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flash fiction6 total reviews
Comment from l.raven
you much have left quit a tip...but it has to start somewhere...and who's to say...very well written...I love the story and the picture perfect
reply by the author on 11-Mar-2014
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you much have left quit a tip...but it has to start somewhere...and who's to say...very well written...I love the story and the picture perfect
Comment Written 11-Mar-2014
reply by the author on 11-Mar-2014
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ha ha we ended up dating for a year and traveling to Greece. opa!
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OMG, that is wonderful...memories!!!
Comment from BeasPeas
It's a good thing this is a fantasy because that waiter could be fired for that behavior, but for a story it's intriguing. Could this be the start of another story?
reply by the author on 11-Mar-2014
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It's a good thing this is a fantasy because that waiter could be fired for that behavior, but for a story it's intriguing. Could this be the start of another story?
Comment Written 11-Mar-2014
reply by the author on 11-Mar-2014
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Not a fantasy, it really happened and we dated for a year and travelled to Greece. opa Thanks for the review
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A similar thing happened to me two different times and, yep, they were both Greek.
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sounds like an epidemic. Things like that don't happen to me, but he was so cute and I was so single,knew where he worked ha ha
Comment from LilHippie
Nice in 100 words. Love it. It reminds me of an episode of Sex in the City, but it is unique. This was a really cool prompt I think. Not too long, and sometimes that is hard. You captured my attention, it was flirty, a little risqué, but in no way inappropriate. Mostly, it was well written by you. Love the photo you chose also. Good luck in the contest.
reply by the author on 11-Mar-2014
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Nice in 100 words. Love it. It reminds me of an episode of Sex in the City, but it is unique. This was a really cool prompt I think. Not too long, and sometimes that is hard. You captured my attention, it was flirty, a little risqué, but in no way inappropriate. Mostly, it was well written by you. Love the photo you chose also. Good luck in the contest.
Comment Written 11-Mar-2014
reply by the author on 11-Mar-2014
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Thanks for the review, we ended up dating for a few months, opa!
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Hahahahahahahahaha!
Comment from manicblue
This fit the topic well without being lewd and lascivious. Well done in so few words. I wish you luck in this contest.
mb xoxo
reply by the author on 10-Mar-2014
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This fit the topic well without being lewd and lascivious. Well done in so few words. I wish you luck in this contest.
mb xoxo
Comment Written 10-Mar-2014
reply by the author on 10-Mar-2014
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thanks for the review
Comment from boxergirl
You did a good job of meeting the contest requirements of telling a story in 100 words. This one addresses the prompt well when your handsome waiter kisses you. Check please. 8-)
reply by the author on 10-Mar-2014
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You did a good job of meeting the contest requirements of telling a story in 100 words. This one addresses the prompt well when your handsome waiter kisses you. Check please. 8-)
Comment Written 10-Mar-2014
reply by the author on 10-Mar-2014
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thanks for the review
Comment from bookishfabler
Wouldn't that be real nice. Something similar happened to me on a Cruise ship while at the night club. one of the crewmen was gorgeous and didn't speak English, but what a great kisser.
reply by the author on 10-Mar-2014
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Wouldn't that be real nice. Something similar happened to me on a Cruise ship while at the night club. one of the crewmen was gorgeous and didn't speak English, but what a great kisser.
Comment Written 10-Mar-2014
reply by the author on 10-Mar-2014
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Hey, it is not like it happens every day, but when these random acts of pure sexiness comes around, I say go with it. Thanks for the review and sharing your story.
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Actually, your story brought that memory so I used it. Thank you for the inspiration. Good luck in the contest
Hugs
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Your story is more romantic. With the stars and sea, instead of the hobart and dishes rattling, ha ha