Haiku (cardinal's contrast)
The hope found knowing spring is coming44 total reviews
Comment from artisart4u
Your haiku about knowing when the season will change is very good, we in PA say that when we see a robin.
You have your required 3,5,3 syllables.
Good luck in your writing.
reply by the author on 09-Apr-2014
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Your haiku about knowing when the season will change is very good, we in PA say that when we see a robin.
You have your required 3,5,3 syllables.
Good luck in your writing.
Comment Written 09-Mar-2014
reply by the author on 09-Apr-2014
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I'm so sorry for getting back with you so late, but things have been a bit crazy. Thank you so very much for your wonderfully thoughtful and kind review and the lovely stars.
Teresa
Comment from patsypats
How beautiful and hopeful is that. Nice write and staying within contest guidelines of 5-7-5. Your picture accents your work well although your words paint the real picture. Good job:)
reply by the author on 09-Apr-2014
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How beautiful and hopeful is that. Nice write and staying within contest guidelines of 5-7-5. Your picture accents your work well although your words paint the real picture. Good job:)
Comment Written 09-Mar-2014
reply by the author on 09-Apr-2014
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I'm so sorry for getting back with you so late, but things have been a bit crazy. Thank you so very much for your wonderfully thoughtful and kind review and the lovely stars.
Teresa
Comment from mauial
Good alliteration in the first line with cardinal's contrast. It would be a wonderful sight to see such a contrast that tells you spring is near after such a harsh winter.
reply by the author on 09-Apr-2014
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Good alliteration in the first line with cardinal's contrast. It would be a wonderful sight to see such a contrast that tells you spring is near after such a harsh winter.
Comment Written 09-Mar-2014
reply by the author on 09-Apr-2014
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I'm so sorry for getting back with you so late, but things have been a bit crazy. Thank you so very much for your wonderfully thoughtful and kind review and the lovely stars.
Teresa
Comment from Cycler
Yes, truly ... hope. Your haiku expresses this hope in a beautiful manner. Visually, and with your words, this is a great artwork. Visually and heartfully, I felt your poem!
reply by the author on 09-Mar-2014
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Yes, truly ... hope. Your haiku expresses this hope in a beautiful manner. Visually, and with your words, this is a great artwork. Visually and heartfully, I felt your poem!
Comment Written 09-Mar-2014
reply by the author on 09-Mar-2014
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Thank you so much, your feedback is full of so much encouragement. I sincerely appreciate your kind review. :)
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You are very welcome! Have a great day!
Comment from sweetwoodjax
this is very well written, simplytheresa, you did an excellent job writing this haiku about the promise of spring against the backdrop of winter. beautiful picture. good luck in the contest.
reply by the author on 09-Apr-2014
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this is very well written, simplytheresa, you did an excellent job writing this haiku about the promise of spring against the backdrop of winter. beautiful picture. good luck in the contest.
Comment Written 08-Mar-2014
reply by the author on 09-Apr-2014
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I'm so sorry for getting back with you so late, but things have been a bit crazy. Thank you so very much for your wonderfully thoughtful and kind review and the lovely stars.
Teresa
Comment from Dorothy Farrell
This is a lovely haiku - very optimistic write. And the picture of the cardinal (I've never seen one) is lovely. A very appropriate poem for the season and a good entry for the contest. Good Luck - Dorothy
reply by the author on 09-Apr-2014
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This is a lovely haiku - very optimistic write. And the picture of the cardinal (I've never seen one) is lovely. A very appropriate poem for the season and a good entry for the contest. Good Luck - Dorothy
Comment Written 08-Mar-2014
reply by the author on 09-Apr-2014
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Dorothy, I'm so sorry for getting back with you so late, but things have been a bit crazy. Thank you so very much for your wonderfully thoughtful and kind review and the lovely stars.
Teresa
Comment from Cedar
Your beautiful poem and picture gives me a touch of the spring fever. The Cardinal is our State bird here in Kentucky and I see many of them each day at my birdfeeders. Very well done and I wish you good luck. Bill
reply by the author on 09-Apr-2014
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Your beautiful poem and picture gives me a touch of the spring fever. The Cardinal is our State bird here in Kentucky and I see many of them each day at my birdfeeders. Very well done and I wish you good luck. Bill
Comment Written 08-Mar-2014
reply by the author on 09-Apr-2014
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Bill, You are always so kind. I'm so sorry for getting back with you so late, but things have been a bit crazy. Thank you so very much for your wonderfully thoughtful and kind review and the lovely stars.
Teresa
Comment from c_lucas
A messenger bringing thoughts of the coming spring. This is very well written with a smooth flow of words, making for a very good read.
reply by the author on 08-Mar-2014
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A messenger bringing thoughts of the coming spring. This is very well written with a smooth flow of words, making for a very good read.
Comment Written 08-Mar-2014
reply by the author on 08-Mar-2014
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Thank you so much :)
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You're welcome, Teresa. Charlie
Comment from Zue65
I just love the photo of the red cardinal against the bleak winter background. It certainly amplified the message you intend for the readers to receive. Yes, the hope of spring is not far behind. I enjoyed your poem.
reply by the author on 08-Mar-2014
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I just love the photo of the red cardinal against the bleak winter background. It certainly amplified the message you intend for the readers to receive. Yes, the hope of spring is not far behind. I enjoyed your poem.
Comment Written 08-Mar-2014
reply by the author on 08-Mar-2014
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Thank you so much for the kind words and wonderful review. I am hoping to take more photographs and I did post this one on FAR :)
Smiles,
Teresa :)
Comment from Rubylou
What a beautiful and welcoming greeting for spring. A cardinal with its red plum definitely sparks a color of hopeful warm weather. Best to you in the contest. Rubylou
reply by the author on 07-Mar-2014
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What a beautiful and welcoming greeting for spring. A cardinal with its red plum definitely sparks a color of hopeful warm weather. Best to you in the contest. Rubylou
Comment Written 07-Mar-2014
reply by the author on 07-Mar-2014
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:) Thank you so very much for your kind words and wonderful review.
Smiles,
Teresa
