11-Mar-2014
Comment from Karen B.
I like this...it's concise and to the point to meet the contest requirement but definitely tells quite a story. Nicely done. Good luck in the contest.
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I like this...it's concise and to the point to meet the contest requirement but definitely tells quite a story. Nicely done. Good luck in the contest.
Comment Written 11-Mar-2014
Comment from BeasPeas
Interesting story of regret for a surprise encounter. I guess this is a warning to keep our body parts for those we know and even then we can't be sure.
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Interesting story of regret for a surprise encounter. I guess this is a warning to keep our body parts for those we know and even then we can't be sure.
Comment Written 11-Mar-2014