Expressing Myself
Viewing comments for Chapter 30 "Sweet Pickles and Milk"Writing my way out of depression / mental illness
14 total reviews
Comment from Jean Lutz
Sounds like a perfect party for a little one just experimenting with food. I am a "love-giver" for preschoolers. I've seen a few of these combinations -- even tried some myself. :-)
reply by the author on 27-Mar-2014
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Sounds like a perfect party for a little one just experimenting with food. I am a "love-giver" for preschoolers. I've seen a few of these combinations -- even tried some myself. :-)
Comment Written 26-Mar-2014
reply by the author on 27-Mar-2014
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Thank you jean, I had fun writing this one!!
Comment from juliaSjames
The title drew me in. And the poem made me giggle. Adorably mischievous artwork was the frosting (sorry, the sour cream) on the cake.
Yup, it's the little things that make life worth living.
Love this artful and funny write that recalls the joys of childhood ... and pregnancy.
Best of luck.
reply by the author on 02-Mar-2014
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The title drew me in. And the poem made me giggle. Adorably mischievous artwork was the frosting (sorry, the sour cream) on the cake.
Yup, it's the little things that make life worth living.
Love this artful and funny write that recalls the joys of childhood ... and pregnancy.
Best of luck.
Comment Written 02-Mar-2014
reply by the author on 02-Mar-2014
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Thank you so much Julia! Your review made my night! After a long day at work I really feel rejuvenated by your kind words..
Comment from rouskin
sweet pickles and milk ketchup on potato chips it's the little things..That I adore too much Nice contest entry Really well done best of luck and be blessed
reply by the author on 02-Mar-2014
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sweet pickles and milk ketchup on potato chips it's the little things..That I adore too much Nice contest entry Really well done best of luck and be blessed
Comment Written 02-Mar-2014
reply by the author on 02-Mar-2014
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Thank you so much for your kind words and encouraging review!
Comment from ennahanid
The little things indeed, mine is cheese and jam sandwiches especially fine if grilled...this gave me a grin...vinegar on potato chips is also a big favorite...Dinah
reply by the author on 02-Mar-2014
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The little things indeed, mine is cheese and jam sandwiches especially fine if grilled...this gave me a grin...vinegar on potato chips is also a big favorite...Dinah
Comment Written 02-Mar-2014
reply by the author on 02-Mar-2014
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Cheese and jam, gotta try it! Thank you for your kind and encouraging review!
Comment from nelliesellie
I love the picture. I love the poem. The food choices makes it sound like someone is pregnant. It also sounds like some of the combinations of food my children would come up with.
reply by the author on 02-Mar-2014
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I love the picture. I love the poem. The food choices makes it sound like someone is pregnant. It also sounds like some of the combinations of food my children would come up with.
Comment Written 02-Mar-2014
reply by the author on 02-Mar-2014
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Wow!! Thank you so much for your kind review.. I am honored by the 6 stars!! Thank you!!!
Comment from write hand blue
Sweet pickles and milk..YUK! though the girl in the picture seems to be enjoying it.
I used to have dandilion and burdock lemonade with a dollop of ice cream. Not much better I suppose.
A well crafted humorous poem. Good luck.
:) mel.
reply by the author on 02-Mar-2014
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Sweet pickles and milk..YUK! though the girl in the picture seems to be enjoying it.
I used to have dandilion and burdock lemonade with a dollop of ice cream. Not much better I suppose.
A well crafted humorous poem. Good luck.
:) mel.
Comment Written 02-Mar-2014
reply by the author on 02-Mar-2014
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You've gotta try it!!! Thank you for this kind and encouraging review! And I've got to try dandelion and burdock lemonade with icecream.. sounds good to me!
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I'll mention it to my wife, but I know what the reaction will be. Lol.
Comment from Smoothiecool
good luck in the contest
you have all the correct components
all the little thing on treats are what makes it at times
flows well
cheers Smoothiecool
reply by the author on 02-Mar-2014
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good luck in the contest
you have all the correct components
all the little thing on treats are what makes it at times
flows well
cheers Smoothiecool
Comment Written 02-Mar-2014
reply by the author on 02-Mar-2014
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Thank you so much for your kind and encouraging review!
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welcome ..SC
Comment from Cindy Warren
She looks a little young to be pregnant. LOL Those are some interesting combinations. This one gave me a smile, remembering the days when I wanted weird things. Never pickles and milk, tho. Good luck in the contest.
reply by the author on 02-Mar-2014
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She looks a little young to be pregnant. LOL Those are some interesting combinations. This one gave me a smile, remembering the days when I wanted weird things. Never pickles and milk, tho. Good luck in the contest.
Comment Written 01-Mar-2014
reply by the author on 02-Mar-2014
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Thank you Cindy! you should try sweet pickles and milk and let me know what you think LOL!
Comment from l.raven
maybe if your pregnant...here's one...my husband used to put ketchup on his pancakes...LOL...very cute nd I love the picture...well done
reply by the author on 02-Mar-2014
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maybe if your pregnant...here's one...my husband used to put ketchup on his pancakes...LOL...very cute nd I love the picture...well done
Comment Written 01-Mar-2014
reply by the author on 02-Mar-2014
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ketchup on pancakes OMG, Ive got one. red wine vinegar with cottage cheese... Thank you for your kind and encouraging review raven!!
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You win...ekkkk...LOl...your so welcome...xxoo
Comment from RYME4U
Yhis is very cute all the way through. The combination of pickles and milk doesn't thrill me but the poem as a contest entry is quite good.
reply by the author on 02-Mar-2014
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Yhis is very cute all the way through. The combination of pickles and milk doesn't thrill me but the poem as a contest entry is quite good.
Comment Written 01-Mar-2014
reply by the author on 02-Mar-2014
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You must try sweet pickles and milk! it could be on your bucket list LOL. Thank you for this kind and encouraging review!!