Comment from lindalcreel

Excellent

You seem to have fun with your poetry. Some of these lines I had to read twice, but they were pretty funny when I got to the end. Thanks so much for sharing.

 Comment Written 02-Mar-2014

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reply by the author on 02-Mar-2014

Thank you, Linda, for reviewing this. Bill

reply by lindalcreel on 03-Mar-2014

My pleasure:)

Comment from trimple

Excellent

A partners white haired mutt has just pooped on the new rug? EEK! LOL
You sure do sound pretty pissed off Bill.
Meh, shit only sticks if you forget to wipe it clean:)

Fun angry write

thanks for sharing

kind regards
tracey trimple :)

 Comment Written 01-Mar-2014

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reply by the author on 01-Mar-2014

Thank you, Tracey, for taking a look at this. The dog is deceased now (natural causes).

reply by trimple on 01-Mar-2014

Awe :( :) xx

Comment from Maureen's Pen

Excellent

Well Bill - I am sure glad you aren't pissed off at me - yikes this has a raw power to it which I think bumped up the impact for me....One of those comments pop out my mouth as I finished reading it ....holy crap.:)
Raw and pure - as always - and you even made it rhyme, brownie points for sure.
Thanks for sharing - I think.
Maureen

 Comment Written 01-Mar-2014

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reply by the author on 01-Mar-2014

Thank you, Maureen, for taking a look at this. The dog is deceased now (natural causes).