Writing Prompt Entries 2014
Viewing comments for Chapter 15 "Lost and Found"The clue is in the title!
31 total reviews
Comment from RYME4U
This one is very well written. The humor is subtle and the rhyme and rhythm are exactly right,This deserved all the awards as it was a delight to read.
reply by the author on 09-Mar-2014
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This one is very well written. The humor is subtle and the rhyme and rhythm are exactly right,This deserved all the awards as it was a delight to read.
Comment Written 09-Mar-2014
reply by the author on 09-Mar-2014
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Thank you so much for your wonderful feedback :) Kindest regards, Debra x
Comment from J. Dark
This is perfect in limerick form and is hysterically funny, Debra. I was really glad that I stopped by to read this one and I was delighted to see that it was the competition winner. Well done - it is well deserved. I love a great sense of humour and this made me smile.
Kindest of regards,
Julie :0)
reply by the author on 07-Mar-2014
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This is perfect in limerick form and is hysterically funny, Debra. I was really glad that I stopped by to read this one and I was delighted to see that it was the competition winner. Well done - it is well deserved. I love a great sense of humour and this made me smile.
Kindest of regards,
Julie :0)
Comment Written 06-Mar-2014
reply by the author on 07-Mar-2014
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Hi Julie :) Thank you so much for your great comments and 6 stars! Glad you enjoyed the limerick, happy to share a smile with you! - and it's nice to do well in the booths once in a while lol! Bye for now :) Debs x
Comment from Dawn Munro
Oh my goodness, I see why this limerick was a winner! This is oodles of fun, and definitely fits the prompt's instructions to a "T". I'm still grinning!
reply by the author on 06-Mar-2014
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Oh my goodness, I see why this limerick was a winner! This is oodles of fun, and definitely fits the prompt's instructions to a "T". I'm still grinning!
Comment Written 06-Mar-2014
reply by the author on 06-Mar-2014
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Hi Dawn :) Thank you so much for your lovely feedback - 'oodles of fun' works for me! So glad to share a giggle with you :) Kindest regards as always, Debra x
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Entirely my pleasure! :)
Comment from Jackarrie
Congratulation on your great win of the Limerick, It really is a deserved win. I was so frustrated yesterday unable to review all the entries, as FS was not available due to maintenance.
Well done Mary
reply by the author on 06-Mar-2014
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Congratulation on your great win of the Limerick, It really is a deserved win. I was so frustrated yesterday unable to review all the entries, as FS was not available due to maintenance.
Well done Mary
Comment Written 06-Mar-2014
reply by the author on 06-Mar-2014
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Hi Mary :) thank you so much for your wonderful feedback and message of congratulations!! I must admit it is nice to do well in a contest once in a while LOL! Frustrating yesterday with FS - the maintenance was from between 4-10pm here in the uk which is the usual time I have access to the computer. It's 6.50am here now and I've sneaked down to log-on before the kids wake up and need mommy-on-tap! Thank you again for your lovely comments :) Kindest regards as always, Debra :) x
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I am glad the manitenance did not affect your vote, Well done. Mary
Comment from misscookie
You got my attention from the start, what away to end my night.
This was very funny to read. I wonder if this could really happen.
Thank you for sharing.
Sorry for being late, I'm so behind in answering.
reply by the author on 06-Mar-2014
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You got my attention from the start, what away to end my night.
This was very funny to read. I wonder if this could really happen.
Thank you for sharing.
Sorry for being late, I'm so behind in answering.
Comment Written 05-Mar-2014
reply by the author on 06-Mar-2014
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Hi misscookie, thank you for your great reply - I'm glad to share a laugh with you! Kindest regards as always, Debra :)
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You're very welcome, until next time.
Comment from MagKing
A large, lovely lady named Nellie
Once lost the remote for her telly
She was rather impressed
When that night she undressed;
'twas tucked in the folds of her belly
Nice piece of work.
But did you mean swallowed it up?
Or the outward folds?
Good luck in the contest!
MagKing
reply by the author on 06-Mar-2014
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A large, lovely lady named Nellie
Once lost the remote for her telly
She was rather impressed
When that night she undressed;
'twas tucked in the folds of her belly
Nice piece of work.
But did you mean swallowed it up?
Or the outward folds?
Good luck in the contest!
MagKing
Comment Written 05-Mar-2014
reply by the author on 06-Mar-2014
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Thank you MagKing for your great feedback and good luck wishes. I appreciate both! I meant the outward folds, Nellie prefers to eat chocolate and chips over remote controls! Kindest regards, Debra :)
Comment from GabbyLew
This is a very entertaining limerick, and well worth repeating. My sister and I laughed out loud.
The rhythm is consistent and the meter is perfect.
Great job!
reply by the author on 06-Mar-2014
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This is a very entertaining limerick, and well worth repeating. My sister and I laughed out loud.
The rhythm is consistent and the meter is perfect.
Great job!
Comment Written 05-Mar-2014
reply by the author on 06-Mar-2014
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Hi GabbyLew, thank you so much for your great feedback - Glad to give you and your sister a chuckle :D Kindest regards, Debra :)
Comment from in777wr#
This was a well written limerick poem. The poem reads, and flows well. Can you imagine that really happening? This poem paints a good mental picture of that. Nicely written.
reply by the author on 05-Mar-2014
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This was a well written limerick poem. The poem reads, and flows well. Can you imagine that really happening? This poem paints a good mental picture of that. Nicely written.
Comment Written 05-Mar-2014
reply by the author on 05-Mar-2014
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Hello :) Thank you so much for your marvellous feedback and generous 6 stars! I appreciate both, so glad you enjoyed the limerick! Would be funny in real life - Imagine what else she might find in those tummy folds, keys, spare change...! Kindest regards, Debra :)
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You're welcome, very nice job.
Comment from Sandra Stoner-Mitchell
LOL! That has to be the winner! How do you do that! I wouldn't have a clue how to start. This one was so funny. Good luck in the contest! xsx Sandra
reply by the author on 05-Mar-2014
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LOL! That has to be the winner! How do you do that! I wouldn't have a clue how to start. This one was so funny. Good luck in the contest! xsx Sandra
Comment Written 05-Mar-2014
reply by the author on 05-Mar-2014
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Thank you Sandra for your lovely feedback and the vote of confidence! Glad to share a giggle with you - thank you for your good luck wishes too :) love Debra xx
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You are most welcome, when I put my vote in, (for you) you were well in the lead, so I wasn't the only one who thought it was Brilliant! WELL DONE xsx
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:) Thank you - it's nice to do well once in a while! lol :) xx
Comment from victor 66
A very nice poem with a very nice rhyme. Following the format of '8-8-6-6-8 Limerick', I have not really tried this. If you don't mind, I'll keep this as an example and perhaps try a limerick myself. Best wishes.
reply by the author on 05-Mar-2014
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A very nice poem with a very nice rhyme. Following the format of '8-8-6-6-8 Limerick', I have not really tried this. If you don't mind, I'll keep this as an example and perhaps try a limerick myself. Best wishes.
Comment Written 05-Mar-2014
reply by the author on 05-Mar-2014
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Hi Victor, thank you so much for your lovely feedback and good wishes. I'm honoured you would refer to my limerick as an example - what a lovely compliment :) Kindest regards, Debra :)
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You are welcome.