Zanzibar
3 5 3 beach time6 total reviews
Comment from nelliesellie
I love the picture. I love the poem. There is something special about a sea breeze. I love the smell of it. It is usually cooler than other air. Great work. Good luck with the contest.
reply by the author on 28-Feb-2014
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I love the picture. I love the poem. There is something special about a sea breeze. I love the smell of it. It is usually cooler than other air. Great work. Good luck with the contest.
Comment Written 28-Feb-2014
reply by the author on 28-Feb-2014
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thanks for the review
Comment from BeasPeas
This is delightful. Reader gets into the mood of the scene in your 3-5-3. Particularly like second line, "kisses my warm face." Nice presentation.
reply by the author on 28-Feb-2014
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This is delightful. Reader gets into the mood of the scene in your 3-5-3. Particularly like second line, "kisses my warm face." Nice presentation.
Comment Written 28-Feb-2014
reply by the author on 28-Feb-2014
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thanks for the review
Comment from rouskin
ocean breeze kisses my warm face soft caress I'd like to be there Excellent artwork and nice entry I wish you best of luck in the contest
reply by the author on 28-Feb-2014
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ocean breeze kisses my warm face soft caress I'd like to be there Excellent artwork and nice entry I wish you best of luck in the contest
Comment Written 28-Feb-2014
reply by the author on 28-Feb-2014
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thanks for the review
Comment from Lovinia
Hi Mystery Writer
An excellent entry for the contest. Your poem draws the reader in and has them located on that beach ... well me anyway. lol
A great image and such a balmy breeze ... your words make me feel it, touch it, taste it and hear it. WOW! I love the near rhyme with "breeze/kisses/caress". Brilliant word usage. Wonderful personification. So gentle, eloquent and articulate. This is what I call a 'living' poem. You have captured the essence of the prompt. Sultry and sensual. Strong arousal of the senses and emotions.
A contender for the highest placement. I would like to give this a six if I had one. Good luck. Warmest regards - Lovinia xoxox
reply by the author on 28-Feb-2014
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Hi Mystery Writer
An excellent entry for the contest. Your poem draws the reader in and has them located on that beach ... well me anyway. lol
A great image and such a balmy breeze ... your words make me feel it, touch it, taste it and hear it. WOW! I love the near rhyme with "breeze/kisses/caress". Brilliant word usage. Wonderful personification. So gentle, eloquent and articulate. This is what I call a 'living' poem. You have captured the essence of the prompt. Sultry and sensual. Strong arousal of the senses and emotions.
A contender for the highest placement. I would like to give this a six if I had one. Good luck. Warmest regards - Lovinia xoxox
Comment Written 28-Feb-2014
reply by the author on 28-Feb-2014
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Thanks for the wonderful review
Comment from Maureen's Pen
Oh I liked this one and wish it was happening now - to my face - bring on the sunshine and you penned a great post.
Descriptive lines I enjoyed reading.
Thanks for sharing it and good luck.
Maureen
ocean breeze
kisses my warm face
soft caress
reply by the author on 28-Feb-2014
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Oh I liked this one and wish it was happening now - to my face - bring on the sunshine and you penned a great post.
Descriptive lines I enjoyed reading.
Thanks for sharing it and good luck.
Maureen
ocean breeze
kisses my warm face
soft caress
Comment Written 28-Feb-2014
reply by the author on 28-Feb-2014
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thanks for the review
Comment from zanya
This 3-5-3 'air ' poem powerfully conveys the beautiful sensation of a breeze on our skin 'soft caress'- the poem has a gentle flowing rhythm in keeping with the theme
reply by the author on 28-Feb-2014
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This 3-5-3 'air ' poem powerfully conveys the beautiful sensation of a breeze on our skin 'soft caress'- the poem has a gentle flowing rhythm in keeping with the theme
Comment Written 28-Feb-2014
reply by the author on 28-Feb-2014
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thanks for the review