Comment from Tomes Johnston

Excellent

This is an emotional and painful poem from the author in this piece of writing. I can feel the emotions running deep all the way through this poem.

 Comment Written 06-Mar-2014

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reply by the author on 07-Mar-2014

Thanks, Tomes.

reply by Tomes Johnston on 07-Mar-2014

My pleasure

Comment from Maureen's Pen

Excellent

Dear Aiona - yup can feel the anger in this one and well it does indeed help release it - great work, emotions raging in rhyme love it:)
Thanks for sharing it.
Maureen

 Comment Written 06-Mar-2014

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reply by the author on 07-Mar-2014

Thanks, Maureen.

Comment from Marillion

Excellent

I actually LOVE anger pieces. The words practically appear on the page themselves, and they're cathartic. Well done, too, and I'll bet it felt good to get it out, didn't it? :)

 Comment Written 05-Mar-2014

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reply by the author on 06-Mar-2014

Yah. Thanks, Marillion.

Comment from TOMORAL

Good

I'm not sure what this is saying, but the rhyme and rhythm and flow is spot on. Was someone passed up for a promotion? Great writing though!

 Comment Written 05-Mar-2014

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reply by the author on 06-Mar-2014

Thank you, TOMORAL. :) Yes, it does look like someone got passed up for a promotion, doesn't it? Actually I think we all three did.

Comment from Misrael

Excellent

I know from experience that writing helps us to deal with our problems and with anger and other things. I don't know what happened and I don't need to. Good way of dealing with anger. May God be with you.

 Comment Written 05-Mar-2014

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reply by the author on 06-Mar-2014

Thank you, Misrael. It certainly was more productive than yelling at him. :)